Virman SS- u cant get away from me ch2-pg4

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Virman SS- u cant get away from me

Manvi: Virat mein vapas chandigarh nahi jaungi!

Virat: Manvi: tumko pucha nahi jaraha... batarahihu.. tumhe chalna hi parega!

Manvi: mein nahi jane wali.. meine kaha tha na ke mujhe akele ghar me dar lagta hain.. phir bhi akele rehlungi lekin vapas chandigarh nahi jaungi!

Virat: mujhe bhi shaukh nahi hain tumhe leke ghumne ki samjhe na?! Bhai ne kaha hain ke tumhe le janeko.. toh baas ab tumhare paas koi option nahi hain...

Manvi: virat please.. mujhe kahin nahin jana... mein yahin pe thik hu..

Virat: dekho manvi.. mein tumhe yahan akele rehne nahi dunga... so tumhe chalna hi padega..


manvi finally had nothing to do or say and gave up and had to back to that hell hole.. after reaching... virat explained everything to his family and vanshika and kadambari was glad that she was bak where as the khadoos vadheras had a heart attack seeing her back.. but could not say anything as viren asked her to stay back.. vanshika asked virat to take manvi to her room.. so he does..


Manvi: thanks virat..

Virat: kya kya kya? Mujhe kuch sunai nahi diya...

Manvi: virat.. thank you.. tumne jo kuch bhi kiya mere liye.. I know u didnt have to do it... but u did it anyway... so thank u very much..

Virat: tum itne sweet hote huye acchi nahi lagti.. sherni hi thik ho.. aur waise bhi... hum dono humare har adventure ko ek different angle dedete hain.. and I get to have new experiences... and theywere fun.. aur yeh sab tumhare bager nahin hota hain... so I thank u for that..

Manvi: kya kya kya? Kuch sunai nahi diya.. (smiles)

Virat: thik hai thik hai... ab zyaada bhao na kha..

Manvi: thanks tumhe bhi suit nahin kartha.. khadoos hi thik ho... aur waseh bhi.. mere saath rahoge toh humesha maazey mehi rahoge...

virat: accha..t oh ab humein saath rehna padega... (and then suddenly felt awkward after saying this and so did manvi)

Manvi: um... woh .. (broke the silence) haan.. kuch aur din tumhe jhelna padega.. par kya karoon.. abhi jhel bhi lungi... abhi jao mujhe araam karna hain..

Virat: (smiles) haa... araam karlo.. phir kal larenge..


manvi closes the door... and shes inside the room and virat outside.. both thinking the same thing.. yeh itna bura bhi nahin hain... yeh itni buri bhi nahin hain... and virat thinking... im glad shes here when bhai is not.. verna pak jati bored hokar..


Hey guys...😊 this is something that I wrote about virman... ur feedback is most welcomed.. I hope u like it... and will continue if u guys want me to...😉


cheers! 😊


Chapter 2 - page 4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2699429&TPN=4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awssomeee!!! This is super good!! It's like the coming tracks may have this!! I'm so excited continue soon!! :))
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loved it please continue and pm me 😊
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Impressive... Loved the khadoos vadheras reaction plsz continue and if possible pm me
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Loved it...
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Loved it! Plz pm me wen u update.
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Love it... Please continue, it has similarites of the coming track. 😉
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awesome start dear..plz continue soon n pm me too plz.. :)
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Superb start.Definitely I wud want u to continue.Plese give some more romantic scenes😳.Serial mein nahi,chalo SS mein hi sahi.😃 thanx for the PM.🤗
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