FF Turning Tables [Virika] Ch 6 - Pg 24 - Page 13

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

thnks for the pm

loved the convo between dr manan n jeevika

make virika come back together plzzz

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome update superb

Originally posted by: kanishkakaran

Awww!!! Thankk You Soo Much!!! For D Updatee!!! Awesummm Updateee!!!!! 😊 Loveee Youuu For thisss!!! Wanttt D Nextt Updateee Soon!!!! Though Takee Ur timeee!!!😳

Originally posted by: Thapanee

Thank u for the pm. Glad u updated i hv to say ur writing is amazing 😊 cant wait to know how jeevika n viren were separated and also would like to see them back together 😉 love the convo between jeevika n dr. manan.

Originally posted by: karan-krystle

amazing!! i just love the way u write!:D

thanksfor the pm :)

cont soon!

Originally posted by: shine123

nice update...hope virika r together soon...thnx 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: -Tinu-

Okay... so first of all the update was Amazing...👏 You have written it very well... and it's so easy to imagine all the scenes taking place... 😊 Absolutely loved the family moments... specially the moments between Viren and Vanshika... we hardly get any scenes with them... 🤔.. The father- daughter interactions are so adorable to imagine 😳... Would love it if we could see Viren like that in the future... Of course that is if the CV's don't decide a abortion or miscarriage track! Really liked the change in Swamini... and I'm glad she started to understand that Viren can take decisions for himself... I really loved this dialogue...

"My priorities have changed, but Badi Ma, you'll be in my heart always. I'm sorry."

It was really sweet of Viren to say this...😳

Thank you lol, long comment Tina. I enjoyed writing it, I like all the smaller little bonds, they really make the story for me personally.

Poor Shlok... Virat uski band baaja raha hain 😆 Couldn't stop laughing at these dialogue's in this scene...

Lol, and I'm convinced I can't do comedy. I really can't but thanks for the compliments :)

"Didn't I tell you I could do the impossible. Our Anarkali and Salim."

Anarkali and Salim?? 😲 Lol... 😆 Seriously where do you come up with such things??? 😆

Er I think I watched Mughal-E-Azam for the first time whilst writing this. Yeah, makes no sense haha :P I feel the need to re-write this now :L

"Kid? Bhai, he's virtually a man!"

Lmao @ the virtually a man! 😆

"So? How old are you and how old is he? Besides, Anarkali and Salim? No way am I ever letting any guy near my Scout, isn't that right little miss grey eyes?"

Ohh possesive Daddy! Lol Boys better watch out in the future... If you want a green signal you better impress the daddy! 😆

"Yeah, just wait until the teenage years and 'Daddy, I hate you! I wanted fuchsia, not rosy pink.' All the drama, the tears, the tantrums, will be even worse as she'll be daddy's little spoilt princess."

Aww she already is Daddy's little princess... 😉 Can so imagine Rheya Like this 😆

"I want her to have everything I never had. All the love and attention Virat and I never received from Dad, I want to give her that and a whole lot more. Is that really so wrong?"

Awwh... Now here it a father who would do anything for his daughter... Give her the love he never received... He doesn't want her to miss out on what he has... 😳

Deffo need to re-write it lol; I dunno, every time I re-read things, I feel like a complete bimbo. Anyway I'm glad you could follow this nonsense :L

The conversation between Rajeev and Jeevika was Surprising as well as great to see...😊 and he's married???.. Awhh Sooo Happy for him!! 😆😳... And Jeevika doesn't love Viren?😭 ... Why??? ... and please don't say it's complicated 😆. Hope Everything is Fine with Rheya!

It's... complicated. Oh yeah, I went there...

This Jia girl doesn't seem to be that bad... she seems very understanding... I think her and jeevika would get along well if they ever met 😆!

Exactly my plan! Does everyone have to be an evil conniving so and so?

Please continue soon with this... Really curious to know why they separated...

Ps- One question... May I know What Idea I gave you... I have been making my brain think since ages but no answer 😆!

I'll let you figure it out :L

Tina

Sorry for the mediocre response but you've pretty much said it all. Thank you for the comment, and please please continue with your fic. I love that peice :)

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Lovely Update! Jeevika's thoughts are starting to scare me, though. Very beautifully written. Continue soon, and please PM me.

Originally posted by: BhavyaRedy

plssscontinue it soon... i want to know what happened between viren and jeevika

Originally posted by: sadfacegirl123

Hi, my name's Bee and I'm a silent reader, but I absolutley fell in love with this story. Please continue soon, please :)