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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

It was sad but beautifully written by you...
Shravan has gone though a lot and more heartbreak is coming in his way...
Poor Shravan

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Dips baby it u nailed it 👏 it came very well from ur pen, thanks sweksha to request for such a heart touching topic to dips.

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: deltadawn

agdi barobar😆 hya story mood kharab karun ghayava laagto pan 😉

Hehe...Right..BTW total kiti parts asnar aahet??Aani Hide and seek cha update kadhi??Waiting...

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Hehe...Right..BTW total kiti parts asnar aahet??Aani Hide and seek cha update kadhi??Waiting...

I dont know yaar.. originally this was planned to be a 3 shot at max.. mhanun SS fakt safety sake thevlay might end sooner too..

baghuya..

Hide n seek writing..but busy today.. also I am not happy with what I wrote so far..so mostly tomorrow or sunday..

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: deltadawn

I dont know yaar.. originally this was planned to be a 3 shot at max.. mhanun SS fakt safety sake thevlay might end sooner too..

baghuya..

Hide n seek writing..but busy today.. also I am not happy with what I wrote so far..so mostly tomorrow or sunday..

Hmm..thats nice...Safety ke liye..😆
Ka ga???Why not happy??pori..(should I say that) tu imagine nahi karu sahkat amha readers la kasa vatta ek ek chappy read karun...pure bliss...plz asa nko mhanu...Keep ur expectations low...U'll be more happpy...😊

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

ohhh my God...!!!

this is so damn beautifully penned...!!!

so deep.. so amazing and so much emotions..

Fab update...

oh i loved it...❤️

Now i dont want to be guilty anymore so ek bhi update nahi chodne wali mein..😉

You know what i mean right 😛

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Jo na-manzoor hai mujhko,,
Wohi manzoor hai tujhko..!
Samajh paun na main tujhko,,
Naa tu mujhko..!

Saanson ke kisi ek mod par,,
Mili thi tu zindagi..!
Meri dost bann ke..!

Shravan aur uski zindagi! ! Alias Sumo..!

His empathy couldn't be described better..!

No amount on alcohol can get him out of it..! 😕

Last part was love!!

Amazing start!! Waiting to read more more n more..!😳

Happy 500th!😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Hmm..thats nice...Safety ke liye..😆
Ka ga???Why not happy??pori..(should I say that) tu imagine nahi karu sahkat amha readers la kasa vatta ek ek chappy read karun...pure bliss...plz asa nko mhanu...Keep ur expectations low...U'll be more happpy...😊

pori.. nahi bai jhaley mi atta !! 30 😆😆

but I still address myself as porgi only which goes people around me to shake their heads in disbelief.. porgi at heart should be enough to be addressed as porgi wht say.

I am super overwhelmed at people liking hide n seek.. the story is as jumbled up as my own brain is usually..

haan keeping expectations low is actually a good idea. I follow it with everyone around me except for myself 😛

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sweksha

@sweksha

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

this is amazing dear...I am so so happy ...jaisa chaha tha theek waisa he Hai even usse 100 times batter Hai...I knew it that you can write it the way I want...sirf bolne ke liye Nahi bol rahi sachchi Ye jitna sochi thi usse kahi zyada real laga...thank you thank you thank you so so so much for writing this...kitna bhi slow update Ho koi problem Nahi take your time...because dheeraj ka phal meetha hota Hai...or Aaj to Wo meetha phal chakh bhi liye...this is really awesome the way you describe shravan's pain bilkul waise he feel ho raha Hai jaisa Namik ko screen par Dekh kar hota tha...once again bada waala thank you