The breakup of Frndship!(VirManSS)Epi2 Prt4 Pg18

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Hi! I am Priya. I am big big fan of Viraat-Maanvi Jodi. I was so attracted towards them that i just couldn't stop my self from writing a short story. Hope you'll like it..




The Breakup of Friendship!


Prologue



"Atlast!" sighed Maya while sitting in a empty room all ready to be married to her Crush and now an Obsession , Viraat.



The atmosphere was filled with a dense air. A density probably of some pessimism. However it was cascaded with hullabaloo going inside the house. The different noises and voices could be heard. Whole house was in superfluous excitement.



How happy Maya herself was in her victory that she could not describe. Now was she getting her biggest award. She was sure that everything would go perfect as always had with her.



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"Viraat.. how could you do this to me Viraat!"Maya said in shock n despair. She couldn't fathom, how could she ever loose. And loose to this Low Class girl, Maanvi!



Viraat just turned his face away from her very sight. He took Maanvi's, her bride's hand in his and shocking everybody went inside his room without any word.



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"Its the end. I break my friendship with you Viraat." she said in a cracked voice and went to the balcony.



For sometime Viraat stood there looking in the direction she went, then slowly sad down on couch and mumbled to himself, " You can never break our friendship..." saying this he again looked towards the balcony door.



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Okay, so that's it guys.

Do tell me how you found it. Iff in case you liked it, I'll continue. Otherwise i'll windup!

Your comments are welcome.

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Love. Priya


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Index


Episode 1

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Episode 2

Part1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4 (Epilogue)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aftr a virmaniculos episode and awesome prologue by u... Loved it plz continue...:)))))
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it was ausumn
please pm me wen u write next
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love it dear. pm me when you update
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is it true priya wt u hv written?
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Awesome prologue :D
Do continue and plz pm me when u update...
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cont soon dear...

waiting for the update...

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Loved the prologue!! Please pm me.😊
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Episode 1

Part 1

He went to the balcony. Looked at her petite form looking towards the long lost scenery. He swirled her in his arms.

"You can never break our friendship." He said in his husky voice.

She slightly wriggled in his arms and then adjusted. A smile spread on her face as she kept her head on his shoulders. Solace they call it! She turned into him and then raised her eyes to him and a smile spread on his face seeing her innocence. Innocence was what actually made a mark on him of her.

"Partner." She called to him.

He looked at her with peaceful smile.

"Everyone is angry with us. Na?" she said while lines of tension became visible on her forehead.

"Why? Do you think so? What we did was right." Viraat said embracing her in his protective castle.

"But she loves you." She said in a soft tone.

"And you..?" he asked.

She didn't say anything.

He scooped her in his arms and said worriedly, "You should sleep and not worry about others. Its not good for you health"

Saying this he laid her down on their bed.

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Part1 ends not the episode.😉

I love you guys for liking my SS so much. I am bombarded with PMs from friends and silent readers.

A big big THANKYOU!🤗

Please Press LIKE button!

And comments/critics are Welcome.😆

Love. Priya

Edited by Fantasies - 13 years ago

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