Lost - FF Thread 1 - Page 9

Originally posted by: imshveta

Ahh that's so sad. You have really penned down Suman's emotions beautifully and

whatever said and done... it's difficult to come back from few situations. Trust and respect are two things that define any relationship. Once shattered...it takes years to build them again.

What I am actually concerned about is...how you are going to show Shravan's redemption.

Because frankly...in most of the stories here I am tired of reading how Shravan just after pushing her over the cliff, comes back to daddy dear who confesses everything and then Shravan feels how 'he' has been duped, how 'he' has been betrayed and Suman is still all understanding and smiles.
I just hope when the truth comes out, he is able.to place her above himself, look beyond 'His' pain and face his redemption.

Thanks
Love
Shveta

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Chalo ab yehi baki tha! 😕 Now it's the time to confess ...ramu kaka will spill the bin! Hmmm!

Originally posted by: LubSha

Oh my God Dips,
I was almost choking reading this. What an emotionally distressed Sumo. Hats off to you for getting her emotions out so well. But Shravan crossed the line by claiming infidelity.
Hell he's gonna repent this for the rest of his life. Sumo always cared about him and he kept disgracing her publicly. Don't understand why Shravan always wanna go public in humiliating Sumo, starting from the reunion. But she never talked about it in front of anyone.
Shravan's revenge is giant like him. Let's see how far he goes for his love, once he get to know the truth.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

That was Below the belt ! #PCT #Infidelity

Will there be a coming back from this..!?!

"There are two tragedies in life... One is to lose your heart's desire,,.the other is to gain it." #Suman #Shravan !!

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Oh Mr. Ramnath, now what is left behind to get over ? aap ne tho sab kuch khatam kardiya !!😡😡

Excellent emotional update !! The entire chapter was keeping me in high end !! shravan has steeped so low !! what kind of allegations are they 😕 But The only thing i wanted sumo to do after knowing them was to JUST SIGN them. Am surprisingly happy that your sumo exactly did that. but this shows how broken she is😭. I always wanted this type of showdown in them, only to get things back in control. Am going to say, I can't wait to read the next chapter and I very well mean it !!😉 can't wait friend :)

Originally posted by: deltadawn

dil jeet liya ladki... 🤗

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Hey me 1st

Unress

Dipti u made me cry, after so long I cried while reading a story...There was a lump in my throat I was gulping with very difficulty while reading..When Sumo looking @ the moon & remembering her moments with Shravan...I couldn't control my tears it starts flowing...

I m speechless today I won't be able to give any words to my feelings...just I can say u r fabulous dear keep writing like this...I know there will be sad updates now ...but I m sure u will give us reason to smile with your later updates...

Thank you for this amazing piece...

Thanks for PM

Vinu