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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ok... So this is my contri to #mission850

A drabble series with either Shravan or Sumans POV on certain scenes of certain episodes of EDKV.

I will write a new post everytime amd when I get some free time will index before and after drabbles on the page for continuity for the reader..

Abhi to this is from cellphone so no frills will edit once I get time.


Tell me frankly how this is and if I should continue.. I am a newer member so if this looks repititve tell me that too, and I ll change it or something..

This one is Shravan POV from episode 4.

"Mai kisi Sumo ko nahi jaanta" there I said it. Did Pushkar believe it? Looks like he did... It was more to make myself believe...


She walked out of the house.. beautiful

.. just beautiful. Death has to be like this..she can make every particle of blood trickle out of my heart and I d still be smiling like an idiot.. because it was her stabbing me.. Stop.. don't turn around.. if our eyes meet, I am sure my walls would break... It took me several years to build them.. I need them intact for my survival...


No don't go.. was she crying? Did she hear it when I said I don't know who Sumo is... huh..If I don't know Sumo... Then I would have forgotten Shravan in the same moment.. only then is it possible for forget the name that I gave you... To forget you... To forget what you did to me..


My source of information... Facebook.. how can someone so cruel look so innocent at the same time.. I thought I could do it.. but no I need to go back.. go far away from you... I have no solace there also, but then the anticipation of meeting you, knowing you... Knowing that you are still the same cold hearted girl after so many years... It would keep me restless.. I don't know if I want to know whether you have changed.. I don't know how I will be if you have or even if you haven't..



Why is being in love with you so difficult Sumo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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me first ya ya

plz continue this drabble series dips.
its very good, shravans pov good start, loved this one ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!!!
Don't think of stopping. This was amazing. In just few words you described Shravan's predicament so well. Will eagerly wait for the next one.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You are on a roll Dips !
His feelings are beautifully penned down :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start...U have described shravan's inner turmoil Very well..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww...this one is so perfect! You better write it dipss_s...loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful ... emotional ... 😊 lovely ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Beautiful ... emotional ... 😊 lovely ...


U r here did u update ?😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww this is beyond beautiful hun...please continue!!


Btw who said 'BEING IN LOVE' is ever easy!!!😆😉



Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!!!
You described Shravan's inner turmoil very well.👏
Loved it

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