Shravan's Phobia

swati1121

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hiii Swati!😊

Sunain here...Firstly m so glad tht finally u broke ur moan wrath😆...coz aisay moan wrath is forum kay leay hanikarak hain🤪😆

and Secondly i wud recommend you to be more often here..as this forum is just like family and u'll have hell lot of fun...aur badam khaya karo...yadash tezz ho gi😆😉

Now coming to the upii...

Woah...tht was totally Epic!!!⭐️

I wont believe this is ur first time..i mean comeon...u seem so professional aisa jaisay kai saal say Shraman par hi likh rahi ho...srsly so Stupendously Penned!👏...m Flattered!😳

Shravan Phobia embaraced him..poor guy...but i also found it really cute😳...hez a gem afterall😳

His escape planes...lame excuses...all of them were damn hillarious specially this one

I was just checking that Dr.Mahajan's phone number hasn't changed in years'

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The waiting area senario was aamazing!!...he scared the children...haay pura waiting area ko sar par utha lea😆😆

Tht Purab and his continous smirks just annoyed me..but whn Sumo gave him his badly needed doz...I just loved it!...Sumo tu chah gae😆

And the ending was super lovely!

All in all i loved and enjoyed it to core!❤️

Hope to get some more wonderful pieces from you soon!😉

N han dont forget to pm be dude😉

Love

Sunain❤️

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

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How dare you be a silent reader/writer till now?!!
How could you keep us away from this!
That's a crime, forum members ko itne acche talent se vanchit rakhna!! 😆 😛

I can't believe this is your first one! ⭐️ 👏

It was damn hilarious 🤪

"Suman beta he might soon become a father to your child but he is no better than one himself" 🤣

Ramu kaka sudhar gaye?! Accha hai and baat toh 100% satya kahi hai!! 😛

Shravan was epitome of phobic cuteness but I absolutely loved how Sumo sensibly handled him 😳

Aur us sadu Doc ko bhi apni jagah dikha di!! 😆

I hope to read more such wonderful pieces from you in the near future dude!!

Till then
Cas 😊

Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Well known London returned lawyer has dental phobia... 😆

He was acting so childish like a scary cock really funny at least he has some weekness other than Sumo... 😉

Keep writing

Vinu

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Swati. ..was that your debut girl?

It was a blockbuster. ...I was smiling all through😛

You can trust Shravan to be this super cute. ...but the one I really loved here was Sumo..

Her patience with him..she being so defiant for him..treating him like a baby. ...all that was just tooo cute😳

Keep writing. ..you new writer. ...coz you really rocked in your debut👏

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Spandana

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awww this is supercute adorable so ShraMan like! Didn't seem like 1st time writing..keep writing lovely pieces like this!!

Love,

Spandana

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neverlandspirit

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Posted: 8 years ago

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I swear I had a similar plot running in mind but now I am so glad that I did not pen that down, because OH MY GOD !!! This was hilarious and cute and amazing and everything good! Sorry I am at a loss for words.

I am still smiling over how cute this OS was.

You penned down a scared Shravan so beautifully, it was like watching an episode. And the semi strict, semi protective Sumo was a treat to read.

Wonderful plot , beautifully penned, great flow and a perfect ending.

Kudos to you buddy

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

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awesomeee 😃

am amazed with your ideas. Even with a simple dental problem, one can create a beautiful, adorable, lovely shraman time, yeh maine sochai hi nahi 😳 stunning os...so well written dear !! very very very very cute...ek dum mishti misti 😛 Along with shravan am imagining Namik Paul in that position. u can now guess my situation now...grinning like idiot...Go on dear, please keep writing on our shraman.

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Dolly Chouhan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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First of all are you serious this was your first writing piece? Did not seem like one...i felt that you have written many before and you master at this

Secondly welcome to the forum girl! I am dolly and i am always there If you need me

Coming to the os...it was hilarious🤣 the Oxford grad has a dental phobia omg!! You penned everything so beautifully. ..the way sumo made purab jealous and consoles him👏👏 please write more...you are added to my favouraites list in the forum

Love,

Dolly😊

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Season

@Priyodorshee

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Superb!!

Loved it soo much!😳

Keep writing!

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