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vin0211

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wow that was really amazing!

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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Now this is the last one for the day...I just couldn't stop thinking and writing so here it is..Do enjoy...:)

Next day morning...Dadaji calls up Viren...Dadaji: Viren beta, Maanvi ki tabyat ab kaisi hai...???
Viren: Dadaji woh ab theek hai...main aur Virat aaj wapas aa rahe hai...Jeevika kuch dino ke liye yaha rukna chahti hai...
Dadaji: Viren, Maanvi ka ilaaj yaha sahi se chal raha tha...mujhe lagta hai ki usse Chandigarh le ana chahiye...
Viren: lekin dadaji...uss din jo bhi kuch hua...aur badi maa...
Dadaji:Swamini se main baat kar lunga...tum bass Manvi ko le kar yaha aa jao
Viren:ji dadaji...
Viren disconnects the line...and Viren (to all):Dadaji chahte hai ki Maanvi humare saath wapas chale Chandigarh...waha uska ilaaj behtar hoga...
Maanvi:nahi di...main yah...yaha...theek hu...
Jeevika: ab dadaji ne kaha toh sunna toh padega hi...tu saaman pack kar...
Maanvi: par Di...
Jeevika: chal Mannu...
They have their lunch and...get ready to leave...
Virat: Bhai aap log gari se chale jao...mujhe kuch kaam hai...woh khatam kar ke main ghar aa jaunga...(he has his jeep with him)...
Viren:nahi nahi Virat...itna lamba rasta hai...aur main in dono ko lekar I Mean dono Ladkiyo ko lekar...safe nahi hai...samajhne ki koshish kar...lekin agar tera kam zyada important ho toh...
Virat:nahi Bhai chal ta hu main aapke saath...
It's 4 by the watch and they all get ready to leave...as Virat bows down to take Badi Beeji's blessing...Badi beeji:meri chudail ka khayal rakhna...
Virat fakes a smile...
As Virat goes opens the right-front door..
Viren:tu aaram se baeth na...main hoon...
As Virat opens the left hand side front door...Jeevika (quickly gets in):thank you Virat...
Virat:bhabhi woh main...
Jeevika:oh sorry Virat..tumhe yaha...baithna hai...
Virat: nahi bhabhi it's ok...main yaha baith jata hu...
They are in the car...Jeevika Viren exchange a michievious smile...
Maanvi looks at Virat and Virat looks at Maanvi basically an eyelock moment...

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abhilashaprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I read this story completely without stopping. Loved it. Please continue soon and update fast.

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..Zainab..

@..Zainab..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Awesome update soon read all ur parts amazing

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fehmida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

i love ur OS !! please continue and pm me !

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

aww, nice part.. virman together on back.😳.

continue soon

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shona v p

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Gr8!! Plz plz plz will u pm me wen u update?? I'm sending u a buddy request ryt away:)

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mika17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Ur soon an Amazin job continue soon

