The breakup of Frndship!(VirManSS)Epi2 Prt4 Pg18 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
tht was great soo adorable plz pm me next time u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely part priya who knew swamini would be really generous and lovable towards virat including dadaji shocked and please make the next one longer and more virman scenes please
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update hun! loved how manvi was so super shy and viren was almost smug with being right! But most of all, I loved the support and attitude from bua and dadaji... I hope something like that happens in reality too!!!
thanks for the PM and looking forward to the next one!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved this entry!!! <3 please post more updates asap!!! thanks for the update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was too cute...
Loved it n m waiting fir the next art
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Posted: 13 years ago
read ur all parts...just TREMONDUS!!!!!!!!!!
how do u just manage to update suach lovely stories??
well done again pl pm me when u upate
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Posted: 13 years ago
ithanks was cute n tension free part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Episode 2

Part 4 cum Epilogue!

After a talk with Dadaji and Swamini bua Viraat returned to his room with a serious face- like he was deep in thought. Maanvi on other hand was scared as to what would elders had to say. It wasn't her mistake. He only took her to mandir and without a word she did what he told her. It was his mistake but she knew that whatever it may be she would never allow to put blame on him not even she her self. She didn't know why she was being protective about him. But why not? He was her husband. Her friend above all!

She looked at him wide eyed. She was scared to even ask him about his conversation with Dadaji and Swamini bua. While she collected the courage to ask him, Swamini bua appeared on the door which took the hell out of her. She knew that now she would surely shower curses and would scold her.

But proving her wrong she came in smiling handing her the red velvet box. She indicated with her eyes to open it and have a look. Maanvi resultantly took the box from Swamini bua's hand and looked at her husband- when she got his approval by a slight nod she slowly opened it. She looked at the jewelry in front of her. She was admiring its beauty.

She again looked at Swamini bua questionably.

"How is it? Did you like it?" Swamini asked with a warm smile.

"Its beautiful buaji. But mai iska kya karu?" Maanvi asked little scared.

"Kya karu matlab. Maanvi ye tumhare liye hai.. I mean Viraat ki Patni k liye jo kit um ho." She said smiling.

"Par buaji mai ye kaise.. mera matlab hai…" Maanvi couldn't complete.

"I know that all this doesn't mean to you anything. I know you do not want all this but Maanvi now you are bahu of this house. And so its our duty to give you what you deserve. Aur vaise bhi maine kisi se promise kiya tha.." Swamini said while looking at Viraat as she hugged Maanvi and then left the room while asking them to come to dining table on time.

"ye sab…" Maanvi looked at Viraat.

"jab mai chota that oh ek din Bua apni jwellery nikal ke kuch dekh rahi thi… mujhe ye haar achha laga tha… mai ladka that toh mujhe mill nahi sakta tha toh bua ne promise kiya tha k vo ye haar meri wife ko dengi. Vo apne promise kabhi nahi bhoolti." He said smiling while remembering his childhood memories.

Maanvi smiled too and hugged him and cuddled more into his arms as he softly kissed her on her cheek.

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The phone rang. Dabbu picked up the phone. After hearing to the other person on line for about a minute in serious expression he burst-out in happiness.

"Beeji-Beeji… Beeji-Beeji!" he shrieked in excitement.

While hearing him Badi Beeji and Biji and his mother and father came out scolding him, "What is it? While are you shouting in this dead of night. Its midnight and you…" his father scolded him but was cut off.

"papaji mai mama bann gaya… Maanvi didi gave birth to a baby boy just hr ago. Viren jiju ka call aaya tha." He said all in excitement.

Everyone's face lit but soon to be dulled by thinking about past. Almost one year past without choudhary's meeting their most naughty daughter Maanvi.


they were upset by her abrupt decision of marrying Viraat. thought Biji was hapy initially that now both the sisters would always remain close to each other. But this fact also made it bit difficult for Biji to face Vadhera's in guilt.

Disturbing Biji's thoughts the phone rang again.

This time Dabbu's father picked up the phone.

"Hello… ji.. namastey behanji… ji ji abhi Viren ji ka cal aaya tha.. ji… aapko bhi Mubarak …. Ji… jaise aap chhengi vaise hi hoga." Saying this he disconnected the phone.

"kiska phone tha?" Biji inquired.

"Swamini ji ka. Keh rahi thi ke hum sab kal hi vaha k liye nikle… invite kiya haiMaanvi k Maa banne ki khushi mein.." He concluded.

Hearing this Biji smiled as well as other in content.

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Maanvi's becoming mother had become the moment to forgetting the previous tussles and complaints. Everyone blessed the mother and child with love. It seemed like heaven was there on earth for Maanvi today.

Viraat couldn't be happier. He was delighted to see his love, his wife happy. Everything seemed perfect and the fact was perfect-ness came to retain.

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The End – Or a new beginning.

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I am winding it up now.

Thanks for liking this SS which was an experiment with Romance.

I am glad that u all gave me that support so that i could continue it and didn't once bashed me.

I love you al so much for supporting me. and Encouraging me so much!

Press hit the like button and do leave some comments.

Love.Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha202

Lovely part Priya! My fave part has to be when Virat gives Manvi those sly, knowing smiles and that wink! Loved it.



I am so happy that u enjoyed the Part!😛


Originally posted by: isha.raj_98

aww i cant wait n of course great work n do pm me!




Oye! thnx for the appreciation!😃


Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Wow... Priya nyc part and m more happy aftr reading dat note... Dat nxt part will be postd soon...lol



And i am so happy after reading ur comment!😊


Originally posted by: preethis

wowww priyaaa awesome part... really loved it but it was very short... super cute update...




Aww thnx fo much Preethi. I love ur comments!😃


Originally posted by: geetsweet

heey nice ss dear...

awesome ...
add me in...



aww... Thnku so much. will add u..😃


Originally posted by: ...vibha...

nice part
loved starting part



Thanku...

Originally posted by: Khushi15

Nyc part..!!

Liked it.!!



Thnx so much for the comment!

Originally posted by: khusam

wel nice updt dear pm me wen u do nxt



Thnx.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

dear...
4 PMing me dear.😊...
4 ur
updates..⭐️..
ur updates r really &
...😃
...
just dear..😃.
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics




Thnx for the wonderful comment @Tama.

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