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Posted: 8 years ago
Sal🤗
Finally here I am.
Sooo Sorry for being this late.
Life kept me bust n then I guess...

For chapter 8.
This chapter is one of my fav Sal.It had every damn thing I wanted to read, in what ever way I want to.
N FYI...You my girl made me cry.and I dont cry easily.Always in control.

The starting...Oh my Good Lord.
Shravan's feels...written in the best way possible.
N I would say the feelings there, its what every person feels in his/her life somewhere.The innermost feelings of a being that he cant share with anyone.
Tonight, he could hate and no one would say a word. He could destroy himself and no one would ever know...I love this one!!❤️

PCT...Sumo's pride.Her dream ,her hard work.
I still can remember that epi.How broken Sumo was.N it somehow made me think...if Shravan at that time stayed quite and accepted about him being the reason of PCT's demolition just for his father and didnt thought about Sumo's feelings...Was it right to blame her to this extend for not choosing Shravan over her family??

Really Loved the whole scenario at PCT...Specially Preeta and Shravan both looking at the Board. ❤️
Now he realised how much Sumo had to go through to achieve what she had on her own.When nobody was there for her to support instead she had to take care of all as well as herself.Its not easy...not in any way!!
He was never there and he realized that he had also failed as her best friend, many times... I soo Loved it Sal!
Not only Sumo but somewhere Shravan too failed!

Their Love is complicated coz they as individuals are complicated and confused.They gave importance to their ego and self respect and never let them go.Never cleared out things while jumping blindly to the conclusions.The trust is what they never had.
And yess...they were never different.
Shravan had done the same if not more.

Shravan-Ramnath convo.
The best part ❤️ ❤️
I cant explain how much I loved it Sal...I always wanted to see something like this...and I got it finally.Thanks to you for this.🤗
I always had questions in my mind regarding this and you gave me my answers through Ramnath himself that too straight to Shravan.
What can I ask for more.
I am not gonna pin point here coz...it is perfection.Every action, every reaction, every move, every dialogue specially the way it was said in there was outstanding!!👏
Kudos to the writer!!

SharaMan's lil accidental moment was a treat!
The attraction was there making it more real.
The way Shravan was Holding her hand was just love.This is where they belong!!

The car ride...aww!!
Both were thinking the same yet different.
Pushkar Preeti...Well tbh I never found their love as the real love.
It doesnt gave you the feels.There wasnt any understanding.
Whereas with ShraMan...Their love had lived a life.
There is friendship so pure, care, understanding...yearning, pain, separation, hatred in love and love in hatred.Their love is what defines Love.No matter how complicated it.The thing that matters is that it still had bound the in a way that no matter how hard they try or how much circumstances turn worst, they'll be together...Always!!
This is why ShraMan is ShraMan!!
Their love didnt happened overnight.It is a love of life...of so many years!!

his little finger hooking with hers...Can anything be more beautiful?
A simple gesture in comparison to PreeKar's open affection yet their stood above all!!

Nanu-ShraMan.
ALways a treat to see them in one frame.The bond and love they had is just overwhelming!!
Loved their convo too❤️
Specially Shravan's question and more Nanu's answer to it❤️ ❤️
Lovely!!

The smile on their faces to see their families together happy and content...This is ShraMan.
They were the ones who found happiness in their loved ones.The family waali feeling is the best feeling and ShraMan rules there.
They were not just the two of them, it was always them as a unit.
#EDKVfam.

Shravan and Sumo's room.
Ah...Cant explain what I felt reading this part Sal!❤️ ❤️
The feeling of Shravan all the while was exactly what I was feeling at that time.Such impact it had left Sal👏
N those words of Sumo...Oh My!
I frigging cried...For Sumo, for Shravan!!

Na Meri Koi Manzil Hai
Na Koi Kinara
Tanhai Meri Mehfil Aur Yaadein Mera Sahara
Tujh Se Bichad Ke Humne, Kuch Yu Waqt Gujara
Kabhi Zindagi Ko Tarshe, Kabhi Maut Ko Pukara

The following convo of ShraMan took my heart away!
Sumo's care and worry...Shravan's reaction, his guilt.
And then finally finally he asked!
He asked and she reacted!❤️ ❤️
Love Love Loved it❤️

Their story...Ek ne sunai , dusre ne suni...❤️
The picture perfect moment...
One day...!!

The ending.❤️
Peaceful one.!!
The Swing...Pata nahi kitni yaadein judi hai!
Their bickering...their embrace...again their bickering...their laughter...my happiness...Our happiness!!😃
The last bit was so so touching.
Kiss on forehead
I have a thing for tight hugs and forehead kisses ❤️
And you gave both!!
This was a bliss moment for me.

I sooo love the lil lil things you have added in the upi Sal though I cant point all of them.
Like the crackling sound of Swing... a drop of rain, flicked into Shravan's eye, making it close on instinct...And and and not to forget...
The way you have added this one in this whole whole upi from time to time...
Holding Hands...Holding You!!❤️ ❤️

Killed it Sal👏
Am at peace n you know why!!

Thanks a tonnn for this and for bearing with me even after I came after so so much time.❤️
Means a lot to me!

Thanks for the PM.
Lots n lots of Love🤗
Nikka sa Nik!


P.S. Will comment on the remaining parts soon😊
P.P.S It is still less than what I can write on this upii but there should be a limit na.I cant write an OS for this upi...though I dont know how long it is now!😆




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Posted: 8 years ago
O Damn this is way too long😲
Bear with it now😆
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

😆
Take your time bro I'll wait 😉

@Bold Sooo Sorry for making you wait soo long Sal.I truly am!
Nik03 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
N Yess...Change the title!!
Its officially a FF na Sal.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03


<font color="#0066ff">@Bold Sooo Sorry for making you wait soo long Sal.I truly am!</font>


You have no idea what you have done, my cheeks are hurting from smiling so much 😆 ❤️
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Originally posted by: Nik03

N Yess...Change the title!!

Its officially a FF na Sal.


Oh Yes, true abhi karti hoon 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb


You have no idea what you have done, my cheeks are hurting from smiling so much 😆 ❤️

What I have done Sal?😛
Nik03 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb


Oh Yes, true abhi karti hoon 😆

Much needed😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03


What I have done Sal?😛


You know exactly what you did 😆 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

It's done! 😛

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