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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Lol...tumhe sachmein IPS join kar Lena chahiye Saanjh...you have absolutely all the requisite qualities😆

Yup..babe...I am working on the next update. See, all you talented writers are busy..so we have to step out...I hope you complete your exams soon and give us plenty of OS and finish damaged for me. Curiosity has killed the cat in me multiple times ki Sumo ko aakhir kidnap kisne kiya.

Haina. ..you know...I already dislike his future girlfriend 😆


Abhi yeh keh ke confuse kar diya na! I seriously hope ki main jo soch rahi hoon wohi ho! Wow! So excited I am! Yeh ladki whoever it is, might have some similarities with Sumo, tabhi thoda bahut importance mila Shravan se! Yayyy! What will happen when Sumo, will come to know about that girl! See, how your story gotten into me! Literally driving me crazy! Update soon, please pretty please! I have exam no!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Sara...I am so glad you liked it. .and even more glad that you enjoyed my effort to hook😆.
I will unveil Shravan'so wife in the next episode.

I have always wanted to tell you how much I love tears and confessions. .it's a scene that I yearned for..dreamt about. .but never happened on Sony. I am waiting for you to write more.


Hehehe😆
I am really looking forward to the next chapter, so you have to update soon😉😳


Awww you are really sweet! I really wished for it too
I don't know if i can continue it, but i will try writing as much as I can on them😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Aaa😃😃


She wrote she wrote and oh how beautiful is it!!!

I knew you YOU CAN WRITE you moron what took this so long!!

So I wake up rubbing my eyes annoyed and look up and the next moment my face has a 440 volt pasted across it and I am pumping fists in excitement. People nearly thought today is the day I lost all of them marbles 🤪

Thank you twinnie for the dedication and you are impeccable👏

Cant wait for more my sunday sensation.🤗


They are married to others who they seem to be happy with... Aah the pains of a regular life. But I am sure the edventure will begin soon. Not that I support anyone breaking marriage vows... Sorry for being a prude. But then ye Shraman hain. Technical difficulties ho bhi jaaye, unko milna hai... Aur milwana farz hai hamara. Interesting story line.

And sachchi bowled me with the surprise, excited to read further like I cant tell you how!!

And so happy for you. Welcome to the world of deep crazy!! Ab tak hum sirf pagal bhakt the, ab imagination ke ghode daudenge and your mind cannot think of anything else much henceforth. This is certain doom and the perfect way to end I would say 😆

Cant shut up. Gale lag ja yaar🤗


Mujhe. .who aa gaya. .woh aa gaya..Monicaaa wale feels aa rahe hai😆
I have been laughing non stop here and my househelp just called her agency asking for another deployment. ..her reason..madam acts weird 😆

I am so glad we weren't in the same class as kids.
We would have remained illiterate courtesy being shown out of the classroom almost always for incessant chattering🤣

See...Shraman toh ek hi rahenge. .main unhe kabhi alag nahi karoongi. .so no fear there.

How I navigate. .if I do. .is the question.

I wrote this in like 20 minutes waiting for a client at a cafe. ..and now I am totally blank how to move further. .SS ka waada bhi kar liya...I mean rough sketch hai ..but how to put it down..bekar panga le liya Dips. .pagal. .tu officially depressed thi. .socha tujhe khush karoongi. .ab kya karoon😕

Chal time being ke liye gale lagte hain. .now I need a hug😲


Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Mujhe. .who aa gaya. .woh aa gaya..Monicaaa wale feels aa rahe hai😆
I have been laughing non stop here and my househelp just called her agency asking for another deployment. ..her reason..madam acts weird 😆

I am so glad we weren't in the same class as kids.
We would have remained illiterate courtesy being shown out of the classroom almost always for incessant chattering🤣

See...Shraman toh ek hi rahenge. .main unhe kabhi alag nahi karoongi. .so no fear there.

How I navigate. .if I do. .is the question.

