ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😊
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Unres
You made me cry...You made me speechless girl... 😭



This is sooo awesome ... 👏
Drunk Sumo...There is something different when you are drunk n you express your pain...It left a deep impact!!
N thats what your Sumo had left here as well...❤️
The way Sumo expressed how she miss her Shravan, her akdu but smiling Shravan took my breath away!!...Soo beautifully captured by you... 👏

Shravan...What to say about him!!
A wounded soul...afraid to love again, afraid to trust again, afraid to feel happiness again...!!...My heart goes out to him...❤️
The way he wanted to embrace Sumo,embrace his love ,his happiness but restraining himself to do so...!!...So difficult for him n specially when his Sumo is crying and asking him to come back to her...!!

I specially loved
Kho gayi...
Meri wajah se na?!!!...Soo touching it is!!...❤️ ❤️

All in all it was mind blowing upiii dear... 👏
You captures emotions soo beautifully I must say...Take a bow dear...!!

Soo exited for the next part..!!
Thanks for the pm n cont soon 😊
Loads n loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Originally posted by: amks2016

Hey saleha

it's been such a emotional roller coaster since yesterday ... each time I log in SM platforms m see stories messages n VM etc on #Shraman #EDKV

After reading dipti p's review on her OS suggesting to read your SS .. It's bin jus😭😭

how well hve u captured the essence of Shravan and Sumo's pain girl .. I dnt think even mr jha or the creatives Wld hve come close to this👏( gng by what they were showing even if the show had continued .. )

Each n every time I'm awed by the writers of the forum ..n how they take us into the land of #Shraman

A drunk Sumo has bin on my mind ever since they showed Shravan on a drinking spree during the Aditya fiasco .. I too hve many versions of this part of the story running on my mind😊loved this one too😳

Ab Shravan what to say !! Do these kind even exist .. Namik n Nikita have portrayed their roles exceptionallythat we refuse to accept that they are fictional... Sorry for the long rant

Can't wait for the the next chapter bro !! Hopefully will be out soon😛 Good luck

N thank you Dipti for suggesting to read this on ur OS thread😳

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

It is really emotional one...
How Shravan is so scared of loneliness, to be left alone by everyone?.. That's why he is avoiding sumo...
Sumo trying to fix their marriage with patience and care..
Drunken sumo and her antics 😉 😃
Finally sumo spoke her heart out in front of Shravan..."Eyes are the window to the soul" really a beautiful line, Shravan's eyes always speak everything...
Really an emotional rollercoaster...
Update soon

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

Emotional update...
Shravan's insecurity, loneliness is beautifully penned...
He doesn't want to fall in love again because he is scared that sumo might leave him again... I can understand his turmoil.
This is the reason he is ignoring her, he doesn't want to go through the pain again...
Jealous sumo, ohh how much I wanted that in the show..
Drunken sumo ne Shravan ki band baja Di 😃 😛
Finally sumo confront Shravan. ..
Let's see what happens next

Originally posted by: deltadawn

I might spam your thread today each time I read this through I am having a fresh bout of tears. I don't know why... but its just so ..I dont know see I still dont know...😊😭

"Pehle mujhe Sumo bolo"😭

even in the show that was the scene that made me fall in love with Sumo. she wanted to belong so badly so so badly..and to belong for her means, him calling her by the name he gave her. ugh... for the girl with 200% self respect to get there and ask him..even though with a smile.. it takes courage. to ask for love. this was asking for love. and its the most painful thing a person may have to do...

#takeabow #thenastandingovation #stillnotenough

Resh special mention for again jerking out tears with the 2 things only in your reply. best commenter ever sachchi.👏

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Very emotional chaappy yaar
You made me cry
Feeling bad for shravan ...he is so scared that he is ignoring sumo
At same time feel like crying for suman ...she is so caring for shravan
Shravan ignoring suman in a party 😭
Drunk sumo is so cute ...
Love pushkar dialogues

Mujhe sumo bolo ...so cute and emotional
Now plz give some romantic and happy chappy

Feeling like this

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Crying now so res

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oh god you made me cry like anything😭😭😭this was the first thing I read in the m orining after opening if and started crying so bad ...

But that was so beautifully penned👏👏👏

You wrote every emotion so beautifully

The morning convo was⭐️"itni jaldi tumhara peecha chod k nahi jaungi"😆but then again he started ignoring her😭😭

Drunk sumo was👍🏼

Atleast she confessed

I was trying to hold back my tears but as i read "mujhe mera shravan vapis dedo" oh god they started flowing like anything and the leftover part was read with so much problems

And those "I miss you" and "i miss you too"😭oh god ek mahine me jitna nahi roti aj ro diya

But first time in my life i am thankful for making me cry

So thanks a lot for this

Every emotion was beautifully portrayed

Amazing👏👏👏

Please update soon

Dolly😊

Originally posted by: evaviego

I have a mini drabble to write over here as a comment.😆

Will get back pretty soon.

Originally posted by: Safire

A very delightful gift on the occasion of one year of EDKV!!!

I literally cried on the plight of Shravan and Sumo and on our misfortunes in loosing our EDKV...

I feel extremely sad that chances of getting EDKV 2 now seem to be very low...

I have so much in mind but I am unable to express it...

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

so emotional

absolutely loved it

continue soon