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@Blueheaven1999

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Kisne kaha u can't write...

Such a good writer...

N liar too...

But.

U wrote well..

Hats off to u..

First time m itna achaa..

Aur ek m hu..

Start kiya tha. Kuch to hai..

But...

No one is interested...

Chalo.. Koi nhi all the best...

Keep writing..

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Blueheaven1999
Kisne kaha u can't write...
Such a good writer...
N liar too...

But.
U wrote well..
Hats off to u..

First time m itna achaa..
Aur ek m hu..
Start kiya tha. Kuch to hai..

But...
No one is interested...

Chalo.. Koi nhi all the best...
Keep writing..

Plz Don't say that...🤗 m sure ur work must good too..!

Don't get disheartened,,u chose to write...it's something!! #askme

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Blueheaven1999
Kisne kaha u can't write...
Such a good writer...
N liar too...

But.
U wrote well..
Hats off to u..

First time m itna achaa..
Aur ek m hu..
Start kiya tha. Kuch to hai..

But...
No one is interested...

Chalo.. Koi nhi all the best...
Keep writing..

yaha log marr rahe hain update ke intezaar me aur you are saying no one is interested??

no fair !!

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: evaviego
@Deepti, Tina , Tabby.

I thought IF mujhe ye ek piece me post karne nahi dega. Verbal diarrhoea jo ho gaya tha. 🤣

this means your verbal diarrhea was not so much verbal diarrhea!! so post me next part likhna to banta hai !!

Toh just to be on the safe side i res-ed two spaces.😛

But now, Its gonna be a self appreciation space. 😎😆

haan next part likh aur uske uppar niche self appreciation kar le !!

Ummed bhi mat rakhna ki mein ab agle 10 saal tak kuch aisa likh paungi. 😈

challenge de rahi hai?? Namik ke agle interview tak wait kar 😉

@Deepti Resh. Jee bhar ke kar lo spam bete. Khoob badla lo mujhse. But yaad rakhiyo. Aap dono aage bhi updates doge. 😃 I'll spam harder...!!! 😃

kisne roka hai beta.. kar lo duniya muthhi me !!

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: deltadawn

yaha log marr rahe hain update ke intezaar me aur you are saying no one is interested??

no fair !!

+1 here. ..I actually wondered if you discontinued it!

And please apne kaam ko number of comments and likes se mat judge karna. We are wait for an update on it still!

Please finish the story!!

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Hey Eva!!!

What have you done!!!!! Apne andar ki writer ko itne din kaise chupa ke rakha tha. Dips I love you for making Eva write. Beautiful Eva. This was one of the times we expected confession, but never got one. And you gave us what we always wanted, amazing confession in Sumo style. So proud of you. And the way you narrated the story, it was all happening right in front of my eyes, was feeling the Shravan's pain and Sumo's emotions.👏

Everything was just perfect, from Shravan saying "Tum janti thi ke main tumhe miss karta hoon", to Nirmala's candid talk, Sumo sending him text asking if he really missed her, Pushkar making both of them realise their love for each other, to Suman finally confronting and apologising to him. ⭐️

Sumo Day was great, as she said everything that was bottled up for so many years. And the way Shravan confessed was so romantic. Love that song. So apt for him as Sumo loving him back was everything to him.👏

Dips you got Reshma and now Eva to write. They both hid their talent from everyone and look when they started writing we get such beautiful stories.

So Eva don't you dare stop writing now. We want a new story soon. Love you.🤗🤗

Lubna.

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Blueheaven1999
Kisne kaha u can't write...
Such a good writer...
N liar too...

But.
U wrote well..
Hats off to u..

First time m itna achaa..
Aur ek m hu..
Start kiya tha. Kuch to hai..

But...
No one is interested...

Chalo.. Koi nhi all the best...
Keep writing..