Don't underestimate me -shraman os

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Posted: 8 years ago
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<font size="4">Hi guys !! I am back again to trouble you all !! But nowadays I seeing so many movies so idea aa jate hai aur mein kuch likh deti hu .
So this is an os and this is a combination of two -three movies but i will not tell you so try to guess it ..if you can
So enough of my bak bak
Now Lets start
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<font size="3">"Shravan this is so good !!!we are in goa woh "said excited ssuman
"Ha love ...i so haapy "...said shravan with content smile

As suman and shravan are there in second honeymoon accompanied by the pushkar and preeti .They are in goa for 4 days And they are staying in a longe which is located near the beach
As pushkar and preeti had already went for sight seeeing but suman and shravan are still in their room as shravan has some urgent work to do

"Waho shravan !!!!yeh kitna beautifull hai na "...said suman who is sitting near the window and looking outside

Ha !!!hu ...as shrvan is busy reading the file

"Shravan kya hai yaar !!hum yaha ghumne aae hai na ...tum kya yeh file leke baitho ho "pouted suman angrily

"Aacha baba !!!chalo bahar chalte and goes towards her and peck her lips "

Suman jumped in a joy ...and kisses her checks and smiled ...as how it is very easy to convince shravan .she hold his hand and they went outside

As suman is wearing a blue gown looking like a princess and shravan is wearing a white shirts with black shorts and looking extremly handsome

They went outside and playing with waves as waves were hitting the shores and they start splashing water and run behind each other
After lot of teasing and running they get tired and are sitting near the near shore talking with each other.. giggling ...clicking pictures ...cherishing the moments but suddenly some one tap on shravan's shoulder

"Shravan malhotra "...girl inquired
"Shanaya" !!!! Shravan asked confusingly

"Yes budddy !!!!thankgod tumne pehchan liya "...shanaya said dramatically

As shanaya is quite happy meeting the shravan after very long time and she immediately hug him and kisses on on his cheeks

Suman is watching everything and anger flickers in her eyes as who is she and how can she kisses her husband

"Yaar shravan tu toh aur bhi hot and sexy hoh gaya hai "...winked shanaya

"Shut up shanaya ...aur tu be kammal lag rahi hai" ...smirked shravan

"Tum yaha kaise ...matlab tum aur goa "...asked shanaya surprisingly

"Are mein toh yaha aapni wife ek sathh aaya !!!ek min ruko !!!are suman idhar aao "...signalling with his hand

Suman come forward and glaring at shanaya who is wearing 'backless short dress

"So meet my wife suman."... shravan said confidenly and puut a hand on her shoulder

Shanaya shook her hand with suman while gazing her from head to toe

"Hi suman !!!nice to meet.u !!!i am shanaya shravan 'college friend" ...shanaya said sweetly

"Vaise shravan!!!!college mein toh tumhe stylish ladkiya pasand thi ...joh short dress pehti ho and all ...but it seems like you are wife is exaaactlyyu opposite to it "...stressing on the last sentence and shifting her gaze from suman to shravan

"Shut up shanaya !!!voh sab college ki bate thi ...aur waise bhi suman se itne short dresses handle nahi hogi ...kyu suman maine sahi kaha ...shravan looked at suman

And suman passses a fake smile to shanaya who is intendly looking at her


What thr helll !!!!handle nahi hogi matlab!!! grumble in a low voice so that no one can listen

Now suman is started feeling uncomfortable with Shanaya presence as she made her feel that she is not upto shravan 's standard and also her dressing style ,her way of talking and most importantly her clossenes with her man !! her husband


"Shravan plz can we go back to our room !! Iam not feeling good "...suman said while grimacing at shanaya

"Suman tum jao ...i am coming" shravan said while removing his hand from suman 's shoulder and passes a smile to shanaya

Suman is shocked as she is not expecting this answer from shravan and she glared at shanaya goes from there as she is feeling neglected and unwanted

"Sanjtha kya yeh aapne aap ko u ...stylish ladkiya pasand hai ...ha !!!chashmish kahika"""blabbers suman while going towards the room

"Tum tu aur bhi hot hoh gaye hoh !!!bla ...bla .. bla " mimicked suman "chudail kahiki"

When she turn back to look at shravan but she saw he is stlll busy in talking to shanaya no tension of her wife ...and also they are giggling and shravan is laughing loudly as shanaya has said something in his ears

She fumed angrily because of their proximity and went back to their room

At night

"Ky hua suman tum itni upset kyu hao. "shravan asked as she was sitting on the corner of bed silently

"Kuch nahi !!!!bus thora thak gayi hu" ...as shravan is coming to suman but she pushed him

"Aacha tumhe shanaya kause lagi !!!beautiful hai na ...tumhe pata hai college ki sabse stylish ladki thi voh ...sab marte the uspar "

"Tum bhi "...suman rasied her eyebrows

Are sumo...ab itni hot ladki ko kon pasand nahi karenga na ...

