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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Swarnima,
Read last two chapters! It was amazing! Every word, every line just heart wrenching! Loved it to the core! Aisa kya hua tha unke bich! Let's see! Will be waiting for the update. Take your time! And all the best for your exam!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Thank you for commenting Sanjh.
Sanjh, aren't you a lawyer? I'll need your help in making this FF a bit logical. I'll pm you my queries.


No no I am not a lawyer! I am doing my MBA you can ask Dolly or Naamika! Both are doing law.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Itssanjh


No no I am not a lawyer! I am doing my MBA you can ask Dolly or Naamika! Both are doing law.

Oo... Have been in this presumption since the time I read your OS titled 'lawyer'. Don't know why! Silly me.
Anyways thanks so much for help. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear...
Hope u r done with yr exams...
Can we hope for an update soon ???
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitequeen

Hi dear...

Hope u r done with yr exams...
Can we hope for an update soon ???

Firstly I'm so glad to hear from you.😃
Secondly I'm really sorry dear I won't be able to update it before May end
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: deltadawn

I was eagerly waiting for you to update this. The start itself was so intriguing.

and now this... Shravan going to simla.. hopefully there will be a confrontation..

reading every word of yours stabs in the heart dear. short update it was but loved it.

would you be able do to PMs? I so don't want to miss the next one...

Thank you so much.
I know this thank you is quite late. Sorry.
Your pms will be sent.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Nice update!😊
As shravan is going to shimla, i hope they both meet and sort out their issues!
Update next part soon!

Thank you.
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Emerald-

Pls happy ending no breakups

Stay assured. 😊
I myself can't handle sad endings
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter-4

He eased a crispy white shirt onto his muscular shoulders. He quickly glanced at his watch to know he had wasted a lot of time showering away those haunting memories that he'd spent with her. For this strong man of thirty four years 'Suman Tiwari' was merely a name. Nothing about her could hurt him anymore and as this upcoming encounter of theirs was an inevitable one he had decided to treat his ex-wife as just another award receiver. If only he could do something about this irrational eagerness to reach the venue.
He quickly buttoned his shirt, adjusted his emerald cufflinks and flipped his midnight blue coat to complete his suit. He then took a moment to check his tall frame in the mirror. Perfect. If experience counted, he was to kill most of the women folk present at the award ceremony tonight including one certain woman.

It was an open lawn party. Shimla shimmered with lights. Shravan was delighted to meet the respectable man of the town. There was ambiance in the atmosphere, every renowned dweller of the small town wished to make connections with him. But he was in some world of his own. He most certainly didn't want to see her while his eyes were in constant search of something or rather someone. Gone was every sense of reasons now. All he wished was a single glimpse of her. He himself couldn't finger on what was that he wanted to know after these eight years of separation if she would have wanted him back then surely she still must have remembered their address. Maybe it was his protective-self for her who, even after what all she did to him, refused to give up his nature. He wanted to see if was happy!
Suddenly a pair of palms covered his eyes from behind.

"Sumo kahan ho tum?
Tumhe pata hai na ki mujhe andhere se kitna darr lagta hai.
Please jaldi se bata do ki tum yahi par ho.
Bolo na Sumo."
She covered his eyes from behind and tried to reach to his ear to him an assurance of her presence.
"Main yahi par toh hu Shravan, hamesha tumhare paas, hamesha tumhare saath."
"Sach?"

"Sum.. "
He caught a hand and turned to see.
"Shravan, Honey tum mere alava bhi kisi ko jante ho yaha par joh mujhe pehchan bhi nhi paaye?"
He kept quiet.
"But seriously Shravan aaj pehli baar tumhare ankhon mein thorde emotions dekhe!"
"Maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha hain Tanaya, mujhe ye bachcho vale mazak bilkul bhi pasand nhi. Don't you dare do that again," he warned leaving her totally confused as to why this little action could affect him so much when various other bigger things couldn't even touch him. She wisely decided to keep shut for a while and excused herself to meet her father.

In the front row Shravan sat with the most important personalities of the town. Almost half of the awards were given away, the function seemed to get ended soon, he cursed himself for he still was waiting for her.
For the last category the announcer called Shravan up on the stage to do the honors. The announcer stated that this award was special for it was the first time in years that a woman was receiving this award. He went on to define woman power, accomplishments of the receiver and lastly declared Suman Tiwari as 'restauranteur of the year' when she entered from the back stage door to receive her award.
His gaze riveted on her the instant she stepped into view, and the sight of her had the devastating impact of a dagger crashing into his chest. Never had she looked so radiantly beautiful. She had chosen a white gown for the day, sophistication covered her from top to toe. She was smiling before her eyes met his. Every muscle in her body tightened as she froze in her path. She then walked forward looking blankly ahead and stood before him. He noticed the pair of emerald earrings dangling till her shoulders that had been a gift from him. He wondered why she wore them tonight. She looked into him once more as if to check wasn't a dream. Her heart skipped a beat to find those brown eyes staring deep into her. It was getting unbearable to stand so close beside her. All he was thinking was if he could carry her in his arms back to their world. He handed over her her award and began to leave the stage and the venue as soon as he could before someone on the mic stopped him.
"Before you take back your seat Mr Malhotra, I wished you would congratulate me and my fiance on our engagement."
"Aditya Ahuja?" Shravan hissed.

