~|VirMan|~-I'll be there for you, always!chp7-pg19

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Hey guys, this is my first time writing up an SS please do forgive me if you dont like it and do give feedback!
Cheers! :)

While on their way back to rhishikesh... beeji finds out that manvi is suffering from high fever, so when they reached home, beeji strictly instructed manvi to be under absolute rest. She also asked Dabbu to keep her phone, to keep her away from any kinds of distractions.

Beeji: Dabbu, tu Manvi didi ka phone apne paas rakh jabtak who bilkul thik nahi ho jaati.

Dabbu: ji beeji.. jaisa aap kahe.

Manvi on the other hand very pissed about the fact that yet again this issue of her having a fever is being exaggerated by her family just like that stupid Virat did. For some very weird reason she kept on thinking about him for a while and she had no idea why. But then she said to herself, "meri bhi kya galti hai, agar beeji mujhe iss bistar se uthne nahi dengi tabh uss chep ka yaad to ayega hi na!"

She kept on twisting and turning on her bed after which she finally decided that she wanted to go eat something and heads towards the kitchen.

Meanwhile

Dabbu playing with manvis phone receives a call from Virat who was already missing manvi and couldn't stop thinking about her.

Virat: hello bandariya, kaise ho?

Dabbu: Virat bhaiyya mein dabbu..

Virat: arey baal ki dukaan.. uss bandariya ka phone tere paas kyun hai?

Dabbu: who Virat Bhaiyya, beeji ne kaha hain mere paas phone rakhne keliye aur manvi did ko naa dene keliye.

Virat: (all confused) matlab? Unhone aisa kyun kaha?

Dabbu: Manvi didi ko bohot zyaada fever hain aur bohot kamzor bhi hain

Virat: (worried out of his mind) KYA?! Ye kab hua, aur mujhe usne kuch kaha kyun nahi?!

Dabbu: bhaiyya, who hum jab laut rahethe tabhise unki tabeyat kharab hain.

Manvi on the way to the kitchen found dabbu talking to someone on her phone. Manvi starts talking to dabbu while virat is still on the line.

Manvi: eh dabbu.. tu kisse baat karraha hain? Who bhi mere phone pe?

Dabbu: manvi did aap yaha kya karehe ho? Apko toh araam karna chahiye na?

Manvi: chup kar dabbu aur jo puchrahihu uska javaab de!

Dabbu: woh didi, Virat bhaiyya ka phone hain aur puchrahethe ke aapki phone mere paas kyun hain?

Manvi: aur tune sab bata diya? (Manvi freaking out)

Dabbu: haan! Unhone pucha toh mein nahi batata kya?

Manvi: Maar dalungi tujhe mein dabbu! (angry as ever). Laa mujhe phone de!

Dabbu: paar didi...

Manvi: tu jaa yahase dabbu ke bacche!!

Dabbu runs away and manvi sheepishly greets Virat on the phone

Manvi: Hi chep! Uss Dabbu ki baat maat sunna! Who toh aise hi kuchbhi bolta rehta hain.

Virat: (silent)

Manvi: hello, meti baat sunbhi raheho ya..

Virat: tumhari problem kya hain manvi?! Tum apne aap ko samajhti kya ho!

Manvi: Virat yeh tum kya kehraheho mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi araha..

Virat: tum mujhe bata nahi sakti thi ki tumhari tabyat kharab ho gayi phirse?! Ya bhul gayi ki jab pehle kharab huyi thi tab mein hi legayi thi tumhe doctor ke paas?! Tum apni dawai thik tarase lebhi raheho yah nahi?!

Manvi: OMG Virat!! hogaya? Ab mein kuch bolu?

Virat: (silent again)

Manvi: maantihu ki pichle kuch dinose mein shaadi ki tension mein dawai lena bhul gayi. Shayad isiliye phirse kamzor par gayi. Kuch der araam karungi toh thik ho jaungi. Chill yaar chep!!

Virat: tumse kuch bhi thik se nahi hoti na? Mein abhi bhai aur bhabi koh batatihu tumhare tabyat ke baremeh.

Manvi: ruko Virat!! pagol toh nahi ho gaye tum!! unki abhi shaadi huyi hai yaar! Kuch toh privacy doh unhe. Aur mein promise karti hu, again tabyat phir se kharab huyi toh sabse pehle tumhe bolungi.. baas di se kuch na kehna!

Virat: fine! But even if dabbu has your phone, I will call him every half an hour to see how u r!

Manvi: ok baba... and thank you for calling (with a smile on her face)

Virat: BYE!

Manvi: goodbye chep!

Manvi on one hand was worried that Virat would go tell her sister about her state but on the other hand was happy in a weird way. She loved how he was so concerned about her and that he was only angry because he was so worried about her. She went back to her room and though about him for a long time and then finally fell asleep with a smile on her face.

Virat could not sleep all night and did not let dabbu sleep either because he kept on calling him constantly. He was feeling so restless to see his bandariya and take care of her himself instead of trusting anyone else. He felt something that he never felt before. He didnt know what it was, but all he knew was that he had to see her somehow and started planning how he would do that.

Thats it for now. I will continue if u guys want me to. Please do give feedback even if u dont like it. Ill try and improve next time if u guys would want a continuation! :)


Index:

Chapter 1: page 1 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2333741

Chapter 2: page 4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2333741&TPN=4

Chapter 3: page 6 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2333741&TPN=6

Chapter 4: page 9 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2333741&TPN=9

Chapter 5: page 12 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2333741&TPN=12

Chapter 6: page 15 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2333741&TPN=15

Chapter 7: page 19 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2333741&TPN=19

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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was good 👏. plz do continue. pm me when u write the next part
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Its nice:) do continue:) virats concern is so so sweet! thanks dear:)
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Oops i forgot.. PM me when u continue :)))
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Nice ss dear 😊
Continue soon!
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Plz plz plz continue nd pm me!😊
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thanks guys! really appreciate the feedback... i expect more feedback... and will surely pm u guys when i update! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it... :)
for some weird reason reminded me of d song 'abhi abhi mere dil mein' fm d film Socha Na Tha (abhay deol-ayesha takia one)
pls continue soon...
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really liked it..plz do continue..n pm me venevr u do
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Originally posted by: ashred12

loved it... :)
for some weird reason reminded me of d song 'abhi abhi mere dil mein' fm d film Socha Na Tha (abhay deol-ayesha takia one)
pls continue soon...


i lovee that song!! and yea.. it does kind of go with this theme! it will match more with the upcoming updates! :P

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