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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910

It's really very good for a first time attempt Anuradha👏esp the Q's Sumo asks God :((

Her talk to herself /God and the picture was emotional and narrated well :) glad Shravan heard most of it .. Nit. Y done third person narrating .. Tho I would not associate with Suman ending her life .. She was a fighter :) .. But like Resh says life negates very many things .. #Lifelessons
Maami Ji irratating as usual no change thr😆Ramnath takes a 360 degree turn tho😆

Shravan is always BAE❤️n I'm biased😛

Hope u come up with continuing to write😳
Cheers :)

Thanx a lot Mayuri...I m very new to wrting, so d thought of writing from Shravan's or Suman's POV did not really cross my mind...will definitely try to do that next time... 😊

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sptrno
Awww this is beyond beautiful amazing dear..can't believe this is your first os! Keep writing such lovely pieces..thank you!!

Love,
Spandana

Thank You so much Spandana...I really value your words of praise...I shud b saying "Thank You", not u dear 😊

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: deltadawn
First thing that I read this morning and it was really really nice. Beautiful hunny.
A first time che? I don't believe it😆

Terrible to feel Sumo's pain because she feels so unwanted. By everyone. In a house full of people in a world filled with more how lonely can a person be that they don't find reason enough to continue living.😭

she felt disconnected from Nanu as well😭

What a way to know and what a moment to know that you were almost about to give up on the one who loves you.

Heart Touching and very well written. Please do write more😊

Thank You Deeptiben,
Tamara utsahvardhak shabdo maate... 😉
I m really touched by all d positive comments ...in d seventh heaven 😆 ...Thanx once again

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

A wonderful first! !

Sumans pain...hopelessness...feeling of unworthiness very well written! !

Miseries of a lonely child! ! Heart wrenching !!

It might look like an UnSumo act...but Sumo was already lost in the transit... it's Suman !!

Hurt and despair can often make the person do the unbelievable! !

Very touching! !

Keep them coming!

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
A wonderful first! !

Sumans pain...hopelessness...feeling of unworthiness very well written! !
Miseries of a lonely child! ! Heart wrenching !!
It might look like an UnSumo act...but Sumo was already lost in the transit... it's Suman !!
Hurt and despair can often make the person do the unbelievable! !
Very touching! !

Keep them coming!

Thank You so much dear...I m touched by those words of praise 😊

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Seriously ..first attempt... can't believe. It is beautifully written.

Nice OS

Expecting post something others too

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Amazing write-up for a first timer!!

Splendid job👏

Aur bhi likthe rehna!!

Expecting more writing from you!!

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Thank You so much Spandana...I really value your words of praise...I shud b saying "Thank You", not u dear 😊

Arre u have written so beautifully toh 'Thank you' toh hame bolna hee tha afterall We all r EDKV Family!

Keep writing such fab pieces...

Love,

Spandana

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Thanx a lot Mayuri...I m very new to wrting, so d thought of writing from Shravan's or Suman's POV did not really cross my mind...will definitely try to do that next time... 😊

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Hey Aniradha I did not mean that write from Shravan or Sumo POV .. it was a typo :((( ...I meant I'm glad Shravan heard it himself rather than any third person telling him about the truth :))