Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga: A ShraMan OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.

Ah! What an exemplary piece of writing!

Blown off my feet! The depth given to it is just awesomeness personified.

The lyrics gel in so well, just in awe! And the sublime mix of feelings and FBs is stupendous!

Love you always <33

PS : . Read it thrice

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

Aww such a cute os this is ! You have shown their relation in such a beautiful way . I don't remember the show showing such light and fun filled scenes of the past . Enjoyed reading it .

And I think the song fits perfectly into the os ! Great blend of the song and words .

Keep writing more shots like this .

Sam

Originally posted by: deltadawn

what a beautiful piece of writing 👏

Sumo... I wish she was half of what you want her to be here.😊

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

The deapth of your writting literally blew me off. . 👏 👏
The last paragraph can be labeled as good as unreal looking at the sheer amount of mess Sumo created but you just seem to make it a bit more of believable 👍🏼
you should writemore Elara di

Arpita

Originally posted by: Nik03

This is beyond beautiful dear.
Hell brilliantly penned down 👏
Loved it immensely ❤️
Keep writing more dear 😊
Loads of Love 🤗
Nik

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Awesome👏

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Ramya 🤗
This is superb
Song is perfect and you wrote it beautifully 👏

Zenab

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

Di..!!!🤗🤗🤗
I got so so happy to see a PM from you that too of your OSI juz love what u write😃
This was amazing...!!!👏👏👏
The way you write.the feelings and emotions...I juz could imagine that Sumo turning back to see Shravan licking the gola...and then her disappointed face...It literally made me feel that..😊
Beautifully penned and the song❤️❤️❤️Perfect pick for the emotion...!!!!
Loved it to the core...!!!!
Please keep bringing these up frequently please...😳
Frooti⭐️