Virman's judaii last part page 3 updated

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Virat: manvi... Manvi!!!!!
Virat searched for manvi aimlessly in her room. He was absolutely stunned as well as not suprised that manvi would runaway from hospital after finding out about aborting her child, but all he could think about was where is she?
"virat!" a voice sounding familiar had called him. As soon as virat turned all he saw was his best friend his brother viren with his bhabhi and saali.
Viren: virat manvi kaise hai? Hum ne suna ke manvi ko blood cancer hai kya yeh sach hai?
Virat had no idea about what to say he couldnt lie nor did he have the courage to say the truth what should he do?
Viren:virat mere bhai maine kuch pucha...
Virat: woh bhai woh maine manvi... I mean jo apne suna woh sach hai manvi ko 2nd stage blood cancer hai!
Jeevika: kya!!! Tum joote bol reho manvi meri mannu... Nahi yeh tum kya kehreho yeh sab bakwaas hai
Virat:bhabhi please apne aap ko sambhaliye manvi patta nahin kaha chali gaye hai uski haalat teek nahin hai hum usse doondana hoga aur...
Viren: aur?
Virat closed his eyes tightly letting loose a tear which slowly travelled down his left cheek making his eyes somber and then he said...
Virat: hume manvi ko maana hoga ke woh...(virat clenched his fist but he had to say it to save his life his world his bandariya he had say it)... Woh apne bache ko ghira de
Jeevika: VIRAT!
Viren quickly grabbed hold of jeevika
Viren: tum jaante bhi ho yeh tum kya kehreho
Virat: doctor ne kaha hai ke agar manvi ko is blood cancer se cure karna hai toh hume pehle uska abortion karna hai warna bache ko janam dene ke baad woh hume hameesha hamesha keliye chor ke chali jayegi!
Virat couldnt hide his tears anymore once he had lost his love this time he couldnt. He knew how much manvi and him wanted this child and he knows manvi will never agree to abort this child but he had no choice manvi was his world and his life he couldnt see her leave him forever especially when she promised that she will never leave him.
Viren: virat mere bhai maat ro agar tum himmat haar joge thor phir manvi ko kaun sambhale ga jaldi go find her
Virat ran immediately out the intensive care unit and unknowingly sat in his car and began driving. He drove on every lane in chandigarh searching for his lady love but couldnt find her until he suddenly stopped. A thought suddenly stroke his head how can he forget that whenever manvi is angry or upset she always goes ro shiv mandir! In no tume virat took a u turn and raced his car to shiv mandir.
Virat: manvi! Manvi!
He shouted until he saw his wifey quietly sobbing asking thousands on questions to her god but is not getting no response...
Manvi: bhagwan ji apne mere saath aisa kyun kiya main baalika bakra hoon jo apne mere saath? Main apne bache ko bahut pyaar kartein hoon chep bhi karta hai lekin chep mujhse bhi bohat pyaar karta hai abhi woh bas meri zindagi ke bhare mein soche ga lekin mein kya karoon main toh apne aulaad ki bhare main sooch rahe hoon i love it to bits maine...
Virat: i love you to bits
Manvi suddenly turned around she was astonished by what virat had said did he listen to everything she just said but how? She soon understood that virat will compel her to abort her child so she began to run when suddenly she felt tear drop on her hand she stopped and just then virat hugged manvi from behind and said...
Virat: main tumse bohat pyaar karta hoon ded footiya aur tum mera promise kese tor sakte ho yaad hai tumhne mujhse vaada kiya tha ke tum mujhe kabhi chorke nahi jogein yaad hai...
Manvi: virat yeh bacha main...
Virat turned her to face him they looked deeply into each others eyes when manvi screamed...
Virat:kya hua?
Manvi: virat... Aah aah mujhe bohat dard ho raha hai virat main...
Manvi fell unconcious...
2 hours later
Jeevika: mannu mannu kesa mehsoos ho raha hai?
Manvi slowly opened her eyes she gazed around scanned the room there was everyone there Bg, chachis, chachas, dadaji, swamini bua, vanshika maa, di and jiju except for virat
Manvi: virat kaha hain?
Viren: woh...
Manvi had sensed a strange vibe around the room it seemed as if everyone was hiding something. She felt really light so she slowly touched her stomach and realised that her baby was gone.
Manvi: mera bacha kaha hai... Di mera bacha mujhe wapaas chahiye!!!!!

