I Missed You- A ShraMan OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: deltadawn

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FINALLYY!! mai aa gayi aur laptop khul gaya 😃

First for my happy dance about a successful blackmailing mission

kitne dino ki mehnat meri aaj safal hui!!

😃

Thank you to the person who had the first idea about bets to make people write on the forum.👏

#takeabow

Tu chapter dedicate mat kar re... aaj to mai bas tere post ki khushi manaungi.

OS ka review coming up in my second post.

Yaha to party karne ke liye jagah rakhi thi

Originally posted by: evaviego

Oh My God...!!!

Mere liye GIFs daaalna seekhaaa 😆😆😆

dekh le.. commitment ki level meri. ab to second part likh 😉

You succeed just because I couldnt take the wrath of your readers. Sirf unka socha likha gaya hai ye...!!! 😛

kuch bhi !! chal hatt 😳

I HATE BETS...!!!!😡

I wont bet again. Naa Yahaaa Naa Kahin bhi...!!!

we ll see. we will make an offer you can't refuse😉

That bowing down wala GIF is so US...!!!😉

And the one who fell down is so YOU...!!! 🤣

🤣 I know !!

And the one giving you looks is Resh Chechi 😆

Resh ke liye -Teri aankho ke siva ...duniya me rakhaa kya hai !!😉

ye uthe Dips dare 😆

ye jhuke Eva dare 😆

ankhiya much?? 😉

Ab jo maine post kar diya hai. We need Lost & Incompatible ASAP . 😳

Originally posted by: deltadawn

jara to sharam kiya karo yaar...

you said if I update both you will post. and I did.

ab utla bol rahi hai post both again. maine factory kholi hai yaha words and ideas ki??

topic bhi aise sar khujao mile hain dono... you write second part to this and I ll update both tomorrow !! bol ?

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Worth a million hearts..!❤️

So beautifully written !!👏

Thank you so much Tabby. 😳 I am glad you liked it. I really am.

How nicely the actual scenes and dialogues were incorporated! ! 👍🏼

You watched all the episodes again,,I relived them reading this 'os'...#OutstandingStory! !

#OutstandingStory Sachi? Means a lot for a first timer.

Sumo's confession was !! Just love!!

The song.! Oh! My My!! And his gestures while she was speaking!!

I tried really hard to write down his gestures. But i had a feeling it was not up to the mark. But now I guess it was okay.😳

Pushkie...cutie pie! Voice of wisdom!

Sachi. This was the Pushkar I knew.

Me while reading this declaration of love!😆

Hahahahaha. 😆

And,,last but not the least...somebody said,,I cannot write! Such lairs I tell u..!

Originally posted by: deltadawn

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🤣

Please don't mind dear but ...

This was absolutely brilliant. So true to apni original Sumo ... ek ghaav do tukde !! (improvised a marathi saying into hindi) 😆

Waah waah... waah waah...!!!

and you write so so well !! Usse yaad aya...

MORON Why did you not write before?? Kitna tujhe behlaya, fuslaya, daraya, dhamkaya, publically remind kiya, pure forum pe pichaa kar kar ke logo ke thread spam kiye almost...

Jab ki you could write so well already !! You thakaaoed me. so I deserve a dedication here wht say people?? 😉

Dedication?? NO.😛 But us little speech mein 3 times I have taken your name. Usi se kaam chala lo aap. 😆

Ye meri Sumo hai jo episode 1 se 94 tak zinda thi !!

Meri bhi...!!!

but ye upgraded version hai kyunki iske dimag me sirf self respect ka hi nahi common sense ka bhi fuel padta hai chalne ke vaaste!!😆

Pushkie baby... if I say then it becomes repititive but "Ye mera Pushkar hai" 👏sniff how I missed him till the end. 😭

Me too...!!!

He understood his brother so well and his friend too and their problems. This was his first good attempt to fix things between them, bring purpose to his own character and he has not wasted it here. Kuch to kaam aye baki log inki problems solve karne me.😃

But sumo slayed it. 😎Your Sumo slayed it. ❤️Is sumo me Eva ki aatma a gayi thi !! 👏

Exactly meri aatma...!!! 😛 Kaha tha na My Sumo will talk and she did...!!! 😃

I believe in talking it out, always. People are not mind readers, you need be vocal. You need to express. You need to apologise if you do something wrong. Kehne ko dosti mein thank you and sorry ki jagah nahi hoti. But farak padtha hai.

It was always right there in front. It's like you keep looking for something in your entire room and then realize it was right in front of you all along. 😳

She had said "Mana lungi tumhe. sorry bol dungi"

Yes, she had said that. In the very first episode itself, but she only tried once and ended up saying. "koi badi baat nahi thi" , seriously?? I have always wondered ye dialogue writers dialogue likh ke bhool jaate the kya? Bolte kuch they. Karte kuch.

To sorry bolna to banta tha. Manaana bhi banta tha. And she did. She reached out to him.

She was finally able to muster the courage to accept that she missed him. Oh how I missed this. bestie hai to uske saamne hi to mu kholegi na.. bol deti. and you made her talk 🤗

This is all I ever wanted. Ki wo kuch toh bole. 😛

Agree to your point about not confronting him about daal mata for a while till they were themselves strong together to face it. safe thought. Sirf I love you kafi nahi hai, they had a lot of issues to work on as well. twas perfect hunny.👍🏼

Yup. Thanks 😳

Shravan's reaction. For a second I was taken aback but that is to blame on me myself because in all of our IF stories Shravan is never able to show any restraint once this point comes in his life he springs into ACTION.😉😆

But you stayed true to our introvert shravan..chashmish. he would do that.. not be able to first control his overwhelming feelings so would turn away and then would want to express in his own geeky style. What a beautiful song.

How could he control his overwhelming feelings? Did he ever get anything he deserved? Except for that Oxford degree. 😛 Jab aise emotions experience hi nahi ki toh control kaise karta.

Who said this is the last one from you? 😡If I have to trap you again to write I will keep trying for that again and again. But please do write. It was wonderful.

I doubt. Big time.

Loving you Sumo still. Wo boli. JA KE BOLI.. can't get over it for a few days atleast. this happiness spread in my imaginary shraman world.