ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 72

Originally posted by: rajiti

Hey Saleha,
This is absolutely beautiful. I told u last time that your writing has made them alive for me and you continue to do so. Specially given your age. Hats off to you! I cannot wait for the very happy chapters.
Rajiti.

Yes, I remember and that was one of the most beautiful compliment I have received. ❤️

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Yes, I remember and that was one of the most beautiful compliment I have received. ❤️

And I can't wait to write them 😃

Super late reply.. probably the last one😆!!

Originally posted by: Ranified009

Super late reply.. probably the last one😆!!

But what an awesome piece Sal...can't get detached from them and the story by virtue of such beautiful pieces. And finally no heart breaks❤️

The conversations are really beautiful. Waiting for the next one. Thanks for the PM babe!!❤️

Last one matlab??
Thank you so much ❤️
Missed you here ❤️

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Last one matlab??
Thank you so much ❤️
Missed you here ❤️

Originally posted by: Ranified009

Last one mane..I think I'm the last one to comment in this chapter..sab kar diya mere se pehley😆

Oh accha 😆
Yes I think you are 😆

Are we reaching 100 pages? 😃 😆

So Shravan proposed Sumo for remarriage, but Sumo asked little time.
Shravan is really hurt, he is right Nirmala got his substitute but he didn't have one.
Shravan is still not able to share his sadness or his sorrow from Sumo.

Thanks for PM Sal
sorry i m late

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Oh God, this is the first time someone made a cover for me, I might cry, this is so so so sweet./COLOR] ❤️

Wow!![/DIV]

One of the nicest things that started in #17... stayed in 17 and is continuing in #18 !!
[COLOR=blue]It's all thanks to you guys!

Though my comments have become too monotonous to my own liking, and is a reason behind the bulk of reses I have, this has to be unresed... #AnniversarySpecial !😳
Your comments are the best! Bas!

before grabbing one of his t-shirt and her pyjamas and changed into them... loving this habit of hers.
Me too! ;)

I really hope this happiness is here to stay... and she gets over the fear of being on cross-roads again!
Shravan haina he'll make it happen!

Bound by fate! Sigh!

he preferred the couch instead of the bed, because no matter how short the period of separation may be, he couldn't go to sleep without her.❤️

folded the corner of the page❤️
I know you would pick up the little things.❤️

Unconscious smiles...

Sumo ko suit n tie pasand hai...😆 Men's fashion... jhalli she was !
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Mujhe acha lagta hai jab tum mujhe aise dekhte ho," ...hye!
Sighhh

A new you !❤️

Lekin ab lagta hai ke tum khudh chabi mere haathon main de rahi ho, aisa lag raha hai ke hum saath chal rahe hai," He said happily.❤️
Remember when he wanted to know the 'new you'


10 p.m. reminder! #edkvSlot!
Forever wala slot!

I'll always swing the swing for you." His voice a mere whisper to himself as well... the promise !
❤️

...than other people ...who are these people flashing their pearl white smile in vain. ..😆

Chomudents!

[LO] 😆 😆


Chashmish n Shravan... contrast !⭐️
I loved writing this part!

And sweets," He added as an after-thought😃

Shravan ki Sumo, Sumo ka Shravan."

Shiv ki sharanya.. Sharanya ka shiv rings in my ears these days... classic case of plagiarism!😆
Original to original hi hota hai ;)

Thanks for this reminder.

"I wrote you, volumes." His throat clogged.💔<

"Was I a difficult child?"💔

I wanted to write "Was I a difficult child to live with" then changed it Idk why😆

"Is it why it was easier for you to leave me?"🥺

Some one had to shed a few tears,, I did knew it would be me !😭Sal! What did you do !
I shed some too, while writing it... 😆

Sumo's thumb kept caressing the back of his hand... gestures like these!

I wanted him to confront his mother alone at first but decided otherwise!

"I might be your husband's son but I am not him. I'll never ask you to choose."⭐️

I am more than the son abandoned by his mother," stellar!⭐️

you didn't even try..." that's the whole point.

One of the finest mother-son face off I have ever read or seen... after Humsafar !👏

GOD TABBY STOP, too much praise comparing it to Humsafr is too much, I don't know what to say...

For the first time, the room was drowned in total darkness... #15

The room was drowned into the darkness. The only source of light was oozing from the bathroom. #1

"I am here, I am holding you." #15❤️

He did not know what happened but he found himself falling on the cold marble.
She kicked him !#1

What an incredible journey so far !! Sigh !!
It wouldn't have been possible without you guys, forever grateful ❤️

Life personified! ! HY !!

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Come here you 🤗

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Saleha!!

I don't have words to describe this properly.

You are marvelous👏

This is so beautiful, soothing and liberating.

All at once.

Thank you so much Apoorva! ❤️

"Mujhe acha lagta hai jab tum mujhe aise dekhte ho,"

You created your own parallel to the show...amazing👍🏼
I love parallels so had to create mine ;)

"I'll always swing the swing for you."

This was all she ever wanted...someone to be with her.
She never had big wishes, our Sumo.

And you say you don't know how to write fluff😕

That's something I still think to be true 😆

I was so happy when this chapter started...i was like happy Shraman finally.

But then Nirmala happened🥺

I absolutely loved their conversation ...i still remember his sadness whenever nirmala would leave in the initial chapters.

"I might be your husband's son but I am not him. I'll
never ask you to choose."

Something that both Nirmala and Sumo had to realise.
Exactly not only Nirmala but Sumo as well, you noticed that!

And then the last line of Sumo that pretty much sums up ..this whole FF for me👏

Super Excited for the next.

Do update soon.

Apoorva

Thank you so much Apu if I may call you so 🤗