I kno its a long update but i just couldnt stop myself from typing

To be continued please comment ur views im open to critism


Index:
Part 1&2 on different topic
Part3 page 1
Part 4&5 page 2
Last part 6 page 3
Edited by hs7071 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such an emotion's scene. Please continue as I really wanna know what happen next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved the way u showed every single emotion every word made so much sense:( i had tears in my eyes reading this seriously.. too good continue soon pls :) PM me and thanks for this PM too :)
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This was amazing plz pm me Wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very emotional part plzz cntinue it...
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nice... looking forward to more updates... please continue and pm me when u update the next chapter... i can't wait... i am so eager to know what is going to happen!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was so emotional. Looking forward for the next part.
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Manvi: di mera bacha kaha hai.. Di bolo mera bacha...
Manvi looked helplessly at her di her cravings for her child made jeevika completely swell in guilt.
Jeevika: mannu woh... Um wob abort... Mera matlab ke woh
Jeevika struggled to speak manvi's tearful eyes killed her concious so jeevika broke down into tears and said...
Jeevika: mein tumhare bache ko nahi bacha pahi tumhare liye hum sabne tumhara abortion karva diya aur operation ab tumhe blood cancer nahi lekin tumhara bacha bhi... Nahi hai!
Manvi was shocked she couldnt believe it she slightly expected that her di would take a step like this but virat... He knew how much she loved this baby they even thought of names if it was a girl then simran and a boy then viraaj but virat ne aisa kyun kiya!
Scene shift:
Viren: virat tumhe manvi ke paas jaana hoga usse tumhare zaroorat hai
Virat: nahi bhai main uske paas nahi jasakta kya moo thikaonga maane apne bacha ko mardene ki ijazzat dedi
Viren: mein apni saali ko jaanta hoon woh bohat gusa aur upset hogi lekin tum uske pati ho tumhe yeh sena parega usse himmat dena hoga... Aur wesse bhi doctor ne kaha tha ke yeh abortion karna bohat zaroori hai warna manvi ke jaan ko katra hai!
Virat: ji bhai aap bilkul right ho
Scene shift- vadhera house
Manvi was brought home but she still had not met virat. Everyone sympathized with her but she didnt speak nor cry. It seemed as if she was burdened. It killed virat to see her sneakily suffer but he decided he will approach her alone not infront of everyone since he expected what reaction he would get but he understood how manvi felt.
Bedroom scene-
Virat: manvi woh maine woh mujhe maaf kardo woh actually tumhari tabiyat aur zindagi ka sawal tha
Manvi: toh kya mujhe mar jaane dete waise bhi iss bache ke jaane ke baad main ub ek zinda lash ban chuki hoon i loved this baby virat!
Virat: and i loved it tooo but i love u more!
Manvi: yeh bacha tumhare liye kuch nahi hai na isliye tumne iss bache ko maar diya
Those words had tored virats heart into pieces how can manvi say something like that she knew how he loved the baby but her... It made him angry but even more when she said...
Manvi: tumne toh iss bache ko kabhi pyaar kiya hinahi hena? Tume pehle bhi yeh bacha nahi chaye tha kyun yeh bacha according to u bohat jaldi aya hai tumhari zindagi ko karab karne ke liye.
Virat: manvi! (blinded by anger virat had raised his hand on manvi his slap had echoed in the entire room leaving a red scar across manvi's tearful cheek) humesha larkiyan admi pe dosh kyun daaltein hai... Yeh such tha ke mujhe ye bacha pehle nahi chaye tha lekin jab mujhe tumhari pregnancy ka news aya tha mujhe bohat khushi mehsoos hui mene maan hi maan mein iss bache ko apna aulaad mana tha lekin ab bohat ho chuka main tumhari haalat ko samajhta hoon lekin tume nahi haq hai ke tum mujhepe ungli utow ke mene jaan bujke iss bache ko maar diya HOW DARE YOU!
Manvi was gob smacked she didnt realised how mich virat loved the baby maybe she was wrong but it was too late to apologise since virat had left the room in utter anger and knew that he wouldnt cum back all night!


Sad... But it will be a bit more cheerful next part when manvi tries to cheer virat and please comment so i know whether or not people like it

To be continued...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg I cried throughout:(( but I would still say this is fabulous!!! And ya continue pls pls continue soon!! Start on it haha sorry for the pressure:)
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Damn u made me cry didn't expect this seeing virat slap
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