Dear readers,
Firstly I'm really sorry for being so late and also for not being able to reply to your valuable comments on the last updates.
This one was for nitequeen. I hope you liked it.
I was thinking to update chapter 5 tonight itself but I find myself too tired now. I'll do it as soon as possible.
I request you not to ask me for regular updates because I won't be able to.
I hope you liked chapter 4.
Thank you for reading
Love
Swarnima
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Chapter-5
He stood at the balcony of his hotel suite that provided him a panoramic view of the hill station. It was December but it was still to be covered in snow. If weather forecast were to be believed, seasonal snowfall wouldn't appear before ten days from today. However, the silence in the night and moist chilly winds of winter suggested something else.
Shravan stood with a hand holding the railing and the other holding an almost empty bottle of Brandy. He gulped down remains of the bottle in a go hoping that the hotness at his throat could lessen some in his heart.
Those seven days he'd spent after her separation had dried his eyes. After she went all he did was nothing more than settling in a corner, aloof from his surrounding. The only proof of him being alive was the continuous flow from his eyes like a never stopping rain. He used to remain motionless even if someone wiped out those tears. After a few days no one in the family could gather guts to see that state of him.
Before the seventh day after she'd left him, Shravan was clueless about why she did that to him. Perhaps he was at fault. His Sumo must have had a reason. On and on he revised their eleven years of friendship and then those four years of their blissful marriage but couldn't reach to his answer.
"Bhaiya ye dekhye! Sumo ke taraf se ye envelope aaya hai," Pushkar overexcitedly handed over to him a yellow envelope hoping that it was a key that could drag his Bhaiya out of depression. But for Shravan it was nothing more than his answers as he knew with the finality she'd left him, there wasn't going to be any return. He with gestures asked Pushkar to let him be alone.
The envelope contained a letter and some other legal papers from court. It read 'Mutual Divorce Petition'. The next papers had general instructions regarding 'Divorce Without Children and Without Assets'. A wry smile formed on his face legal instructions to a lawyer!
He set those papers aside to see what she had to say to him now.

Shravan,

Nanu ke saath humare ek rahne ki vajah bhi chali gayi.
Main apne life mein aage badna chati hu aur issi liye main tumhe aur iss seher ko hamesha ke liye chhord kar jaa rhi hu.
Maine jitne bhi din tumhare saath guzaare unn sab ke badale main iss duniya ke sari khushiyan thukra du.
Tum ek bahut hi achhe pati the aur usse bhi achhe dost.
Par shayad humare bech dosti se zayada kabhi kuch nhi rha.
Please mujhe ek yaad samjh kar bhool jana. Hamesha khush rhena.

Sumo.

Just four lines in explanation!
He smashed the paper in his fist and threw it away in a forceful manner.
In his childhood days, he used to be her best friend, but of a special kind of whom she couldn't even give an acknowledgement and when they were married, it wasn't love for her but an arrangement! But what were those days and nights they had spent together? Certainly an illusion that was created by her at her will to use him for accomplishing her dreams. He bent down to pick up the wrinkled paper piece from the ground. He looked at it and decided to keep it as a testimony of his failure and a reminder of his pain. He'll never become weak from now. Emotions couldn't play with him anymore.

He closed his eyes that were scrounging in agony and it brought back the memories of today's evening.
"Before you take back your seat Mr Malhotra, I wished you would congratulate me and my fiance on our engagement."
Shocked wasn't anything close to what he felt then. Time had brought him back to that phase.
His glare was fixed at Sumo.
Aditya came around her at possessively rested his arm on her waist.
"May I declare to Shimla that they should save the date for the decade's most beautiful wedding. Suman has finally said yes and all of you are invited. So are you Mr Malhotra. Your presence will be most awaited by both of us," he winked and raised her hand to reveal the bold 'A' in her wrist.
"Mehandi ka rang toh chhut jaata hai but my Suman wanted to be marked as mine for always."
Aditya whispered a thing into her ear to which some expressions broke into her face and she immediately hugged him tightly. Shravan breathed heavily into his constricted lungs and left them for the audience.

"Tumhe kaise pata chala ki main...?" she blushed.
"Darling I know you in every way: body, mind and soul. Mujhse kuch nhi chhupa sakti tum. Plus maine tumhare pregnancy reports dekh liye the."
"Cheater!"
"Excuse me! Woh sirf tumhare report nhi hain. Usme mera bhi barabari ka haq hai. Didn't the gynecologist inform you?"
She became red. He caressed her cheek lovingly.
"Main tumhe tumhari ankhon se bhi padh sakta houn."

Her eyes hadn't left his after she'd lifted them up to him the second time. The look on her face flashed him. Emotionless or emotion-logged? He couldn't decide. Her nose had become red and her lips quivered. He had a feeling that she wished to say something. It was as if she was begging him to take her away or that was a result of his longing for her. Was there guilt or some leftovers of their wrecked love? Neither he felt. It was something else entirely. But what?

***

"Tumhe pata tha na ki Shravan waha hoga? Bolo na bahut milne ka mann tha na apne ex-husband se? Woh toh achha hua ki main tha wahan par warna!" Aditya eyed her. Disgust covered him from top to bottom as he saw her still lost in that moment.
He carefully removed the hair strand on her eye and spoke in a deathly voice, "I assume you weren't aware of his coming more than I was. Aur haan mujhe chhord kar jaane ki sochna bhi mat. Nahi toh tum jaanti hin ki main kya kuch karne ko capable hu. Ab tak bahut se demos toh maine de hin deye hain."
She quickly nodded in denial, "trust me I didn't know. I haven't kept any contact with him since then. Please trust me."
A wicked smile formed on his face, "good girl."

That's all for now. The next update will take long.
I'll update jab mere exams ke badal chhat jayege.
After adv & bits, i.e. end of May. 😊
There maybe an update or two in between, don't take me for word. 😳
After this the story will begin in full swing.
ShraMan scenes are promosied in the next update.
Let me know how you felt chapter 5 was.
Thank you for reading.
Love,
Swarnima.
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago

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