JEEMAN OS: we are always united!!! - Page 2

Siilly me it took a second read to realise that you have dedicated it to me...now dear you making me all corny and sappy...already i have tears reading it and i am thinking of the last image that you have put Mannu in Jeevika's lap and you dedicate it to me!!!!!

Originally posted by: jasminedayal

Awesome!!

Maanvi's part is really heart wrenching...

Its one of my favourite Jeeman OS's i have ever read till now!!

Well done... :)
I would love to read more from you... :)

Originally posted by: uniquebluerose

Siilly me it took a second read to realise that you have dedicated it to me...now dear you making me all corny and sappy...already i have tears reading it and i am thinking of the last image that you have put Mannu in Jeevika's lap and you dedicate it to me!!!!!

Once again sorry to spam but have to say it was superb just loved!!!!

Jessie, firstly sorry for reading it so late. The JeeMan bond was so beautifully penned, how Manvi was more concern about Jeevika rather than her cancer and how Jeevika's instinct made her find her Mannu. Loved the scene when Manvi slept on Jeevika's lap. Totally loved it yaar😊

Originally posted by: rev4eva

Jessie, firstly sorry for reading it so late. The JeeMan bond was so beautifully penned, how Manvi was more concern about Jeevika rather than her cancer and how Jeevika's instinct made her find her Mannu. Loved the scene when Manvi slept on Jeevika's lap. Totally loved it yaar😊

Hey I just read it! I am so sorry I did not notice this OS before. Thank-you so much for telling me about it. The os was realllyy sweet, I love how you described the emotions of both Manvi and Jeevika. Beautiful ending. Thank-you for this writing this!

Wait maybe I don't know complete meaning of OS, ending was beautiful but I was expecting more, plz either cont. It as a story or create another. U write so nice!!!