Hum Tum theard 2 part 37 mature(page 31)

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Hey Piya. ..I am commenting here after ages..I couldn't bear the Sumo molestation part back then, so decided to come back once she was done with the ordeal and then somewhere down the line kind of lost track..last night I sat and read the whole story beginning from the molestation part...and then couldn't stop reading till this page 8 of this thread 2..took me 1 long hour and no regrets there..enjoyed every bit you penned..you are a fabulous writer 👏

This part was beautiful to say the least. .Sumo's love, her fear when he got sick , her thoughts on moving away from the painful memories. .everything was awesome. My heart actually skipped a beat when Pushkar found Sumo amiss..and what a relief when she was found 😳. .looking forward to the next update eagerly!!

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Wonderful update...Bechari sumo ko rula hi diya shravan ke mazak be..

"Tujhe pata nahi pushkar suman ka asli roop... How wild she is.. Kya kya karwati hai tere masoom bhai se... "🤣

Looking forward to next chapter

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Thanks for updating one day earlier!

Amazing update as usual!

Pushkar's concern for sumo, how sweet he is😊!

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Harshi Arora

@Harshi_ta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

pushkar bechara😆 subko subah subah jada diya sumo ko dhundne k chakkar m 😃but bechara dar bhi to kitna gaya tha itna pyar jo karta h sumo se 😳but jb sab log shrman k room pahuch gaye😆 ohh god pushkar to gaya 🤣shrvn bimar hua chalo theek h bina jecket k tha or raat ko romiogiri bhi ki but di ye doctor n blood test k liye kyu kaha😕 plz koi serious baat mat karna age plz😔 or sumo phir se ankel pain shuru jb shrvn ko pata lagega to kya hoga 🥱

waiting for next part😛 ganne k khet m jhule and all and di koi tension na lo jese aap pushkar and lalaji or kamini chachi k dailogues likhti ho na bs vese hi likhtti rehna😊 as i told you punjabi are joyfull, hamesha musti karne wale .so all the best for next part👍🏼

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Wow Once again a wonderful update. ..
Pushkar couldn't find sumo jab ki sumo was with Shravan in bed..
Love sumo's care for Shravan..

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humaira

@humairayousaf78

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

thank you thank youuu piya di for updating😃

this update was like surprise for me

when i got up in the morning my eyes shot open by receiving pm from you...😲

thank you for update one day earlier😊

the update as always was amaaaziiingg

it was too romantic😳

i love balcony wala scene but bechari sumo naaraz hi ho gai but mere pyare shravan ne mana liya

but os ko tempreture ho gya😭

sumo ne shravan ka bohat ache se khayal rakha ilove it !❤️

and the last shravan ko doodh pillao mission 🤣

OMG wo bhi mere tarha doodh nahi pita bohat acha karta ha👍🏼

and sumo ankel pain jb shravan ko pata chaly ga to kya hoga wo naraz hi na ho jaye phirse🤔

waiting for romance in punjab trip yahooo!

you know piya di mein ne pehle weekend khaatam hone ka intezar kabhi bhi nai kiya tha but now i like... i pray please weekend khatam ho jay or hume update mil jay

waiting for your one day earlier surprise update

update soon soon!😊

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

yay .. finally .. amazing update ..

U brought out Sumo's inhibitions & her thoughts really well .. Shravan acting Rahul with hands stretched in cold & song on lips giving romantic SRK feels .. 😳 that was cute .. Pushkar really pissed him off when he was all ready to take the next step in relation & with Sumo confessing her love has sent him out of control .. but intezar me bhi maza hai Mr malhotra 😉 possessive sumo - can't even bear the thought of him being with sm1 else .. so cute ..

Pushkar is really very loving & caring towards Sumo 🤗 But he made a fool of himself without looking for her in bed closely .. shravan is ready to kill him - Bhai mat bol mujhe tu sumo ka bhai hii reh ... Saala kahin ka...🤣 poor pushkar !!

the whole shravan falling sick thing scene was written beautifully .. 👏 her panicking when he didn't respond,calling Pushkar out .. taking him for shower alone .. indeed its difficult to manage a 6'4" strong man who's not in senses along with the pain for seeing him in so much trouble .. she really loves him more than anything without caring for her pain ..

Shravan's family & frnds r really loving .. pushkar embarrasing her by calling him despo,& shravan adding to his blush 😉

waiting for punjabi munda & kudi ..

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Nice update with kabab mein haddi free

Shraman ki jaldi milan karwado nehin toh humara Shravan sab ka jeena haram kar dega specially Pushkar ka jo uska pyaar ka dushman hai jar waqt wrong timing pe usko ana hota hai... Pushkar was searching for Sumo while she was peacefully sleeping with her hubby...Suman's concern for Shravan is very touchy itne bukar mein shahzzade ko romance sooj tha hai...

Thanks for PM

Vinu