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

It's all very silent in the car...
Jeevika: tum dono ne kya moun vrat rakh liya hai...Mannu teri tabyat...
Maanvi: DI!!!!! main theek hu...
Viren: waise Virat kal tera recording tha na...?...kaisa tha...
Virat(thinking to himself that Viren had already asked this question earlier): ha bhai acha tha...
Viren:toh Virat tu toh abhi full time singer ban chuka hai...ek proper career hai tera...age kya plan hai...
Virat: woh bhai maine kuch socha nahi...
It's 8 by the watch and its getting all dark...suddenly the car stops...
Viren:ab isse kya ho gaya
Jeevika: Virenji kya hua...??
Maanvi was slleping resting her headon Virat's shoulder\
Virat: bhai...main dekhu...??
Viren: nahi main dekhta hu...tu ruk...warna Maanvi jaag jayegi..
Viren opens the bonnet and there is smoke coming out from the engine...
Viren: goes to Virat...Virat yaha aas paas koi mechanic nahi milega kya...shayad engine mein koi problem hai...
Virat:yaha aas paas toh kuch bhi nazar nahi aa raha...ab kya kare...
Maanvi is awake by this time...
Maanvi:di! kya hua...gari kyun bandh ho gayi/ hum ghar pohoch gaye kya?
Jeevika: nahi Mannu...gari kharab ho gayi hai...
Viren and Virat they are waiting outside the car...
Viren: Virat tu aise chupchup kyu ho gaya...tu Maanvi ki baat se pareshaan kyun ho raha hai...
Virat: nahi bhai...main kisise pareshan nahi hu...Maanvi aur main sirf partner hai...aur ab main ne is baat ko maan liya...
Viren:Virat Vadhera...tu Maanvi Chaudhary se itni jaldi haar maan gaya...ussne tujhe kaha ki woh tujhse pyaar nahi karti aur tune maan bhi liya...tu Vadhera hai...Kadambari chachi tujhe ghar ka hope bulati hai...aur tu aise hope lose kaise karliya bhai mera...???Dekh virat pyaar ek ehsaas hai...aur tujhe Maanvi ko yeh ehsaas karwana padega...
Virat:(to himself) shayad Bhai sahi keh rahe hai...mujhe Maanvi ko ehsaas karwana padega...main itni jaldi haar nahi man sakta...
and suddenly it starts raining...
Jeevika calls Viren inside the car...:Virenji...itni baarish mein hum poori raat gari mein kaise...???
Viren:Virat tu Maanvi ke saath yahi ruk...kyunki Maanvi ke liye baarish mein bheeegna theek nahi hai...main aur Jeevika...jake kuch rehne ka jagah dhoondte hai...(Viren winks at Jeevika)...
Virat:par bhai...baarish mein...
Jeevika:tum Maanvi ka khyal rakhna Virat...
Viren: aggar hum e kuch thikana mila toh hum tujhe call kar denge tu Maanvi ko le kar wahi aa jana...
Virat:ok bhai...
Jeevika and Viren are walking in the rain...
Jeevika:aapne un logo ko jaan bujhke akele kyun chora...
Viren: jeevika kal main ne tumhari aur maanvi ki baat sun liya tha...aur maanvi bhi Virat se utna hi pyaar karta hai jitna Virat usse...bas usse ehsaas hona baki hai...
Jeevika:par waha woh dono akele...
Viren:FM ji...mera bhai tumhari behen ka khayal rakhegi...
they almost walk for half an hour and find a hotel(a good hotel)...
Jeevika:Viren ji...woh dekhiye...aap Virat ko call kar dijiye...
Viren: Ha main Virat ko call karta hu...
Viren calls Virat...
Viren:Virat...tu Maanvi ko le kar Hotel Sunshine mein aaja..hum wahi hai...
Viren goes to the receptionist...We need two rooms...
Receptionist:sorry sir...we can help you with only one room...
Just then another person comes in...
Man:ek room book kijiye please Mr. Joshi ke nam se...jaldi
Receptionist: sorry sir...inhone already ek room book kar liya...aur wahi ek room khali pada tha...aj yaha...Silk Industry ka annual conference chal raha hai toh saare rooms booked hai...Sorry sir...
Man (to Viren): look mujhe yeh room chahiye...
Viren: sir...I am really sorry...humare saath ek patient hai...aur issi wajah se hum aapko room nahi de sakte...
man:(he throws a bundle of notes at Viren)...mujhe...yeh room chahiye...
Viren:main rishwat nahi leta...aap please kahi aur jaiye...he takes the keys and goes with Jeevika to room 608(6th floor)
Over the phone
Viren: Virat baarish ruk gayi tu aa ja maanvi ko saath lekar...hum room 608 mein hai...ek hi room mila...tu aaja jaldi...
Virat:ji bhai...(dissconects the line)...Maanvi chalo...bhai ne bulaya hai...un logo ko koi Hotel mil gaya hai...Hotel sushine...chalo..
Maanvi:chalo...

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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Maanvi and Virat is walking...
Jeevika is pacing up and down the room...she is tensed..
Viren:Jeevika...woh log aa jayenge...
Virat and Maanvi...reach Hotel Sushine...
Virat calls Viren: Bhai hum log pohoch gaye...
Viren:tu room 608 mein aa ja..6th floor...hum wahi hai...
Virat:hm ok bhai...
Virat to the receptionist: Mr.Virat Vadhera...mujhe 608 mein jaana ...hai... Mr Viren Vadhera...
Receptionist:ji Sir...Mr.Viren Vadhera...Room 608...6th floor...have a nice day...Sir
Virat:thank you...
Virat and Maanvi are in the lift together...
they are not talking...Virat is thinking...mujhe Maanvi ko ehsaas dilana hi padega...
Suddenly Virat presses a button...and the lift stops midway...lights go off...
Virat(panting)::Maanvi...main saas nahi le pa raha hu...main main...Maanvi...mujhe kuch ho jayega...
Maanvi(worried):Virat...virat kya ho gaya tumhe...Virat...please...(her eyes are teary...) Virat aankhen kholo Virat please...
Virat: maanvi main saa...saas nahi le pa raha hu...help me Maanvi...Maanvi
Maanvi approches near with the idea of oral breathing...
Virat:hahaahahah!!!darr gayi na chaudhrayin...
Maanvi:yeh sab tum mujhe darane ke liye...
Virat:pagal ho kya...tumhe darane k liye...??nahi...main toh apna acting skills dekh raha tha...aur waise bhi tumhe darr toh andhere se lagta nahi...toh darr kis cheez se laga...(coming close)
Maanvi:tumhe agar sach me kuch ho jata toh...
Virat:toh tumhe kya fark padhta... tumhe toh koi frk nahi padhta...(coming more closer)...ya phir padhta...??
Maanvi:paagal ho tum...
they reach ^th floor...Maanvi just rushes out...angrily...
Virat:arre ruko toh...sorry main toh bas...woh Maanvi...sorry,...
He stands back ans smirks...

Enjoy people...😊😛

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