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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice.. Pls PM me when you update...
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Here we go with the next part.. hope u like it 😊

Chapter 3

Virat could not possibly think of a reason to go to Manvi's house without getting her or himself into trouble. But all he knew was that he had to go no matter what as he could nt live with manvi avoiding him anymore. He kept on walking around his entire house while thinking of a plan. While passing jeevika and viren's room he heard jeevika saying:

Jeevika: pata nahi mannu ko kabh ye sare cheeze lauta paungi. (while putting a few things in a bag which were Manvi's which she borrowed during the wedding)

Virat listening to this had the hugest smile on his face and said to himself "bhabi ki jai ho". He then entered jeevika's room.

Virat: hello bhabi ji!

Jeevika: areh virat, tum yaha! Hi! Kaise ho?

Virat: Main toh theek hu lekin aap itne pareshaan kyun lagreheho?

Jeevika: nahi pareshaan nahi hu.. woh bas soch rahi thi ki mannu ko ye cheezey kaise lautangi..

Virat: (with a smirk on his face) bas itni si baat... bhabi mein hu kisliye yaar.. mein khud jaake manvi ko ye saara samaan lauta dunga! (smiles)

Jeevika: nahi nahi virat! Tum kyun itni taklif karoge.. mein baad mein bhijwa dungi!

Virat: bhabi ab aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe ho... iss mein taklif ki kya baat huyi..


Jeevika was still not convinced but then viren who heard the entire conversation asked jeevika to give the stuff to virat because he will go to rhishikesh.

Jeevika: par agar bua naraaz ho gayo toh?

Viren: bua ki chinta mat karo.. unhe mein samjha dunga! (smiles)

Virat rushed to his room with the bag, and got dressed as quickly as he could and started for rhishikesh.

In Rhishikesh

Virat didnt know why but he was very nervous before ringing the doorbell. He had butterflies in his tummy.. it felt like forever since he last met manvi.. he rang the doorbell anyway.. and who else but beeji opened the door.. Virat freaked out for some reason.

Beeji: Virat bete... aap yahan?

Virat: Ji woh beeji, mujhe jeevika bhabi ne bheja manvi ko yeh saara saman dene keliye.

Beeji: ye sab hain kya lekin?

Virat: pata nahi, shaadi ki waqt manvi se kuch cheezey liye hongey aur wohi lautana chahti thi.

Beeji: Accha thik hai bete.. aap ander jao.. mein dabbu ko boldetihu ke woh manvi ko bula laye.. mein pinky ke saath mandir jaa rahehu.

Virat: (happier than ever as he gets manvi alone) ji beeji. (smiles)

As soon as beeji left.. virat wanted to see manvi as soon as he could but then dabbu started annoying virat asking him stupid questions. He had to get rid of him too..

Virat: dabbu.. tere liye mein itna sara chocolate laya na... tujhe saraa din lag jayenge khate khate..

Dabbu: sach bhaiyya?! Aap mere favourite hain!!

Virat: (smiles) ab jaa.. chocolate gari mein hain.. jaake khale..

Dabbu runs and virat quicky gets into manvi's room.

Manvi on the other hand was lying down on her bed wearing a pair of tiny shorts and a singlet top. Weirdly she was thinking of Virat and how she hated ignoring him and wished that she could talk to him which she knew would bring a huge smile to her face. She was under her blanket and virat couldnt see what she was wearing but slipped into the blanket from the other side making no noise. Manvi thought it was dabbu...

Manvi: Dabbu tu yahan kya kar raha hein? Mujhe pareshan maat kar.. sona hain toh jaa apni bed pe jaake sou ja!!

No response made manvi a little confused. Dabbu not talking bad was not normal. So she turned around and screamed her lungs out when she saw virat. She freaked out so bad!

Virat: ohho bandariya! Kitni zor se chillati ho yaar... mere kaan kharab ho gaye!

Manvi: (jumping out of her bed) what the f**k?! Tum yahan kya kar raheho?

Virat: (checked out manvi from top to bottom and thinking of how hot she was looking)

Manvi: (realises that hez checking her out puts a robe on quickly) mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu na?! Goonge ho?!

Virat: (lost words) oh.. umm.. mein.. woh ..

manvi: oh.. umm.. mein.. se agey bhi baro yaar!

Virat: tumhe kya lagraha hain ke mein kya karehehu?! Phone toh uthati ho nahi.. ignore kar raheho pata nahi kitne dino se... pagal toh mein horahu na.. tumhe toh koi farak bhi nahi parta.. kabhi toh dusro ke bare mein bhi socha karo.

Manvi: (lost words now).. dekho virat... mujhe tumse koi baat karni nahi thi... issiliye maine tumhare calls receive nahi ki.. baat nahi karni hai toh kya zabardasti baat karwaoge?!

Virat: (gets off the bed and starts walking towards her as she starts moving backwards) haan! Agar zaroorat pari toh wohi karungi

Manvi: mujhse dur raho tum.. nahi toh..

Virat: nahi toh kya karloge? Maroge? Ya chikhoge? Koi ghar pe nahi hain... siha javab deneke ilava tumhare paas koi choice nahi hain!

Manvi: maine aisa nahi kaha... itne dramatic honeki zaroorat nahi hain.. tum janna kya chahte ho?

Virat: why have you been ignoring me?

Manvi: kyunki mere vajese tumhari tabyat kharab hogayi thi.. aur mein aise hote nahi dek sakti.. aur kuch?

Virat: tum hi mujhse poochtiho na ke mein tumhari tabyat ke itni fikar kyun karta hu? Aaj mein tumse wahi saval poochtihu... javab do.. tumhe kya farak parta hain?

Manvi: (lost words and couldn't move back anymore as it was the wall)

Virat: ab chup kyun hogayi? Mere itna paas honese ghabrahat kyun horahi hain tumhe? (as virat asked these questions he was trying to answer them himself first in his mind)

Manvi: kisne kaha ke ghabrahat horehi hai?!

Virat.: itne zor se saanse kyun lerahihon phir? ( goes as close as he can and unties her robe)

Manvi: (started breathing even faster) Virat yeh kya kar raheho?

Virat: pata nahi.. jo mujhe iss waqt sahi lagraha hain wahi.. (he had no idea why he was doing what he was doing and pulled one of her straps down and started kissing her neck and bare shoulders..

Manvi: (didnt know why she wasnt denying it.. but she got nervous and dug her nails on his back)


The doorbell rang..


Hey guys... thats it for now... will continue if you like it... hope u guys like it.. 😃 and I didnt disappoint u! upcoming parts become more intense and things become more clearer to the love birds but how will they confess? 😉 What about their families.. all in the upcoming parts.. and also.. they get more closer!😳 Please post feedback.. I will really appreciate it.. 😊

Edited by zanonymous - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Cliffhanger huhh!!
Ab ye door bell kisne bajayi!Kabab main haddi!
Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Ohhh very nice dear... Update soon and Pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
So finally virat meets his bandariya thanx 2 his bhabhi..n jst ven things were getting hot, ye bell kisne mari!!!!😡
Gr8 part..update nxt soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Nyc part..
Update soon..!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Virat almost loses his sense yaar, what he is doing, stop him yaar,, romantic ho gaya bechara,,,lol
thanks for the PM and continue soon with 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
LOVEE ITT!! wanna know moreee! updatee fast please! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
One word: Awesome, cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks everyone.. really appreciate ur feedback... will update soon!😊

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