Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 69

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Yes I'm here too 😉

Vo kya h na jaha achi achi interesting + shraman story hoti h vaha Harshi pahuch hi jato h 😆😆

Well jokes sapart I really like your work your story has something different that's why I'm here too😃

Originally posted by: vimikrao

The letter touched, how Shravan felt after reading it even me 😭

Aww man 🤗
Someday her knight would return to her never to go back again & keep his princess in his castle safe & sound.
Yes, yes he will!
waiting for leap, Shraman bade ho gaye 😳

Yo😛

Thanks for PM Zoya
Pleasure!
Vinu

Originally posted by: orion23

Pur-sukoon the ruhaniyat ke noor mai iss qadar,

Saa-at aye izteraar ki ahat bhi na hui,

Woh ke bhi na paaye mohobbat hai,

Aur shama yuhin bezaar hui...

Originally posted by: Nik03

Lafzon ke bojh se thak jaati hai

zubaan kabhi kabhi

Na jaane khamoshi majboori hai

ya Samjhdaari...

Originally posted by: orion23

Kehte hai khamooshi samjhdaari ki nishani hoti hai,

Zindagi begaani hai, aur maut mukarar,

Phir kyun khaamosh rehkar dard peete ho,

Keh do, keh do jo dil mai hai,

Ke kal saans na ho par sukoon ho,

Keh diya, keh diya jo kehna tha..

I have read till chapter 7 and I will be reading the rest soon but first I need to comment on each one of them, otherwise mujhe ajeeb lagta hai (I need to analyze things 😆). Detailed comments soon on your way! 😎

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Originally posted by: Nik03

Woh dard hi kya jo aankhon

se beh jaaye..

Wo khushi hi kya jo hothon

pe reh jaaye..

Kabhi to samjho khamoshi meri..

Wo baat hi kya jo aasani se

Alfaaz ban jaaye...

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I have read till chapter 7 and I will be reading the rest soon but first I need to comment on each one of them, otherwise mujhe ajeeb lagta hai (I need to analyze things 😆). Detailed comments soon on your way! 😎

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

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Sick leave has its own advantages! !😆