Originally posted by: Nik03
Sal🤗
Finally here I am.
Sooo Sorry for being this late.
Life kept me bust n then I guess...
For chapter 8.
This chapter is one of my fav Sal.It had every damn thing I wanted to read, in what ever way I want to.
N FYI...You my girl made me cry.and I dont cry easily.Always in control.
I am so glad you liked this one because I really enjoyed writing it!The starting...Oh my Good Lord.
Shravan's feels...written in the best way possible.
N I would say the feelings there, its what every person feels in his/her life somewhere.The innermost feelings of a being that he cant share with anyone.
Tonight, he could hate and no one would say a word. He could destroy himself and no one would ever know...I love this one!!❤️
For the longest time I didn't know how to start the chapter so one day while jogging, I got the idea. I feel that we all have a little bit of Shravan inside of us, because he was so real!PCT...Sumo's pride.Her dream ,her hard work.
I still can remember that epi.How broken Sumo was.N it somehow made me think...if Shravan at that time stayed quite and accepted about him being the reason of PCT's demolition just for his father and didnt thought about Sumo's feelings...Was it right to blame her to this extend for not choosing Shravan over her family??
There is more of Shravan understanding Sumo and vice versa in chapter 10 ;)Really Loved the whole scenario at PCT...Specially Preeta and Shravan both looking at the Board. ❤️
Now he realised how much Sumo had to go through to achieve what she had on her own.When nobody was there for her to support instead she had to take care of all as well as herself.Its not easy...not in any way!!
He was never there and he realized that he had also failed as her best friend, many times... I soo Loved it Sal!
Not only Sumo but somewhere Shravan too failed!
Basically I love characters with real flaws and my favorite kind of acne is when a character realizes his mistakes!Their Love is complicated coz they as individuals are complicated and confused.They gave importance to their ego and self respect and never let them go.Never cleared out things while jumping blindly to the conclusions.The trust is what they never had.
And yess...they were never different.
Shravan had done the same if not more.
Your analysis is bang on!Shravan-Ramnath convo.
The best part ❤️ ❤️
I cant explain how much I loved it Sal...I always wanted to see something like this...and I got it finally.Thanks to you for this.🤗
I always had questions in my mind regarding this and you gave me my answers through Ramnath himself that too straight to Shravan.
What can I ask for more.
I am not gonna pin point here coz...it is perfection.Every action, every reaction, every move, every dialogue specially the way it was said in there was outstanding!!👏
Kudos to the writer!!
I absolutely love writing their scenes, what they gave us onscreen was so beautiful, it inspires to write. One of my favorite bit ❤️
SharaMan's lil accidental moment was a treat!
The attraction was there making it more real.
The way Shravan was Holding her hand was just love.This is where they belong!!
I would have love fro see this transition developing onscreen how they would be awkward at the smallest touches, but deep down they would be so affected.The car ride...aww!!
Both were thinking the same yet different.
Pushkar Preeti...Well tbh I never found their love as the real love.
It doesnt gave you the feels.There wasnt any understanding.
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Whereas with ShraMan...Their love had lived a life.</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">There is friendship so pure, care, understanding...yearning, pain, separation, hatred in love and love in hatred.Their love is what defines Love.No matter how complicated it.The thing that matters is that it still had bound the in a way that no matter how hard they try or how much circumstances turn worst, they'll be together...Always!!</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">This is why ShraMan is ShraMan!!</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Their love didnt happened overnight.It is a love of life...of so many years!!</font>
You have explained it so beautifully that I can only nod my head yes. 😆
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his little finger hooking with hers...Can anything be more beautiful?
A simple gesture in comparison to PreeKar's open affection yet their stood above all!!
Everyone seemed to have liked this moment ❤️
Nanu-ShraMan.
ALways a treat to see them in one frame.The bond and love they had is just overwhelming!!
Loved their convo too❤️
Specially Shravan's question and more Nanu's answer to it❤️ ❤️
Nanu is❤️
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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">The smile on their faces to see their families together happy and content...This is ShraMan.</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">They were the ones who found happiness in their loved ones.The family waali feeling is the best feeling and ShraMan rules there.</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">They were not just the two of them, it was always them as a unit.</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">#EDKVfam.</font>
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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Ah...Cant explain what I felt reading this part Sal!❤️ ❤️</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">The feeling of Shravan all the while was exactly what I was feeling at that time.Such impact it had left Sal👏</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">N those words of Sumo...Oh My!</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">I frigging cried...For Sumo, for Shravan!!</font>
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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Na Meri Koi Manzil Hai</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Na Koi Kinara</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Tanhai Meri Mehfil Aur Yaadein Mera Sahara</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Tujh Se Bichad Ke Humne, Kuch Yu Waqt Gujara</font>
These lines are so so beautiful!!❤️
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Kabhi Zindagi Ko Tarshe, Kabhi Maut Ko Pukara</font>
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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">The following convo of ShraMan took my heart away!</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Sumo's care and worry...Shravan's reaction, his guilt.</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">And then finally finally he asked!</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">He asked and she reacted!❤️ ❤️</font>
Love Love Loved it❤️
Their story...Ek ne sunai , dusre ne suni...❤️
The picture perfect moment...
One day...!!
The ending.❤️
Peaceful one.!!
The Swing...Pata nahi kitni yaadein judi hai!
Their bickering...their embrace...again their bickering...their laughter...my happiness...Our happiness!!😃
The last bit was so so touching.
Kiss on forehead
I have a thing for tight hugs and forehead kisses ❤️
And you gave both!!
This was a bliss moment for me.
I sooo love the lil lil things you have added in the upi Sal though I cant point all of them.
Like the crackling sound of Swing...a drop of rain, flicked into Shravan's eye, making it close on instinct...And and and not to forget...
The way you have added this one in this whole whole upi from time to time...
Holding Hands...Holding You!!❤️ ❤️
Killed it Sal👏
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Am at peace n you know why!!</font>
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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Thanks a tonnn for this and for bearing with me even after I came after so so much time.❤️</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Means a lot to me!</font>
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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Thanks for the PM.</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Lots n lots of Love🤗</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Nikka sa Nik!</font>
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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">P.S. Will comment on the remaining parts soon😊</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">P.P.S It is still less than what I can write on this upii but there should be a limit na.I cant write an OS for this upi...though I dont know how long it is now!😆</font>
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