Hum Tum theard 2 part 37 mature(page 31) - Page 8

Originally posted by: priety.priti

nice update

Originally posted by: Tiii28

Hi piya di
Again nice update 👏
Kya likti hoh aap
Shraman romance wah !!wah !!
Pushkar is not able to find and she was with shravan !!!this scenes is epic
And then concerned suman ...so emotion
Suman naraz hui thori der ke liye ... i want to see more of naraz suman and manao shravan
😳
Alll the emotions are beautifully penned...happy sad romantic emotional
Waiting for next
Update soon
Much love
Tina
😊

Originally posted by: srividyasubbu1

Piyaji,

Awesome update as usual. Now hoping to see some desi tadka.

Waiting for the next update.

- Sri

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hey Piya. ..I am commenting here after ages..I couldn't bear the Sumo molestation part back then, so decided to come back once she was done with the ordeal and then somewhere down the line kind of lost track..last night I sat and read the whole story beginning from the molestation part...and then couldn't stop reading till this page 8 of this thread 2..took me 1 long hour and no regrets there..enjoyed every bit you penned..you are a fabulous writer👏

This part was beautiful to say the least. .Sumo's love, her fear when he got sick , her thoughts on moving away from the painful memories. .everything was awesome. My heart actually skipped a beat when Pushkar found Sumo amiss..and what a relief when she was found😳. .looking forward to the next update eagerly!!

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

I m so sorry reshma
Actually wanted to potrait tge current situation of india..
Social awareness

But thank u that u loked the rest of the parts
I hope i will not dissapoint u again

Originally posted by: amlavs

Res

--unres--

Wow... as usual it's amazing...

ShraMan romance is do lovely..

Loving this family very much...some family drama will be boring..but here u make it simple but nice...

Excited for next track..hope v ll get nice and romantic ShraMan romance too...

Thx for pm...

LavSriya