Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga: A ShraMan OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello there! So i am back to writing ShraMan after ages! This is for Mahi and to let her know how i love her and am proud of her for everything (and also for reasons best known to us šŸ˜‰) This is nothing compared to her awesomeness but i am still giving it a try. šŸ˜›
This is a supposed aftermath of episode 15, the spiteful school reunion, all in Suman's pov and coupled with the song "Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga" from Half Girlfriend (2017) because i thought that suited it best.


MAIN PHIR BHI TUMKO CHAHUNGA

That morning she saw him at the doorstep, waiting. He who was christened chashmish by none but her and had in response acquired the name jhalli. Oh, how he loved to tease her and she was innately drawn to his charms.

"Chalein moti?" He asked flushing a sly smirk and turning about a 25 degrees to show his school bag "School nahi jana kya?"

The way he addressed her set a pout ablaze but she ditched it to go with a smile accompanied by the display of her milky white teeth "Chal chashmish, tu bhi kya yaad rakhega?"

And saying so, she put out her hand to grab his but at once it so seemed that the wind had devoured him as he vanished into the depths of the thin air, as though he had never appeared.

"Chashmish, you wanna play?" She asked anxiously as her eyes hurriedly galloped around in a hapless rummage as she grew desperate to see him.


Tum mere ho, iss pal mere ho
Kal shayad yeh alam na rahe,

Kuch aisa ho, tum tum na raho
Kuch aisa ho, hum hum na rahe
Yeh raaste alag ho jayein
Chalte chalte hum kho jayein

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

Iss chahat main mar jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

She took the road to school alone, hoping she would bump into him on the way. And then there he stood at the pani-puri stall munching on this mouth-watering delicacy as his taste buds peeled out pleasure from it. She was about to call out to him when she heard him do that instead, from behind.

"Sumo!" He called and she turned to face him licking on the Gota, his lips going blood-red in the process, noticing which had her giggling.

"Shravan, just look at you!" She remarked as she laughed out loud and walked, no ran towards him only to find him gone again!


Meri jaan main, har khamoshi mein
Tere pyar ke naagme gaungaa

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga.

Iss chahat main mar jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

She would have begun looking for him again and never would have gotten tired of it, hadn't reality struck her like lightening, hadn't it told her she had been hallucinating and imagining things that refused to exist but without which she wouldn't live. There were several unerased memories that were left behind like the trailing streaks of smoke from a jet-engine. At once, she looked at what growing up had done to her, it was all that wretched time's fault, she was no longer the same, neither was he.


Aise jaruri ho mujhko tum
Jaise hawaen saanson ko

Aise talaash houn main tumko
Jaise ke pair zaminon ko

Hasna yaaron na ho mujhse
Pagal sa dhudun main tumhe

Glimpses of the fateful events from the previous night rung within her and so did the humiliation, the callous, merciless being he had been. Her heart lay in chaotic ruins yet love still remained cast like the clouds in the endless blue sky, however hard insult tried to demolish it from its dwelling. It had managed to prick into her heart slowly and painfully like a nail in the stubborn, mighty wall yet had failed in rendering so much as a dent. He had questioned her unconditional friendship, he had questioned her feelings for him yet love was the only possession she had and could give away, a fact that astonished her too.


Kal mujhse mohabbat ho na ho
Kal mujhko ijazat ho na ho

Tutte dil ke tukde lekar
Tere dar pe hi reh jaunga

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

Iss chahat mein mar jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

A mild breeze blew in trying to ascertain she remembered good old days of being best friends with the one she now loved, bringing in tidings of he who was hers and would be forever forcing her to grin meekly. Hope came with it and she resolved to have her name written on his heart just as his was on hers. She was determined to love and be loved, win him back again although she wouldn't give that away as she walked to the PCT.

~

So this is no good as you may have seen, yet i hope you liked this stupid attempt.šŸ˜†


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ah! What an exemplary piece of writing!
Blown off my feet! The depth given to it is just awesomeness personified.
The lyrics gel in so well, just in awe! And the sublime mix of feelings and FBs is stupendous!

Love you always <33

PS : . Read it thrice
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww such a cute os this is ! You have shown their relation in such a beautiful way . I don't remember the show showing such light and fun filled scenes of the past . Enjoyed reading it .
And I think the song fits perfectly into the os ! Great blend of the song and words .
Keep writing more shots like this .
Sam
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Posted: 8 years ago
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what a beautiful piece of writing šŸ‘
Sumo... I wish she was half of what you want her to be here.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The deapth of your writting literally blew me off. . šŸ‘ šŸ‘
The last paragraph can be labeled as good as unreal looking at the sheer amount of mess Sumo created but you just seem to make it a bit more of believable šŸ‘šŸ¼
you should writemore Elara di

Arpita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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^Arpi, you forgot me so easily? I am Ramya, we met in the AT remember? Will reply to your comment in detail later. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is beyond beautiful dear.
Hell brilliantly penned down šŸ‘
Loved it immensely ā¤ļø
Keep writing more dear 😊
Loads of Love šŸ¤—
Nik
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so beautiful! !
Exemplary writing !!
Sumo of dreams! !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Elara--

^Arpi, you forgot me so easily? I am Ramya, we met in the AT remember? Will reply to your comment in detail later. 😳

Ramya di I didn't forget you I just love the name elara thus I addressed you with the namešŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806


Ramya di I didn't forget you I just love the name elara thus I addressed you with the namešŸ˜›

Arpi you are so cute! 😳

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