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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys i am so much in love with virman...so decided to write an OS on them...plz bear with my writing and do comment on how you felt and whether i should continue or no...


CHARACTERS:
  • Maanvi
  • Virat
  • Jeevika
  • viren(he is not presently in story but will be added later)

Maanvi-she is a very bubbly girl...she is very friendly girl..she is a college student...


JEEVIKA: she is a silent and a very sensitive girl..she is the best friend of maanvi..she studies in same college and class in which maanvi is studying..


VIRAT: He is a very stylish guy and he is the heart throb of all the girls..and he was the senior of the same college in which maanvi and jeevika are studying..

STORY:

PART 1:-

so maanvi and jeevika were in the same college ,same class etc..maanvi would tell each and everything to jeevika..she used to tell her whats going in her life etc etc..she used to tell her every little thing in her life to jeevika..and maanvi used to go to online everyday...and on day after returning from college she as usual went online...and that time she got a friend request from a guy named virat...so first she thought she would chat with him for some time and den add him...so after chatting with him for sometime ,she added him ...and then they used to chat with each other daily...and now maanvi and virat became good friends...and then maanvi used to tell about virat to jeevika and about jeevika to virat and one day maanvi came to know that virat is from the same college in which maanvi is studying now..and after few days virat wanted to meet maanvi so he asked her to come to one place after college...soo manvi shared that virat wanted to meet her and all with jeevika...and after so much discussion maanvi and jeevika decide to go together and meet virat...and maanvi (as she is a very bubbly girl and naughty girl) decides to interchange the identities of maanvi and jeevika and introduce to him...soo finally the day has arrived when maanvi will meet virat...and yaa maanvi and jeevika will interchange their identities and will introduce themselves to virat...

so what will happen now??will virat know about their interchanged identities??


so guys ,tell me should i continue it??how did you ppl like it??i dont know how you ppl will lyk it thats y i wrote a short part...

INDEX:

PART 1:page 1
PART 2:page 9
Edited by shrav_virman - 13 years ago

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lakshm thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oops scary now if virat falls for jeevika den...

ok gud one bfore appreciating writing i really went deep into it he he...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Interesting concept! Continue 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice. continue soon n pm me wen u updte
Edited by lafiza - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice... jeevika and virat to couple nai ban jaega...oh god...
plz update soon yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue soon ...
Something very fresh .
Interchanging of Identities...exciting
Do pen down you creativity and pm it me super soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue pleasee and please pm mee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice! You should definitely continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gud start:) continue wid it... Virat can not fall wid jeevika... Only Manvi suits him... Its a rab ne bana di jodi kind of a thing... I think virat will be shocked aftr meeting maanvi (who is actually jeevika) n fall in love wid her frnd instead ( who is Manvi ) pm me plz:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing!!
Continue soon & plz pm me when u update!!

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