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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum update
continue soon
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t was good but was too short so pls update soon
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it is short bt nice yar next time a long update ok šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜Š
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plz pm me plzzz nice one gud ...lovely...
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plzzz contiue it sooon and pm me sooonnn plzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys thanks for your lovely comments..it just makes me smile...so here is the next part...
Part 10

jevika- lekin kya manvi?
manvi- kuch nai di mein aap ko kal bataungi
jevika- lekin
manvi- di promise...or ab yeh sab chodo...aasa kar te hai ki hum sab kulfi khane jata hai...
purvi- ha yeh bohot aacha idea hai...
virat- ha bhabi...vo to hai...
viren- ha vaise yeh idea bohot aacha hai...
manvi- thanks jiju...aap ko pata hai di ko kulfi bohot aachi lagti hai...
Then every one go to eat kulfi...When they were eating kulfi manvi was thinking about varsh and karan...
virta- hello...hello...manvi...
manvi- huh?
virat- tum thik to ho na?
jevika- ha manvi tum thodi pareshan lag rai ho? tum plz botoa varsha ko kya hua hai?
manvi- di vo aap ko yaad hai jab aap ne muj se kaha ki karan aa raha hai to varsha kitni kush hui thi...or vo v shape ka neckles bhai ke bag mein or to or jab mein vaha se ja rai thi to mein ne unne baat karte hua suna hai...(she told them what she heard)
virat- so u think ki vo dono ek dure ko pasand karte hai...lekin agar aasa hoto to varsha tum e bata ti nai kya?
jevika- ha manvi virat bilkul thik ke raha hai agar aasa kuch hota to varsh tume jarur batati...
manvi- di mein janti hu or usne muje bataya tha ki vo kis ko pasand karti hai or mein usse janti hu par phir aashana aunty(aashana aunty is varsha's mom) ki taybet thik nai thi to topic close ho gaya...
Just then jevika got a call it was biji and she told them to come home because its night...
Next day varsha came home but when she was coming home she saw two girls taking that they shouldnt hide anything from their best friends...and varsha decided to tell manvi the truth and then varsha told manvi that she and karan likes each other...
varsha-manvi yaar i m sorry muje tuje yeh sab pehela hi bata dena chaye tha...
manvi- nai varsha mein tuje sorry kehane ki koi jarurat nai hai mein to yeh soch rai hu ki mein kitni badi budhu thi ki muje pata nai chala...
then they hugged eachother and varsha went downstairs and then she remember what biji had told her and jivika di that now until marriage they cant meet virat and viren...
Just when she was thinking this she heard a voice from balcony of her room and then she shouted-aaahhh...It was virat and he coverd her mouth with his hand...
virat- tum hamesha jor se kyu hilati ho yaar...
manvi- tum...or ha to mein kya dhire se chillou...
virat- arre yaar
manvi- vaise tum yaha kya kare raha ho?tum e pata hai na ki hum shaadi se pehele nai mil sakte...
virat- are yaar ab to shaadi hone vali ab to hume mil na chaaye...
manvi- virat tum samaj nai raha ho agar kisine tum e yaha dekh liya na to bohot badi problem ho jaya gi...
virat pulled her close to him and then hold her from waist...
manvi- virat tum yeh kya kar rahe ho..
virat- mein kya kar raha tum hi bata do
manvi blushes a little...then some one knocks on the door its manvis chachi and varsha...
manvi- oh no virat agar in logo ne tume yaha dekh liya na to badi problem ho jaya gi...tum jaldi vapas jao...
virta- what a timing...thik hai
virat was going back downstair from ladder and manvi was looking at the door and then virat kissed her on cheek and she blushed and then virat whispered "aaj raat no(9) baje garden mein aa ja na" and then he left and then manvi just smiled and went to open the door...

hope u guys like it will continue soon...plz comment...

Edited by nis_n - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it please PM me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so sweet ,.lovely update ,continue plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww lovellyyy yrrr continue sooon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
I really liked it . It was really cute . And virman Convo was damn cute . Continue soon

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