I wrote this in like 20 minutes waiting for a client at a cafe. ..and now I am totally blank how to move further. .SS ka waada bhi kar liya...I mean rough sketch hai ..but how to put it down..bekar panga le liya Dips. .pagal. .tu officially depressed thi. .socha tujhe khush karoongi. .ab kya karoon😕

Chal time being ke liye gale lagte hain. .now I need a hug😲



Dude I gotta go out in an hour and no one is bathed here as I get busy smiling and fist pumping again.

Its like you won a game. I have the perfect cheer for you too..


Rolll Tiiide!!!😆

Thank you sweety. Seriously I was with two days of forum discussions i am staring blank at my own stories not able to come up with anything. But aaj din chadhyea... Aaj to likhungich mai!!

Hum agar ek school me hote to anpadh reh jaate pakka 👍🏼

Lol would ve been fun tho 🤣

If you whipped this in 20 mins then fear not you ll come up with nothing but amazing. My word.

Also this makes me think we should check our birth records kahi siamese to nahi hain hum😉 mummy ko puchna padega kahi mai adopted to nahi hoon😆


Heres your bone crushing jhappi🤗

Edited by deltadawn - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: anukulgr8


Finallly we had an update....Kuch der pehle this place was silent more than a samshan😆
Coming to the chapter...
COOL...!!!!Looks like a dark story...(my mind thinks all suspense is dark #buddhusamaan)
Intruging chappy...
So sumo ke abhi abhi shaadi huyi hai...Hmmm
Seems like a very bad past...
Aur Shravu...Hez too married...Plz us ladki ka naam Urvashi mat rakhna..PLEEAASSEEE😳
Aisa kya hua tha yaar..??😕She loved him madly...What about him??
Hope he loved her too...Yaar phir usko pata nahi but he aslo loves...Yaa phir onsided...Ya phir Ramu ke tarah kisi ne dhamki de di...
Lot of Questions...Answers??Your next update..!!!😃
Please unravel that dhamaka Update soonnn..
Eagerly waiting for the cat to come our of the box...
Love,
ANU😊
And ya plz do PM me..😃


Lol. .no Anu..Urvashi or Aditya dono nahi hai is party me in.
I will disclose what happened soon.
Nahi yaar. ..bilkul dark nahi hai..I don't mind reading a dark story but writing one is a different cup of tea altogether.
Main jaldi update karoongi Anu. ..all the questions will be answered.
Waise bhi har kisi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagii mein😆
I am glad you liked it babe!


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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: amks2016

Omg Resh 🤗

It's sooo intriguing .. first day yaar ,, been catching up in btwn .,, can't wait 😳

But S& S married to sumone else 😕 nahinnn 😭 filmy istyle
Thoda over ho Gaya 😆

Can't wait to see how this goes ! Good luck buddy n cheers


Mayuuu..happy to see you liked it.
Today was fairly light for me...so wrote this.
Nahin re. ..kuch over nahi hua. .tu ne hamari nautanki dekhi hai na😆
Thanks sweetie. .I can really use those good luck wishes right now😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry yaar, actually I was not commenting.. I was writing something then it just posted here.. Don't know how to delete, so it will remain here.. Don't comment on this one
Edited by Arpi1234 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Res
I need to read this like right now. One of the best commenter has written something and I am sure I am going to love this.


Aww Saleha🤗...Do read it and let me how you found it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Sachi mein adich polichu.😊

And koi baat nahi if you only have a rough idea, take your time but haan dont leave it mid way, Pura khatam karna 😉

And mera photo. Bad idea. Ek word bhi likhne ka mann nahi karega phir 😆😆

Sparkplug...!!! 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Whose POV it is I m sure that is not Suman's..Suman ki shaadi kisi aur se ho that is impossible but her name also starts from S & 5 letters..suspense...the way Shravan went towards dias I m sure he is in love with his wife & he proposed her that day then yeh toh Sumo hi ho sakti hai heina..

Shraman will marry different person it shouldn't be happen...

Nice writing dear

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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