VirMan SS - Partnership forever UPDATED Pt 5 Pg 7

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VirMan SS - Partnership forever

PART 1

VirMan and Jeevika were still in Mumbai as their flight was delayed due to the rain season starting and Maanvi couldn't ride in a car as it would affect her health.

"Mumbai!!! Yes, yaar, Mumbai to bohat lucky hai..Jo bhi maangti hoon vo pura hota hai!" Maanvi excitedly said.

"Chup kar..badmaash! Main ghar waalo ko Bata ke aati hoon" Jeevika said to her naughty little sister.

"Oye, bandariya, zaada khush mat ho kyuki Hama eventually jaana to paraga ...ab apni medicine kha lo.

"Oh no!" Virat said.

"kya hua partner?"Maanvi asked.

"tumhari medicine to katam hogaya hai"

"oh..to chalo na Medicine Lena chalta hai..is bahane Kuch ghoom bhi loonge."

"not a bad idea!!! Main bhabhi se pooch ke aata noon"

"aaah!!!!" Maanvi screamed as she ran and hugged virat.😳

Virat was shocked to see maanvi hug him. maanvi felt awkward after she realized she hugged him all of a sudden. *virman eyelock* Virat understood her feelings and changed the topic.

"Kya hua? tum na chilayan kyu?

"Woh...Maina ek mouse deka sofa ke nche"

"Hahaha...tum mazak kar rahi ho na..ek sherni hota ve tumhe ek Chota se mouse se dar lagta hai...wow, partner, tum bhi kamaal ho"😆

"oye..mujhe zaada bak bak suna ka shok nahi hai..Chup karo!" chep kahi ka!

inside her mind, maanvi kept thinking of virman moments. Virman eye lock

Jeevika comes and their eye lock breaks.

"Bhabhi, maanvi ke medicines katam hogaya hai to hum dono le kar aaja aur thora ghoom bhi langa?"

"Par virat? maanvi thak jaygee!

"Cough Cough" (Devar bhabhi codeword🤣)

Ok..teke par jaldi aana aur mannu, tu apna khyal rakna. Jeevika said worriedly.
Thanks for reading my lame writing 😆 Sorry for any errors.
Do leave your comments. I'll update soon. Please tell me if u want me to let you know when I update. thanks guys!

-----INDEX-----

Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 2
Part 3: Page 4
Part 4: Page 6
Part 5: Page 7
Edited by adenah - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice beginning...am i foreseeing a rain dance ???? plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: EHMMBH_fan1

really nice beginning...am i foreseeing a rain dance ???? plz continue soon 😊


Thanks😃Maybe...*wink wink*😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plzz continue soon luv the beginning
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the hug scene!! Loved it! pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: littles12

Plzz continue soon luv the beginning


Thanks dear😊Will definitely continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~sweet Ash~

Loved the hug scene!! Loved it! pls pm me when u update


Thanks. Glad u liked it. Will pm u when I update. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊Thanks for all the comments...almost finished writing the next part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey tat was cute!! Do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start.. do continue..!👍🏼

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