VirMan FF - Game of destiny - chap 5 UD 29/04 pg16

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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

😊ok nly virat nd manvi!!!...its awesome nw i don have 2 skip thru virika parts nd otr stuff that r not related 2 virman!!!btw it was an awesome post continue writin it👏...nd pls pm me wn u update it...😊..will be waitin fr the update

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

lol! that was a ute and funny update pm me!

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Finally, the update is here... The wait was worthwhile and it was a awesome update. Their dialogues were superb...

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aamina

@-aamina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

First and foremost CONGRATULATIONS on becoming an IF ROCKER!!!!

It's party tym lol but no party without the trio. lmao

Omg haven't chatted wiv u gor so long!!! i'm so sorry for being so late in reading your updates, but kasam i've been really busy. I came on IF today after so long and I knew the first thing I had to do was read my HL's FF.

K 'WOW' i'm really impressed with the last two chapters I have read👏 I just love the dialogues beetween them both 🤣. where the hell do you get these lines from?! lol all the lines are awesome and sound so real and something that they both would actually come out with in the show. I really like viraat calling maanvi a drama queen haha, the name is so appropriate. lol he even called her jassi ki rani. hahah seriously both chapters are so well written. I'm really proud of you hun!! keep writing more, coz you're really good at it. Okay hun I think i best shut up coz i can go on for ever an ever. aww really miss our krazy chats.

enyway love you loads hun 🤗and hope to chat to u soon.

mwah

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: __Shivani__
Aesem update dear...thanks fr the pm
Also pm me the next time

Aww thanx for the sweet somments sure will PM u wen I do update

Originally posted by: guluna
woowww it was amazing i enjoyed every bit of it great work n thank u for pm

Ur welcum hun and thank you

Originally posted by: miss_precious
amazing work...please pm me when u update... love virman

Thanx and I sure will I also love Virman lol J

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52
Jaff this was too good.. Loved it yaar.. Specially his action of pointng finger dat u want me 2 carry your bag... And how he melts... Awesome... Brilliant... Fab...!!

Aww thanx shiv im glad u liked it it makes me happy to read ur sweet comments

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: khusam
Amazng updt dear realy nice loved it.

Thank you J im glad you did

Originally posted by: niha12345
ausumn piece after a long time
please pm me wen u cont next

I know its been quite long im a bit lazy

Will sure pm you wen I update

Originally posted by: VirmanxFan01
Awsome :D

thanx :)

Originally posted by: hs7071
Continue soon
I loved the typical VirMan nok jhoks uff chep gave bhadariya a tight competition in teasing a karara jawaab
Continue this week not after 5 mnths
And please pm me when u do

Will try continuing asap but by now u mustve known my soon isn't very soon

and thanx for the sweet comments much appreciated

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
Awww,love u Jafe for updating and for the dedication!!

It was an amazing update.Chep-Bandariya together,in a deep forest! Virat was right,dat's gonna be hell of a night for him.

Plz continue soon.

Love you two hun xxx and thanx you lol chep and bandariya in a forest lol

Originally posted by: DaMiniii
Awesome!! Thanks for the pm and please do pm me.

Thanx and I sure will

Originally posted by: Khushi15
Amazing..!!

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: preethis
wowww loved it... waiting for more...

Thank you and u might need to wait a little more

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Nivren123
Another wonderful update thanks for the PM. 😊

thanx fiza im glad u still read my work

Originally posted by: misaki
😊ok nly virat nd manvi!!!...its awesome nw i don have 2 skip thru virika parts nd otr stuff that r not related 2 virman!!!btw it was an awesome post continue writin it👏...nd pls pm me wn u update it...😊..will be waitin fr the update

a virman ff so everyone else is excluded lol thanx and i will continue wen i can but than might be ages away

Originally posted by: isha.raj_98
lol! that was a ute and funny update pm me!

thanx and sure will if ur in my BL

Originally posted by: prabhxvirat
nyc as well as good

thanx :)

Originally posted by: rev4eva
Finally, the update is here... The wait was worthwhile and it was a awesome update. Their dialogues were superb...

aww ur to sweet love ya thanx

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: aamina1010
First and foremost CONGRATULATIONS on becoming an IF ROCKER!!!!
It's party tym lol but no party without the trio. lmao

Omg haven't chatted wiv u gor so long!!! i'm so sorry for being so late in reading your updates, but kasam i've been really busy. I came on IF today after so long and I knew the first thing I had to do was read my HL's FF.

K 'WOW' i'm really impressed with the last two chapters I have read👏 I just love the dialogues beetween them both 🤣. where the hell do you get these lines from?! lol all the lines are awesome and sound so real and something that they both would actually come out with in the show. I really like viraat calling maanvi a drama queen haha, the name is so appropriate. lol he even called her jassi ki rani. hahah seriously both chapters are so well written. I'm really proud of you hun!! keep writing more, coz you're really good at it. Okay hun I think i best shut up coz i can go on for ever an ever. aww really miss our krazy chats.
enyway love you loads hun 🤗and hope to chat to u soon.
mwah

🤗Meri pagal see sis🤗

missed you dozens

and thanx all due to my spamming skills lol ur an rocker in less than 500 posts and then your in the gang

and ur right no party without the trio sad time i havent spoken to both you together in what i call centurys. and dont be sorry whats important is that seen you here after ages missed you so much i know your busy no need for explanations i wont kill you 😉. and omg ur two sweet u read love you. lol the dialogues are just the virman inspiration i miss your writing though. aww the crazy chats those times were amazing.

love ya more xoxox