Something Like Love - Part 16 on Page 90 - Page 55

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Posted: 12 years ago
@Preetz - Aw! Thanks a lot for that lovely comment! I really appreciate that you took out time and read all the parts! :') Also, commented on EACH part. That was really sweet of you, darling! :D Thanks a lot! ILY! ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
just came across ur story...read all the parts!!
just amazing...totally loved it!!
so plz pm me next time u update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dil kya kahe? Hmmm...it says that this story is lovely !!
I loved it to the core.
I read all the parts last night in one go!!!
Great writing, Deepi!
I felt bad about there past!! But I am sure future has a lot in store for them!
Deepika Asrani you HAVE to continue this!!!
Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago
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awesome update
make them confess fast
and do update soon and PM me please
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 13

Manvi and Jeevika were almost ready for the party. Manvi had worn a violet colour short one piece dress and high heeled pumps to go with and had done a neat side ponytail. While Jeevika was wearing a dark blue one piece dress and black coloured tip toes to go with and her long silky hair hung over her shoulders. Jeevika whistled looking at Manvi.
"Someone's looking smoking hot!"
"And you're looking sexy, Jeevs! Viren toh gaya!" She winked at her.
"Oh! Stop it you!"

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Viren was standing in front of the mirror and applying cologne. He wore a purple shirt with black trousers. Shirt tucked in neatly, and first 3 buttons open. He looked absolutely hot. Any girl would go head over heels for him.
Virat on the other hand had worn a white shirt with black trousers. Shirt out with first two buttons open. He wore his watch,kept the phone in his pocket,grabbed the car keys and rushed out of the room and directed to Viren's.
"Bhai! I'm leaving. I have to go and pick, Aanch. You reach soon. Okay?" He said standing at the entrance of the room.
"Yea! Sure. Bye!" Viren replied while he was busy searching for his sock. Virat rushed from there.

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Everyone reached mixx except for Virat and Aanchal.
All the three were seated on the semi-circlular sofa which had a rectangle table in front of it. Jeevika and Viren sat on either sides of Manvi.
" How long is Mr. Virat going to take? He's gone to pick her up only na? Kahin car main shuru toh nai ho gae na?" Manvi said laughing loudly. Viren and Jeevika started laughing too.
"You excited to see Aanchal or Virat?" Jeevika teased her.
"Why would she be excited to see Virat? They both keep fighting like enemies." He said giggling.
"But, Manvi toh..." Manvi cut her in between.
"I toh hate him more than an enemy. That's what she wanted to say.. Right Jeevika?" she glared at Jeevika.
"She stole my words!" She tried controlling her laugh.
"Drinks, ladies?"
"I'll have tequila." Jeevika said.
"I'll have vodka!" Manvi said.
"You'll drink?" Viren asked in shock.
"Occasionally." They said together.
"Uh.. Alright! You'll won't get high no?"
"Not at all!" Manvi winked at him.
"You don't drink?" J asked curiously.
"I do! Like at least once in a month!"
Just then Virat and Aanchal came to them. Manvi immediately checked her from top to bottom. 😆 She had worn a 4 inch high heel. A mini skirt and top. Her hair were of medium length and she had side fringes. She wasn't thin. She had a bit of fat though.
"Aanchal, that's Jeevika,bandariya and you know bhai."
"What's your name bandariya?" she asked laughing. Manvi looked at Virat with anger.
"My name is Manvi, Manvi Chaudry."
"Oh! Virat keeps telling me about your fights!"
Manvi was in a 'Aw!' but she didn't show it on her face. She felt happy that Virat spoke about her to his GF. He actually gave her importance. Well, at least little for that matter. Everyone greeted each other and hit the dance floor with drinks in their hands.
The music stopped suddenly. Everyone looked around and a random guy came and stood at the centre of the dance floor. The spotlight was on him. He went to the crowd.. And held a girls hand.. Went on his knees and proposed to her. The girl had tears in her eyes and just whispered a yes. They had a hug and everyone just looked at them in an 'Aw!'
The DJ put on a love song for them. And the rest of the couples joined them. Viren asked Jeevika for a dance. They were on the dance floor, Viren put his hand around her waist while she slid her hand around his neck. They both were just lost in each others eyes. While Virat and Aanchal were also dancing and they were so close that their nose's were touching each other's. Manvi was at the bar and kept having shots of vodka looking at Virat and Aanchal. After sometime Jeevika noticed Manvi. She excused herself and went to the bar. Manvi was drunk and silent tears rolled down her cheeks. Jeevika had never seen Manvi that way. Jeevika took her to the wash room and helped her wash her face as the Kajal was smudged. Then, they went and sat on the sofa. Manvi kept telling Jeevika how Virat hadn't even noticed her. Didn't compliment her or fought with her. Jeevika was trying to keep Manvi calm. Viren came there with two drinks for Jeevika and himself. He knew about Manvi's condition. After sometime Manvi kept quiet and feel asleep and was murmuring. Viren and Jeevika were sipping their drinks.
"It tastes weird. What is it?" asked Jeevika drinking.
"I have no idea! I'm trying it for the first time too!"
"What the hell? I hope it doesn't have anything wrong in it!" She said laughing loudly.
"I think something is wrong in it! And has affected her already." He whispered.
"I can't hear you! Did you say something?" She said screaming loudly.
Oh God! Both are drunk. I wonder what's gonna happen, Viren thought. Jeevika gulped her drink in one go and kept the glass on the table and stood up. Manvi who was lying on Jeevika's shoulder fell on the sofa with a thud and she got up with a jerk. Virat and Aanchal came to them.
"I got to leave guys! There is an emergency." Aanchal said.
"Should I call the ambulance?" asked Jeevika giggling. Manvi started laughing loudly too as if she had cracked some hilarious joke. All if them gave the two a stern look. Aanchal gave a hug to all of them. Manvi literally squeezed Aanchal. She just left in a hurry.
"Virattt! Let's go to the beachhh!" Jeevika said in a child-like voice.
"Haaan! Mum-mum main kheli kheli karenge!" Manvi said dragging Virat out.
"Mujhe godi main lo na! Please?" She said making a puppy dog face to Viren. Viren just picked her up in his arms and walked out. Jeevika had kept her hands around his neck. She was looking at his arm.
"Tumhare arms bahut strong hai! Dole sholee!" She said winking at him. "Dhai gram ka haath hai kya?" she looked at him innocently.
"Gram?" Viren repeated and started laughing. She actually meant kilo. He made her sit in the front seat and then went and sat on the driver's seat and headed towards the beach. Virat and Manvi were in Virat's car as he had his car and Viren had his. Jeevika's car was left there.

