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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 17

Jeevika was still sleeping

Manvi shook Jeevika's body as she was very excited to tell someone about her feelings

Jeevika : Mannu kya hai

Manvi : Dee U were right ' I m in love with him

Jeevika's eyes wide open

Jeevika : R u sure?

Manvi : Yes '

Jeevika : How did u realize?

Manvi : The whole night I kept thinking about him. He was always there in my heart but I didn't realize it.

Jeevika : U haven't sleep yet

Manvi (yarning) : Yes

Jeevika (worried): sleep now

Before Jeevika said that Manvi was already asleep

Jeevika (smiling) : Ye ..ladki bina Thufarn ki tara hai

At Vadera house

Viren(sad) : Virat please don't take this step

Virat : Bhai ' I cant lose this opportunity

Viren: Because of Manvi right ' u planned to go

Virat : No Bhai .. It is nothing concern about her

Viren's mom(sad)(to Viren): Beta 'He is very Ziddi .. he wont listen to you'(crying) (to virat) : you don't want to stay with your mother right

VIrat: NO Mom it is not like that' Plese Mom try to understand me ' And it is just for a year and I will be back

Viren (angry) : you want to go a lot right ? Then go

Virat said everyone bye and left home then he typed a message to his crazy girl and switch his phone off

At chaudary house

Manvi was woken up by the sound of the her phone

Manvi: I hate this phone

She tried reached her hand to the phone which was on the table '.

But she was failing miserably as the phone was too far to be reached '

Just then Jeevika entered

Manvi : Dee .. Can u please pick up my phone ?

Jeevika picked up the phone and saw that Virat had messaged Manvi

Manvi(sleepy voice) : Dee ..Who is that?

Jeevika(smiling) : My devar '

Manvi's eyes widened.. Her heart beats faster ' She got excited

Manvi: Dee gave me

Jeevika : No .. I will read first

Then Jeevika run away with the phone and Manvi chase her

Manvi : Dee .. It is not fair

But Jeevika still continue running

Manvi was tired of chasing Jeevika so she stopped and was angry with Jeevika

Jeevika saw that her sister was angry her so she stopped her teasing

Jeevika : I m sorry Mannu

Manvi didn't talk with her

Jeevika : Mannu .. I was just teasing

Then Jeevika gave Manvi's phone

Manvi(smiling) : It was just a little drama

Jeevika : Oye drama queen ' U think I was scared of your drama?

Manvi (smiling): Of coz '

Jeevika : Ok let's stop drama and read what Virat had sent you

Manvi : I m so exicted '

Then she started reading " Manvi ' I know you are angry with me and I deserve that 'I was so annoying right ? Ya ' I teased you make you angry but you looked beautiful when you are angry '

Please don't be mad this time .. I m just kidding ' My main purpose for sending this message is to inform you that I m leaving to London today at 7:30 pm ' My new job is starting soon that's why I have to go unexpectedly ' This morning only I got my offer letter so bye .. take care ' tell bhabi that I m so sorry I wont be in here on her wedding "

After reading Manvi's eyes filled with tears '.

Jeevika : Mannu '. Don't worry it is only 7 .. we can reached the airport in 30 minutes

Then manvi tried to send message to Virat but she couldn't as his phone was switch off '.

Manvi (with pleading eyes) : Dee lets go to airport

Jeevika : Ya .. Mannu lets go

Then they headed towards airport '.

By the time they reached half way, it was already 7:15

Manvi: Dee .. only 15 minutes left

Jeevika (to driver) : Please drive with a greater speed ' Please Uncleji

Driver: Beta ' the traffic is jammed ' I won't be able to drive more than this ' But I will try

Jeevika : ya .. Please

Manvi hugged and started crying

Jeevika : Mannu chup .. this time is not crying ..you have to face it bravely

Then after 10 minutes they reached airport

Jeevika : Manvi we still have 5 minutes let's find Virat

Without replying to Jeevika , Manvi started to search Virat wildly

The seconds were passing '. Manvi's mind was filling with tension second by second

The loudspeaker announced only one minute left '

Manvi (sobbing): Oh god please let me meet him one more time

She saw a microphone ' She thought it was the only way to reach her voice to Virat

Then she snatched the microphone '

Manvi (At high pitch voice) : Virat !! Can you hear me ' Virat !! Where are you? ' Please come back to me (started crying) Virat ...I m sorry (with louder voice) Virat ! .. I love you

Another microphone announced that the plane had landed off '

Manvi felt that her world had broken down '

She slowly loose her grip so the microphone fell down making a large sound

Manvi couldn't see and hear anything

She was losing her control over her body '

Then she sat down on the floor and started hitting the floor with her hands and crying with a loud noise

Just then Jeevika saw her

Jeevika : Mannu !

She went near Manvi and hugged her

Jeevika : Mannu ' please stop crying

Manvi : Dee 'How dare he left me alone ?

Jeevika : Manvi please behave ' everyone is watching

''''''.

Jeevika : Manvi .. now lets go home

Manvi : No ' I aint going anywhere

Manvi wiped her tears

Manvi : I m going to wait him in here

Jeevika : Manvi ' He will come after a year

Manvi : So what ' I will wait for him

Jeevika: Manvi ' Don't be stupid

Manvi : No

And turned her face away from Jeevika

Jeevika (sobbing) : So now I m nothing to you ' You wont listen to me rite ' u wont care about your Dee

Then Manvi turned towards Jeevika and hugged her

Manvi (sobbing) : I didn't mean that .. I always love you Dee

Jeevika :SO you will have to do what I told you

Manvi nodded '

Then they left airport '

They reached their home

At the gate '

Jeevika : Mannu stop crying if beeji find out ,it will be a big problem

Manvi (wiping her tears): Ok

Edited by Radharaday - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

aww virman separated but i know mannu will get her man back

continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it...😊
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Luvd it...vry nyc update
cnt soon nd thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh kahani main twist
i like it
plzzz continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
virman separated 😭 bt i liked ur update cont soon.
😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..continue soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
where is virat come soon dear ausumn update loved it a lott waiting for virman milan
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Posted: 13 years ago
keep continuing hr doind a goood job
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Posted: 13 years ago
twist bina bhi story kya ho sakta hain...loved it 👍🏼
cont soon & thnx 4 d pm 🤗

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