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Castile2

@Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

How dare you?!

I ask, with all the rights bestowed upon me by the almighty, again, how on this earth you dare keep such beautiful talent from this forum and your loving friends?!

Man! Take a bow Lady! 👏

Why did I not get to read something, anything, from you before? (Rather did I miss any past escapades? I dearly hope not! 😕 )

First you watch all 60-68 odd episodes to write this. Salute to that effort, firstly. ⭐️

This was beautiful dear. "Why did this not happen on the show?"
I thought I was past that phase by now but clearly that does not seem to be the case, thanks to this work of your.

And yes. Some secrets are better swept under the carpet!

But. But. The highlight of this OS for me was the song! I'm a diehard fan of SANAM!! 😳

And their songs are on my only fav list on my phone!! Go figure...

So naturally, this was all the very special for me!!

Waiting for future works?!! *excited child*

Till then
Love
Cas 😳

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

you are great ! simply great👏. Its different to write a completely new story. But taking the original and changing the situations is a challenge. everything should be taken care of without spoiling the originality. Even the way of speaking and dialogues of the characters matters.

You took exactly the same scenes and dialogues and continued the essence in a completely different track. But still it feels original. Each and every talk between shraman are ON POINT...BINGOO

Exactly like how sumo speaks and exactly how shravan responds !. the places where she would cry and where she would laugh, the places where he would smile where he would try to interrupt, every single thing is original. We can relate them to our shravan and sumo from our heart.

Yes, our sumo would not sit idle and give space. She would take the sumo day there itself. would not wait until episode 90. She spoke almost all the happenings right from their childhood and their meeting after 10 years and cleared the fog. Nothing is missed out. Every damn misunderstandings are cleared. Right from the point, where she said, "Itni badi baat nahi thi" to why she looked for him for all help.

Its awesome.

If the same happened and the show ended immediately with 70 episodes we might have be on cloud nine, celebrating a short sweetest love story.

Would be happy, if you plan to write often 😊

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Eva my gudiya!

This one was way too nice that I read it twice!!

I hope you make it a TS or SS,rather it is my request samaj lo.

So I can expect more write-ups form you henceforth,hai na?

And a big thank you for Deepthi,you know why.

Thanks for the PM!!!

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Awesomely beautiful...

Loved it vmuch...

ShraMan are love...,.,.

Superb...

LavSriya

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AnOptimist

@AnOptimist

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

I honestly don't know what to say...Thank You Eva for taking us on a 68 episodes of edkv drive. Thank You so so so much!!! Loved it totally & would love to read more of your writings in future if you are willing to write 😊

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Oh my God Eva, what an absolutely wonderful OS this is 👏.. . I don't know how to Express my feelings right now...
That was indeed a beautiful episode... Shravan almost told his feeling to sumo...
He was angry because she always taken him for granted, when she need him, he was there but when he need her she choose her repuatation over him...
Good that sumo didn't listen to niru kaki and didn't give space to their relationship because they were apart from each other for 10 years, so giving space means more misunderstanding... So instead of staying away from each other they should talk to clear out misunderstandings. ..
Sumo and her plan 😃 Kabhi kamiyab hua hai jo aj hoga 😉
Shravan told absentmindedly to pushki that he loves sumo...
Pushkar is helping out Shravan and sumo to tell their feelings to each other... This is the real pushkar we know...
Finally sumo ne apni galti ko wholeheartdly accept kiya and speak her heart out. .. That was a wonderful confession.. Song is also very beautiful..
Finally Shravan and sumo are together... .

Luv
Smita