ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Crying now so res
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oh god you made me cry like anything😭😭😭 this was the first thing I read in the m orining after opening if and started crying so bad ...
But that was so beautifully penned 👏👏👏
You wrote every emotion so beautifully
The morning convo was⭐️ "itni jaldi tumhara peecha chod k nahi jaungi"😆 but then again he started ignoring her😭😭
Drunk sumo was👍🏼
Atleast she confessed
I was trying to hold back my tears but as i read "mujhe mera shravan vapis dedo" oh god they started flowing like anything and the leftover part was read with so much problems
And those "I miss you" and "i miss you too"😭😭😭😭 oh god ek mahine me jitna nahi roti aj ro diya
But first time in my life i am thankful for making me cry
So thanks a lot for this
Every emotion was beautifully portrayed
Amazing 👏👏👏
Please update soon
Dolly😊
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
I have a mini drabble to write over here as a comment. 😆
Will get back pretty soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Emotional chap..

Drunk Sumo confessed everything about her feelings t for him, how much she missed him, how his avoidance makes difference to her...Shravan finally accepted he missed her too...

Nice & long update

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
A very delightful gift on the occasion of one year of EDKV!!!
I literally cried on the plight of Shravan and Sumo and on our misfortunes in loosing our EDKV...
I feel extremely sad that chances of getting EDKV 2 now seem to be very low...
I have so much in mind but I am unable to express it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
You guys make me smile like no one 🤗
Going to reply to all of you in the night 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
wow
so emotional
absolutely loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Awww hun this was beyond beautiful...tooo painful heart-wrenching but at the same time sooo heart-touching intense fab sweet cute lovely...surely u know how to leave us speechless spellbound!


Thank you so much for this marvellous piece again...



Lots of love hugs,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: priety.priti

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are yaar ye kya likha hai tumane etana emotional koi karta hai kya not fair😳

its a<font size="2">tear-jerker update dear😭😭</font>

<font size="2"><font color="#404040">i have sheddedso many tears while reading, nest time tumhari update padhane se pahale muze kisi kone me jake chupana padega so that others cant see my tears😳</font></font>

<font color="#404040" size="2">very emotional and shocking update bcoz in last update i thought shravan is gonna hold chords of this marriage and will make it to work but in this update it was totally opposite😲</font>



Sorry for making you cry 😕
I know everyone thought that everything will be fine now but we have to keep in mind that they have too many issues and they need to sort them out with time. You might hate me at a point 😆 but they will find their way don't worry 😉

Thank you so much ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: deltadawn

you made me cry today. cant say more



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ok recovered from initial bout of tears... you killer.👏

you took your time with each word it seems. every word sliced through my heart today.I am still in aftershock. aise likhna hai to mujhe tera FF chutti leke padhna hoga.🤗its the smiley I am not done crying yet.

I read it while listening to tum pukar lo by hemant kumar. so added to the effect😭


Coming from you bro 😳
You guys are just being too nice this is why I love this fandom everyone encourages each other. Read this so many times thank you so much Deepti just 🤗
Edited by KitkitMkb - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Meri pyaari Saleha,


There are somethings you can express, there are some things you can't and then there's stuff like these..the update of yours which renders one speechless and absolutely wordless to express.

2 words, 'Let's talk' would have erased so much, 2 minutes spent together could have eased so much...2 hugs exchanged could have enhanced so much!

There's this thing about pain, its boomerang effect, when you give it to someone so easily, it comes back to you with multiple times force, the drunk Sumo here and the seemingly sober Shravan here can vouch for that.

This was a beauty Saleha, and you in all immodesty should take a bow for this👏



Indeed you do write the best comments.
You are able to understand what the writer is trying to convey and this shows the depth you have in you to see through things like this.
Your lines on pain, bang on !
Okay the last line I don't know what to say 😳
Thank you Pyaari Reshma 🤗

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