The breakup of Frndship!(VirManSS)Epi2 Prt4 Pg18 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
nice part
waiting for full episode😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Hey you didn't PM me yaar...I loved the update
But why such a short one...?
Anyway pls update soon and PM me next time

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am sorry guys. I couldn't PM you all for the previous update. I had to rush somewhere.


Episode 1


Part 3

He looked at her seeing form once and then quietly moved outside the room locking it.

"Bua" he exclaimed patiently, "Do you want to have talk with me?"

Swamini looked at him impatiently and astonished all at the same time. 'He has guts to ask me this!' she thought.

"What do you think you are doing? Have you decided to do everything against our wishes? What is it Viraat? You took such a big decision and not at all bothered to tell us even once prior taking this step!" Swamini bursted into infinite anger.

"What wrong have I done to buy this anger of yours? I have married her. She is my lawfully wedded wife. And what ever I did I have no regrets." He answered with same fury.

"And you think this is correct? This is what you want to say. What about Maya? What was her mistake?" Swamini said getting more irritated and agitated.

"Maya?" he guffawed. He couldn't believe that out of al people she would name Maya. What on earth made her to think about that artificial girl? He thought.

Swamini looked at him in disbelief.

"What on earth makes you laugh? It's not funny Viraat. You just spoiled life of a girl." She said with astonishment.

"I am laughing on a JOKE you just cracked. I never knew that you knew this art." He said smiling, still couldn't hold his laugher.

"Joke? Viraat... I am asking you something" she again tried. " why did you do this to Maya?"

"'Bua' what I have to do with that girl? Who is she to me? NO ONE. Why do you think about her? Think about Maanvi. She is ill. Not good yet. She needs sleep and so do I and so do all of you. We'll talk tomorrow. Good night." He said and went to his room without satisfying their queries.

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Okay. That's it for now. Will be updating next part in few hours. Or may be in evening.

Love you guys. And a big Thank-you for the lovely comments.

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For PMs Add Me :

Love. Priya



Edited by Fantasies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
hey thanks for the pm
And loved this part. Looking forward to the next part so update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Priya, it was awesome... Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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of course great work again waiting for next update
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Episode 1


Part 4


Viraat came back to his room. He didn't have any bad thought about MAYA. In fact he liked the fact that Maya left him, for if it was not because of her, he would have never have fallen for Maanvi and known that at the same time. And this silly girl 'h looked at hr sling peacefully' doesn't even confess her love. Not yet. Erasing his sleep, she her self is sleeping peacefully. He smirked.

He went down close to her. Very close in fact. Only inches apart. When she changed her position. He smiled, but tension was building in him slowly. He was now loosing his control over his feelings and desire. His throat went dry and he could himself feel him getting hardened. How could girl sleeping peacefully arouse him so hard? Girls tempt guys, seduce them and here he was already seduced and tempted. She didn't had to do anything. As he was already blown off!

A girl who looked so annoying initially took his heart away making hi such a jerk to think of her like that.

He slowly brought her to face him. She had her eyes still closed. Looked like she was in her deepest slumber. Though he didn't want to disturb her but his urge to feel her was much stronger in comparison.

He bent down and trailed her skin of neck with kisses. He lost control. Maanvi woke up with a sudden. Looked at him wide eyed. Her cheeks turned crimson in embarrassment and lashes cascaded her eyes due to shyness.

He noticed that she woke up. He stopped for a while and looked at her. Then looked at her slightly parted lips. The parted lips due to sudden surprise of his actions.

He removed the tresses lingering on her soft cheeks by his finger, and then slowly bent down until their lips touched. At this sudden contact, she stiffened a little and then moved back responding to the stimuli. Flabbergasted with a sudden action of his she touched her lips with her fingers. The touch burned her. She looked at Viraat in surprise.

Responding to this he looked at her with more love and warmth.

"Viraat" escaped from her lips when she saw him close to her again, but this time he shushed her keeping his index finger on her soft petal-like lips. And then said in a husky voice, "its okay' we are married." And smiled.

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So that's it for today.

Will write next part tomorrow.

Love you guys.

I am so happy that you are liking my writing.

It feels great.

Love. Priya

Edited by Fantasies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Priya, I want the next part fast... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey sweetie
I really liked the whole part and r u cont the next part today . Coz I really want to read more. Cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww loved it.. please continue soon...

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