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All the four walked hand in hand as per Manvi's order. 😆 While Manvi and Jeevika sang or rather screamed the song "Yeh dosti hum nai chodenge!" and swayed their hands back and forth till they reached the sea. Virat and Viren could do nothing but bear their craziness. They reached the sea. Jeevika started making a castle while Manvi went and played with the water. Virat sat down exhausted but Viren had to go with Manvi. They both were splashing water on each other and having fun. Viren was actually enjoying it so he dragged Virat and Jeevika too. All the four were having fun playing water.
Viren was running behind Jeevika to splash water. Viren tripped and fell on Jeevika because of which Jeevika lost her balance and fell and they both rolled and rolled and rolled. Viren was on top of Jeevika.. They both kept looking at each other. Viren looked at her pink lips, he went close her lips,she closed her eyes,Viren just kissed her without wasting another second. Jeevika kissed him back too! After sometime Viren broke the kiss and realised what he had done. He moved away and helped her up.
"Haw! Kissy ki humne!" Jeevika said laughing and she ran away.

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I hoped you'll liked the update. :) My next update will be after 1st march as I have exams the whole month.
Edited by -Deeps- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will edit my comment tmr as I am going to dinner now! 😛
So, wait!

*edit*

Awesome update!!!

Ahhh! I am so in love with this story!!

Jeevs is such a cute little doll! 😃

March 1?? 😔
I will wait! 😛


Edited by niCeline - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally, Dil kya kahe is updated, I loved it from top to bottom!😉

Shirt tucked in neatly, and first 3 buttons open. He looked absolutely hot. Any girl would go head over heels for him.
Haha, oh god, even i drool, but Deeps tacker's reserved for you, oh god. remember his Seductive lips? 😉

The part where Jeevika got drunk and started behaving as a child, OMG!
It was so funny, and Manvi drinking looking at both of them, I could imagine. SO WELl!

And awww, the last kiss, kisshy ki unhonee 😳

1 March? Itna acha update deke you cannot do this to mee 😕

I loved this update like anything, and i look forward to it eagerllyyy

Edited by little.angel56 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can this be anymore cuter?😳

Deepi this was just perfect!!

I can clearly imagine VirIka in those costumes!! How hot, huh!

So Manvi is jealous!

Jeevika was about to spill the beans!?!? How careless of her!😆

JeeMan drink?😲 No wait occasionally!🤣 And they handle it!

The ambulance joke was so hilarious!!!🤣

Beach? Are you kidding me? How on earth did the W Bros accept to take them there in this state?😉

"Mujhe godi main lo, please?" How adorable!☺️

Dhai gram ka haath? 😆

What timings Viren! Good job dude👍🏼

"Haw! Kissy ki humne!" 😳 This line was simply too cute!!

1st of March? Don't do this to me! I can't wait!😭

This is my favourite story!!🤗

Iloveyou, Deeps!


Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was fabulous
Aaw they both got drunk
Feeling bad for maanvi virat didn't notice her
How cute is jeevika loved the last dialogue
Thanks for the pm plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
deeps it was freaking amazing update...!!!!

ahhh jeevika was drunk hahaha...!!!
i loved her craziness...😃

the best part was the kiss😳

and jeevs said kissy ki humne...how cuteee😳

this was really superb part dear..👏
thanxfor the pm...😊

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