I Missed You- A ShraMan OS - Page 11

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

hey !! I'm overwhelmed after reading ur PM & thanku ..

Don't mu .. I read ur OS & only liked it & didn't comment coz I was in hurry ..

I surely liked it a lot ..

The best part was that after Shravan lashed out at Sumo,she went home & Nirmala gave her advise to give space .. But it was imp that not every advise is applicable in every relation ...

It was wise of Sumo that she finally understands that their relationship is ruined only bcoz there has been too much of distance & they need to end that by talking & revealing their feelings ..So I liked that ..

It was also amazing to see how he behaved stubborn teenage & kept ignoring her msg but missing her and she thought to not give up this time & to manao him this time ..

Pushkar played cupid & he was intelligent to go to Sumo coz it useless to talk to his tall stubborn head monster bhaiya😃

Sumo again on heart by taking the initiative & keeping aside "pehle wo bole fir mai bolungi"..

Her confession was so original & from heart ..

& his confession with song was icing on the cake ..

Indeed,clever & understanding gesture of Sumo to hide his mom's truth now , coz to reveal such huge fact u need to nurture ur relationship with trust,love & care..

Superb os this is ..👏😊

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

This was AMAZING Eva!!!

You have captured their emotions so beautifully. Especially the guilt Sumo has. It's something I always wanted to see but we never got. Shravan's anger and Love both beautifully exressed!!

You need to write more!

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: parboni

Saw your PM just today,although I read this writeup 2 days ago(blame my laziness in commenting).Revisiting the old days,aren't we?Wish something like this actually happened in the show.You don't seem to be an amateur going by your OS.Would definitely love to read more from you.

Originally posted by: AMNP

This was absolutely brilliant Eva and you have written it so beautifully incorporating every single detail 👏...It really could have been this way; I was actually imagining these scenes running in my mind between Shraman😛

Hey Marina, Thank you so much. I am so happy that you liked it.

Sumo's confession was indeed the highlight 'coz we had all been waiting to see her point of view...

Me too...I was expecting at least an "I Love You" But wo bhi naseeb na hua. 😕

Here our fighter Sumo just didn't give up and was determined to make Shravan understand her true love for him and how she's felt about him all those years they were apart and also accepting her mistake...

Thats the actual Sumo i knew. She would have done it this way only keeping her ego aside.

I'm sure if these scenes were incorporated, then the show would have been on a different tangent...but nevertheless we still love it.

Yup. It would have been on another level. But having said that, It will always be special to us no matter what. 😳

You also brought in Pushkar in this story and that made it more realistic coz I believe he's an integral part of Shraman's love story😊.

Absolutely he is. He is the one coz of whom these two were friends in the first place. So he had to have an important role , hence he becomes the cupid here. 😆

I understand how difficult a job it is to write, but if time permits and if possible, do keep writing 👍🏼😛

You know very well na how tough this was for me. 😆

But yaa... If ever, any amazing track strikes and i find the guts to write again, i will surely do. 😊

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Evaaa

Salehaaa. 😊

Ye kya hai ?

Ye kya hai yeh toh mein ab tak bhi nahi samaj paai. 😆

Kahan chup rahi thi aap?
Kafi chupi rustam nikli 😉

Sachi bata rahi hu it just happened. A fluke it is i say. 😉

First of all I'd like to say that I love this episode and it was a ride to the memory lane.

This is my birthday epi , very dear to me. 😊
The dialogues, the whole ambiance, our show was really something else ❤️

I concur...!!! ❤️

And the confession, god I know how much you love it when Sumo is open about her feelings and that makes us two 🥱

Yup, i love it when Sumo is vocal and expressive and i know very well that you love it too. Same pinch. 😉

But your Sumo is way way way better than mine. Hands down. 😊

Beautiful shot! I need to read more from you, you need to write more.

You will surely read more from me, but in your SS's comment section. 😆

I cant promise anything. But will definitely try. 😉
Thanks for the pm though 🤗

Originally posted by: evaviego

Hey Sara.

Thanks a lot for reading.

I am over joyed that you read this and liked it.

You are one of my fav writers and you commenting on my piece definitely means a lot.

Thank you so much. 😊

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Amazingly written. 👏👏👏

It took me back to the show, to ShraMan and their complicated dosti+love. 🤗

The dialogues are written perfectly.

I could visualize the scenes and feel what they felt.❤️

Nirmala said some sensible stuff here

and Pushkar was the cutiepie I adore so much. He's like their cupid minus the diaper and arrows. 😆

I loved Suman's apology, and even more loved her confession.

And how Shravan replied to that was ☺️

Fantastic job, dear.

Looking forward to read more from you.

Lots of love.

❤️

Originally posted by: MadhuGupta

Amazing update. Thanks for this is & pm.

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

That's really sweet Eva😳😳

I Had to comment!! Couldn't not😳

I look forward to reading more from you😃