Janam janam - Page 3

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910

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Hey Aniradha I did not mean that write from Shravan or Sumo POV .. it was a typo :((( ...I meant I'm glad Shravan heard it himself rather than any third person telling him about the truth :))

Hahaha...sorry for d goofup... 😆 😆 😉

Originally posted by: Safire

Amazing write-up for a first timer!!

Splendid job👏

Aur bhi likthe rehna!!

Expecting more writing from you!!

Thank You dear...will try to come up with something original as n when I get the idea... 😊

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Thank You dear...will try to come up with something original as n when I get the idea... 😊

Mere reson ke samundar mein ek aur res...😕

This Mamiji was really so selfish and eluded with in herself that she can't see what happened to suman. How she was humiliated by her husband, and can't see her sad state. She was blinded by her mother's love, which I can understand but she as a woman should have realised the pain of sumo but No, she started her antics and behave very rudely to her..
"situation was under control" koi war he kya jo situation under control hoga 😃 (ho bhi sakta hai after all it is Shravan and sumo 😉) "..
Really there is no one for a orphan girl like suman even her nanaji not even came to see her when Mamiji said everything is ok with sumo. NO one in this world can ever fill the void of the parents doesn't matter how much they love You..
And the only person who genuinely cares for her, she herself pushed him very far..
That preeti was also so selfish and endeavour with in herself that she can't see what happened to suman, really a selfish girl..
Really sumo is completely broken, she is not sumo anymore she is only "suman"..
Flashback scene was really beautiful..
Both are completely broken and shattered.. The scene where she talks to her parents PHOTOS and Shravan's was really beautifully penned and hats off to you for absolutely tremendous writing..
Finally sumo confessed her love for Shravan, not the way She wanted but none the less she did confess. .
"ma baap ki kami koi nahi poori kar sakta yeh "so true..
Sumo's wishes are really painful.. .
Hug was really beautiful dear.. Finally both confessed their love to each other...
One of the very best thing about Shravan and sumo is that even in very intense and emotional situation they can crack joke at each other..
Really wonderful confession scene and Shravan being a Man apologies for his blunders to sumo infront of whole family..
Finally ramu kaka confessed his sins and good that Shravan forgive everyone and started a new life with his parents and his love, sumo..
Really this is an absolute master piece 👏..
Keep writing like this..


Love
Smita

Originally posted by: Safire

Hey Anu,[i can call you so na?]

I'm sure you will explore new ideas and will come up with something fantastic to entertain us.

You can definitely call me Anu, I will love it...I will definitely try to live up to your expectations.. 😊

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

This Mamiji was really so selfish and eluded with in herself that she can't see what happened to suman. How she was humiliated by her husband, and can't see her sad state. She was blinded by her mother's love, which I can understand but she as a woman should have realised the pain of sumo but No, she started her antics and behave very rudely to her..
"situation was under control" koi war he kya jo situation under control hoga 😃 (ho bhi sakta hai after all it is Shravan and sumo 😉) "..
Really there is no one for a orphan girl like suman even her nanaji not even came to see her when Mamiji said everything is ok with sumo. NO one in this world can ever fill the void of the parents doesn't matter how much they love You..
And the only person who genuinely cares for her, she herself pushed him very far..
That preeti was also so selfish and endeavour with in herself that she can't see what happened to suman, really a selfish girl..
Really sumo is completely broken, she is not sumo anymore she is only "suman"..
Flashback scene was really beautiful..
Both are completely broken and shattered.. The scene where she talks to her parents PHOTOS and Shravan's was really beautifully penned and hats off to you for absolutely tremendous writing..
Finally sumo confessed her love for Shravan, not the way She wanted but none the less she did confess. .
"ma baap ki kami koi nahi poori kar sakta yeh "so true..
Sumo's wishes are really painful.. .
Hug was really beautiful dear.. Finally both confessed their love to each other...
One of the very best thing about Shravan and sumo is that even in very intense and emotional situation they can crack joke at each other..
Really wonderful confession scene and Shravan being a Man apologies for his blunders to sumo infront of whole family..
Finally ramu kaka confessed his sins and good that Shravan forgive everyone and started a new life with his parents and his love, sumo..
Really this is an absolute master piece 👏..
Keep writing like this..


Love
Smita

Thank You sooo much for that response dear...it means a looot to me...I don't hv words to express my gratitude for this overwhelming response...thanx once again 😊