And this statement made suman more furious as lava is ready to burst but somehow she calm herself
"Nahi beta sumo aise nahi ...isse mza chakta hi padhega "...smirked suman in mind

"Are kya soch rahi hoh "...shravvan asked while lying on the bed and pulling suman towards him

"Are kuch nahi ...passes a smile ...tum soh jao "pushed a shravan litle and make a diastance
"Beta tum toh kal dekna "!!!mein kya karti hu !!! Fir aana mere pass... looking at shravan and grin

Next morning

"Tum chalo shravan beech mein...pushkar aur preeti wait kar rahe honge na mein abhi aai "...said sweely to shravan

"Thike hai !!jaldi aana ...i am waiting "and kiss on her forehead and shravan goes from there

And suman went near the window she see again shravan is busy with shanaya who is again waering a short dresss and pushkar preeti are also there

After some time

Bhaiya !!!!shouted pushkar

"Kya hai !!?chilla kyu rah hai bhoot dekh liya hai joh shock laga hai !!!!!

"Shock toh aapko lagne vala hai bhaiya ...voh dekho" ...pushkar smirked signalling something at shravan 's back

When shravan turned back he was shocked as suman is wearing a revealing two piece bikini .
And everyone ...pushkar , preeti and shanaya are looking at suman with open mouth as one expected this especially from suman

And also on beach every guys was drolling over her as they couldn't take their eyes of her ...as she was looking dammm sexy as her creamy legs and waist are clearly visible

Suman come near them and said "Hi guys ...chalo beech mein chalte hai ...are shanaya muh band karlo nahi toh makki ghus jayegi and chuckles

But shravan is hell angry as all are looking at sumo so he come close to her and putting his hand around her waist and said in her ear "suman room mein chalo "

"Are shravan aabhi toh aae hai !!chalo lets enjoy na" suman said casually and removes his hand fron her waist and smirked !!as her plan is working

As when they alll went near the beach suddenly a guy come to suman
"Hi you are looking hot "and winked at suman

Shravan fist his hand and before suman could react shravan come in front of her

Excuse me !!what your problem!!!!and she is my wife ...so please leave

While shravan is boiling with anger but suman is enjoying the scene seeing her possessive husband

Shravan turned toward suman and hold 's suman hand tightly ..." suman i said come to the rooom "

"Are yaar shravan kya hai "...suman is irked

"Tumhe samaj mein nahi aa raha hai!!! Ya tum samjha nahi chahati hoh and pleaseee dont argue ...come with me right nowww !!!!!!said infuriated shravan

Shravan kya samajhana hai ...tum itna gussa kyu ho yaar !!!! Aur dekh na kitna aacha view hai

"Ha !! Bilkul bahut hiii acchaaa view hai ...grinning his teeth
"Aacha toh tum aise nahi maaagogi " shravan scooped her in his arms in a bridal style and went tovtheir room

"Leave me !!!shravan !!!kya kar rahe hoh !!utaro mujhe "...shouted suman but shravan is not in a mood to listen to anyone , his blood is boiling as how dare anyone look at his wife

As they reach room shravan pinned her aganist the wall with one hand and holding her waist with other
"Yeh kya pehna hai tumne !!hu!!!kya pehna hai" ...ask shravan angrily

"Achha toh hai shravan !!!i am feeling very relax in this" ..,.

"Sumo abhi jake change kareke aao !! "!shouted shravan

"Nahi shravan ...i said na i like these clothes
And what your promblem ha !!! Chilla kyu rahe ho "

"Problem !!!!matlab !!!!you are my wife dam it ...aur tum inhe kapade kehti hoh!! Yeh kapde hai ...bahar tumhe sab kasie dek rahethe !!tumhe hosh bhi hai ya nahi.."...

