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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Divorce happened? ...Infidelity ka Ilzaam! !...Shravan??

Too upset to write more..

Can any amount of remorse mend things?

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Oh my god
Shravan divorced suman with so much allegation
But i hope in next chap shravan will know the truth but i hope suman will notforgive him so easily just like in the show
As usual your writting is awesome
Plzzz update soon
Waiting for next 😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Divorce happened? ...Infidelity ka Ilzaam! !...Shravan??
Too upset to write more..
Can any amount of remorse mend things?

doesn't look like right now.. we need a miracle

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imshveta

@imshveta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Ahh that's so sad. You have really penned down Suman's emotions beautifully and

whatever said and done... it's difficult to come back from few situations. Trust and respect are two things that define any relationship. Once shattered...it takes years to build them again.

What I am actually concerned about is...how you are going to show Shravan's redemption.

Because frankly...in most of the stories here I am tired of reading how Shravan just after pushing her over the cliff, comes back to daddy dear who confesses everything and then Shravan feels how 'he' has been duped, how 'he' has been betrayed and Suman is still all understanding and smiles.
I just hope when the truth comes out, he is able.to place her above himself, look beyond 'His' pain and face his redemption.

Thanks
Love
Shveta

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Chalo ab yehi baki tha! 😕 Now it's the time to confess ...ramu kaka will spill the bin! Hmmm!

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Oh my God Dips,
I was almost choking reading this. What an emotionally distressed Sumo. Hats off to you for getting her emotions out so well. But Shravan crossed the line by claiming infidelity.
Hell he's gonna repent this for the rest of his life. Sumo always cared about him and he kept disgracing her publicly. Don't understand why Shravan always wanna go public in humiliating Sumo, starting from the reunion. But she never talked about it in front of anyone.
Shravan's revenge is giant like him. Let's see how far he goes for his love, once he get to know the truth.

Lubna.

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Oh Mr. Ramnath, now what is left behind to get over ? aap ne tho sab kuch khatam kardiya !!😡😡

Excellent emotional update !! The entire chapter was keeping me in high end !! shravan has steeped so low !! what kind of allegations are they 😕 But The only thing i wanted sumo to do after knowing them was to JUST SIGN them. Am surprisingly happy that your sumo exactly did that. but this shows how broken she is😭. I always wanted this type of showdown in them, only to get things back in control. Am going to say, I can't wait to read the next chapter and I very well mean it !!😉 can't wait friend :)

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting..

again one word 😭😭 ab mai ais aky akaru ki tum ek ke badle do words to likh do my Everest 😆

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: deltadawn

again one word 😭😭 ab mai ais aky akaru ki tum ek ke badle do words to likh do my Everest 😆

+1😆

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Tiii28
Oh my god
Shravan divorced suman with so much allegation
But i hope in next chap shravan will know the truth but i hope suman will notforgive him so easily just like in the show
As usual your writting is awesome
Plzzz update soon
Waiting for next 😊

revelation to hoga.. redemption ka pata nahi ab tak

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