Lost - FF Thread 1 - Page 4

Wow Priti u started the story from where Sumo leaves home after Shravan humiliates her in front of media & he will tell her to leave the house right now instead tomorrow after Nanu's death(as she said to him jis din Nanu ke haat mere sir se utjayega mein is ghar ko chod ke chali jaoongi) leave now only... After media fiasco... It will be very interesting to read from your writings as everybody knows u r a good writer... Keep going girl...

Originally posted by: deltadawn

you are my Everest.. one day I hope to make you write more than one word for my post !! 🤗

Originally posted by: evaviego

ohhh my God...!!!

this is so damn beautifully penned...!!!

so deep.. so amazing and so much emotions..

Fab update...

oh i loved it...❤️

Now i dont want to be guilty anymore so ek bhi update nahi chodne wali mein..😉

You know what i mean right 😛

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Jo na-manzoor hai mujhko,,
Wohi manzoor hai tujhko..!
Samajh paun na main tujhko,,
Naa tu mujhko..!

😭 story of Shraman's life of 155 episodes...

Saanson ke kisi ek mod par,,
Mili thi tu zindagi..!
Meri dost bann ke..!

Shravan aur uski zindagi! ! Alias Sumo..!

His empathy couldn't be described better..!

No amount on alcohol can get him out of it..! 😕

Last part was love!!

Amazing start!! Waiting to read more more n more..!😳

Happy 500th!😊

Soo emotional it was...but amazing!

Ahhh this is something I want... A real shrawan

I always wanted this to happen in the show!! Update it as soon as possible

amazing...
...too emotional...
thanx for pm...😊

Awww heart-breaking but beautful as always dear..I love your Hide n Seek sooo so much it is amazing you r such a fab writer...Thank you so much!!