"Toh kya hua shravan ...ha !!! ..shanaya pehne toh aaache lagte hai ...aur agar khud ki biwi ne pehne toh bura laga !! ha"...said suman while rasing her voice

"Listen suman !!!!you are my wife not shanaya !!!!samhji tum ..aur in sab me shanaya beech mein kaha se aa gayi "...shravan cocked his eyebrows

"Ohh aacha !!!par tumne hi ne toh kaha tha ki voh kitni stylish and hot hai !!!yaad aaya"

"Aur kya that ki mein aise kapde handle nahi kar paongi !!!so seee i very much comfortable in this and next se " DONT UNDERESTIMATE ME "Samjhe "...raising her index finger

shravan snapped his eyes and realisation hit him and now he understand why suman is doing all this ..why she is wearing such clothes ...as she thinks that she is not stlish ...stupid girl ...and now why she is crying...i just hate her tears "oh god!! yeh ladki ek din mujhe pagal kar degi "

Sumo !!!!shravan said while cupping her face and come closer to her "sumo maine toh esse hi keh di thi voh baat ..mujhe nahi pata tha tum uss baat ko itna seriously logi ...wiipping her tears

"Shravan you hurt me !!very much"... Suman said while sobbing

" I am sorry baby!!!!please maaf kardo ".shravan said pleadingly and kusses on her forehead then on her eyes ...cheeks but when he move closer to her lips suddenly suman move her face to other side as tears are contionusly rolling from her eyes

But shravan made her look into his eyes while pulling her closer and said "sumo you are the most beautiful girl for me ...tum jaisi hoh vaisi hi aachi hoh ..dont try to change youself for anybody ...ok my baby!! my love '..please aage se aise kuch maat karna my love "

Suman nodded and hug him tightly

And with this shravan lift her in a bridal style and went to therir bed and pinning her under his mascular body
"Now can we focuss on our honeymoon" winked shravn
And suman smiled shyly and encircles her arm around his neck while pulling him closer
And he switches of the light and covers them with comforter
And in this ways their second dramatic honeymoon is completed </font>


So guys how was it
Tomatoes chappal aall are welcome
And sorry if I waste your time
But plz do comment evenn for the criticism also
But comment jarur karna

Tina


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Nik03 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ressi res 😳
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Unres
Wonderful OS dear... !!
Jealous Sumo... 😳
Dont underestimate your Sumo Shravan... 😉
Loved the ending...❤️
Lovely update dear...!!
Keep writing!!
Loads of Love
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jealousy! 😆
It was awesome Tina.. and yes, Shravan should never underestimate our Suman, because she is Sumo 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing one dea...
Jealous sumo was a treat...
Directly two piece...!!! Never Underestimate the power of a jealous wife...!!!!
Beauitfully written...!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jealous jealous jealous
Sumo in a bikini... seriously...i mean nikster will rock. but Sumo...its very much unlike Sumoness
loved the plot
its romantic...
jealous Sumo and jealous Shravan in one frame...its tooo good Tina
and second honeymoon...
loved it

love
Madhu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jalkukdi Sumo and Shravan is such a tease himself to ab bhugto!!
Sumoness on the beach. Pushkar ki aankhe fuut gayi 😆

Lovely OS. Fun to read. End was as hot as goa itself 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful one...
So they are on honeymoon Trip to goa 😉 doing honeymoon romance...
Sanaya ne sab bigad diya...
Sumo toh hai Jal kukudi 😃 😉 Sanaya teasing Shravan and saying he likes hot girls...
Sumo being sumo never back down from any challenge.. Sumo in bikini 😉 😃
Shravan and his possesiveness.. .
Love their last emotional part...
Actually NO one should underestimate sumo 😃
Excellent one and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful OS!!
Sumo and Shravan both are jealous...
The last part was so nicely penned...
And I couldn't guess the movies since I don't watch them anymore...
Thanks for the PM...
Do write more bcoz you are a good writer...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely one tiya...
Honeymoon romance 😉 Why Sanaya come between them 😡
Sanaya teasing Shravan saying he liked hot girl in college and now married to a simple girl, can understand sumo's hurt...
Shravan saying sumo se short dress handle nahi hoga, that's it, how sumo can back down from this challenge..
Sumo wearing a bikini 😃 Shravan must be angry knowing how possesive he is about sumo...
Finally Shravan realised why sumo did that...Love their convo..
Keep writing like this and thanks for pm
Edited by Arpi1234 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tiii...Yeh kitna accha likha baby!!
Goa...us par Shravan. ..aur sabse upar 2 piece mein Sumo!
Hotness kI dukaan! !😳

I specifically liked the way you described angry Shravan and the way he pacified her.
Maza aa gayaa!!

Lovely OS darling!!
Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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