VirMan SS - Partnership forever UPDATED Pt 5 Pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona_virman

Hey tat was cute!! Do continue


Thanks a ton!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Pooja_Ch

Nice start.. do continue..!👍🏼


Thanks sooo much😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maanvi and viraat were heading outside when maanvi slipped into a puddle and fell into virat's arms...😍*eyelock* They were very close to each other. Virat carefully put her on the ground and took a step forward towards maanvi.

Maanvi felt very shy...she was nearly blushing.😳 She took a step back. They kept taking steps forward and backward until maanvi couldn't anymore as the car was behind her. Her heart started beating very fast. She was Afraid virat could hear it.

Virat was brought back to reality...in his mind- he said:, maanvi ki health zaada important hai.. He moved away. They sat in the car and there was an awkward silence. Virat understood her feelings, so he turned on the radio. The song Raabta (Kehtein Hain khuda ne) was playing.

Kehtein hai khuda ne
Iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya
Har kisi ke liye

Maanvi and viraat thought of how alike they are, from being mastikors to partners (and soon to be life partners :D) They both do what they want but love their family especially their siblings the most <3 They have supported each other...especially virat during maanvi's cancer

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Mano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Their first meeting...they met, a sign of God to show that they are perfect for each other...

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane
Humein kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Maanvi thought in her mind - there is something special about viraat...Haan, Woh mera partner hai, mera best friend Hain..special to hoga na...srif dost hai ya Phir?? Nahi nahi...tu Pagal hogaya hai kya maanvi? Tujhe to ca-cancer hai, she Said while a tear rolled down her cheek...virat ne hamesha subka khush Kiya hai..aur mujhse to usse srif duk aur takleef milaga...Par Iska matlap
ke tujhe virat se pyaar hogaya hai?❤️ Maanvi...tujhe...tujhe virat se pyaar hua hai? Tumhare partner se...Tumhare didi ke Devar se..Tumhare chep se..
Maanvi was currently experiencing a mix of emotions ...happiness, she was in love...sadness, her cancer...confusion...what to do now?

Tu humsafar hai
Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ke waja yahi yahi hai
Marna isse ke liye

Maanvi in her mind - Jab Tak virat mere saat hai, mujhe kisi bhi baat ki fikar nahi hai...

Virat in his mind - maanvi, you are the reason I live...tum meri zindagi ho, mera sabkuch ho...

Virat in his mind - Kaash main tumse apna dil ke baat keh sakta...I love u maanvi...main tumse bohat pyaar karta Hoon...
Maanvi in her mind -Kaash main tumse apni dil ki baat keh Sakti...I love u virat..tumhi mera partner ho...hamesha ka

To be continued...

Thanks guys for all your comments. thx again for reading my Lame writing. Sorry for any errors. Thinking of changing this into an SS. Lol. Well hope u like it...will update soon
Edited by adenah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
loved it a lott
please cont soona nd pm me wne u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice1...!😊
Thnx 4 Pm..😊
Edited by Pooja_Ch - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww loved it!!! Very well written I could picture the whole scene! Thanx for the pm! Waiting for the nxt part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishi12345

loved it a lott

please cont soona nd pm me wne u update


Thanks! Will definitely pm u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pooja_Ch

Nice1...!😊

Thnx 4 Pm..😊


Your welcome😊Glad u liked it...will update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~sweet Ash~

Aww loved it!!! Very well written I could picture the whole scene! Thanx for the pm! Waiting for the nxt part!


Thanks a ton!!! Glad u liked it. Will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it continue soon and pm me plzzz

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