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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply amazing
loved it very much
plz update soon + p<
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue soon please ! And please proofread your work Because it gets confusing !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry for d late update i was busy some of my faimly function s

part 4

it was 11:55 five minutes left for viren s bday jeevika made a cake for him n she made sure dat viren iz in d washroom till she get everything ready she went to the room n only one minute was left for viren bday .He came out of d washroom n it was all dark sudde3nly there was a glimpse of light from which he can see the world most beautiful woman ,he went near her .

j:happy bday to you happy bday to u happy bday dear viren ji happy bday to u (she kissed his cheeks n ask him to cut d cake

viren:( with teary eyes n hugged her) y did u did all this i dont want to celebrate my bday n not only my bday but till u dont get well i wont do any party nor attend any party n one more thing u made diz cake urself

j:yes

V:but y i told u to rest n u made all this y dont u lsn to me

J:SORRY BUT ITS UR FIRST BDAY AFTER OUR MARRIAGE N I WANT TO DO EVERYTHING MUSELF plzz cut d cake

V:no

J:plzz just for me

V:(he cuts d cake ) i m doing diz only for u cz u r my life n i can say never no to u (feed her wid d cake )i love u

J:(she also feeds him n hugs him )i love u tooo

after dat jeevika gives him a cd as a gift n ask him to see it but viren refuses

V:u told me to cut d cake n i did n now cd

J:plzzz

it was a movie jeevika had made for his bday which covers all d moment dey have spent togather from deir roka to marrige to honeymoon n so onden he puts d cd in d cd player n dey both lay on d bed to watch d cd

J:how it do u like it i ve made diz video so dat after me wenever u misses me u can see diz video

viren immidiately puts his finger on her lips n hugs her tightly n says dat i wont be needing diz cd cz u ll always be wid me tears also came in jeevika eyes but she hides it from him cz she loves himalot n also dont want to leave him den dey both sleep in ach other arms soon jeevika slept but viren was all night seeing herface n remebring dose bitteresr words

virenji i ve cance cance cancer cancer !!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwh :( hope she would be cured and well soon!! Great SS! please continue soon :) 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow very nice update
so emootional
nively written
thx girl
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow loved it
pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awhh, feel so bad for viren! N Jeevika is so cute for doin all tht! please continue soon. Loved du update. thanks for du PM!! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely!
thanks for the pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 5

jeevika has also planned a surprise party for viren n she have not told abt the party to viren as she knew that if she will tell him about the party he will never agree for it .To keep it secret she arranged the party in a hotel

j:(to herself) how i ll take virenji to the party think jeevika think yes i got a idea
she calls viren
V:hello jeevika have u taken ur medicine n yes r u dun wid d lunch

J:yes virenji i ve taken my medicines n i m also done wid d lunch so dont worry k n lsn if i ask u for something will u give me plzzz

V:yes ofcourse how can i say no to my life

jeevika blushes😳 n says : my best friend has invited me for her engagement n its in chandigarh can u plzz take me thre n u also invited

V:but jeevika ur health

J:plzz n nothing will hapeen to me if u r with me plzz plzzz plzzz plzzz

V:k but we ll cum early k

J:k thank you i love you

V:i love u 2 3 4 5 6 >>>>>>>>>>> infinity

Jeevika buishes n cuts phone n make a final call to the hotel manager to check that is eveything ready it was just a small party in which only faimly members were present finally it was evening n viren came back n jeevika was getting ready she was wearing a black net saari

J:how i m looking

V:perfect like always but there is something missing

J:what

he comes behind her n says day now its comlete jeevika turns around n hugs him tightly then they both sit in the car n reach the venue as soon as they entered the faimly members started singing bday songs viren was really angry but jeevika made him calm down with her sweet smile n words after the cake cutting jeevika started coughing n on diz viren shouted

V:i told u but u dont lsn to u r not well

everyone shocked n asked them what has happen to jeevika silent in the hall ......



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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice...pls continue soon...thnx 4 d pm...
Edited by shine123 - 13 years ago

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