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Hey there :)
I am a silent reader of the forum and the amazing EHMMBH's SS and OS. But I've decided the come out of my dormant state and start posting replies and simultaneously, the writer in me is awake now. So I'm writing this SS or FF. Havent really decided the length as yet. So I'll start now. I hope you all like. Please comment!
Prologue
Manvi tried her best to keep her eyes open but it wasnt an easy task. Who thought that by the end of it, Manvi Chaudhry wouldn't be able to keep her eyes open. Moreover, the constant insistent beeping of the machines wasnt helping either. They were giving her a constant headache. But she never stopped trying, trying to get one last look at her Di, her Jeevika Di. She didn't have a choice. She'd promised her sister that she wouldn't give up. She'd promised Virat that she wouldn't give up but how could she hold on? She could hardly see anything, hardly feel anything except for the feel of her sister's hand in hers. Her warm hand in her frail cold one. And right now, that was the only thing that prompted her to open her eyes one last time and smile at her Di, her Jiju and her Virat before giving in to the darkness that fought to envelop her.
I know it's short, but the parts will be longer.
Dont forget to comment :)
Either positive or negative, all feedback is welcome.
Index
Part 1 - Page 3
Part 2 - Page 5
Part 3 - Page 7
Part 4 - Page 9
Part 5 - Page 11
I am a silent reader of the forum and the amazing EHMMBH's SS and OS. But I've decided the come out of my dormant state and start posting replies and simultaneously, the writer in me is awake now. So I'm writing this SS or FF. Havent really decided the length as yet. So I'll start now. I hope you all like. Please comment!
Prologue
Manvi tried her best to keep her eyes open but it wasnt an easy task. Who thought that by the end of it, Manvi Chaudhry wouldn't be able to keep her eyes open. Moreover, the constant insistent beeping of the machines wasnt helping either. They were giving her a constant headache. But she never stopped trying, trying to get one last look at her Di, her Jeevika Di. She didn't have a choice. She'd promised her sister that she wouldn't give up. She'd promised Virat that she wouldn't give up but how could she hold on? She could hardly see anything, hardly feel anything except for the feel of her sister's hand in hers. Her warm hand in her frail cold one. And right now, that was the only thing that prompted her to open her eyes one last time and smile at her Di, her Jiju and her Virat before giving in to the darkness that fought to envelop her.
I know it's short, but the parts will be longer.
Dont forget to comment :)
Either positive or negative, all feedback is welcome.
Index
Part 1 - Page 3
Part 2 - Page 5
Part 3 - Page 7
Part 4 - Page 9
Part 5 - Page 11
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
