Winter's First Snowfall : DISCONTINUED(pg 27)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE

"Please stay, don't go. Please", he begged and impatiently took her in his bone-crushing embrace, tried to immerse himself in her, held her so tight that he would never let her away from him.
"I promise never shall I do a thing you don't approve. If you don't want any kids, I'll never utter a single word about it. Everything will be exactly how you want them to be, you'll see, just stay", bitterly he cried.
"Shravan I have to go, leave me, please", with that she tried to push away, but he held her by her waist.
"Sab kuch thik toh tha na Sumo, we were in love, the world was beautiful!"
"No. Shravan we thought it was love. But in my opinion it was just an attachment, a tendre which was developed due to some unfinished words, some days in wait. With time I have realized that, you should too. I'm sure you are still to meet the love of your life".
She turned to move, he went on his knees, defeated, caught her fingers as though life was supported by them. "If this time you leave me, I'll die for sure".
"I have to go, Shravan. Take care."
She walked on, wiped the single tear on her expressionless face that hid every bit of the pain her heart was suffering through. Lord knew she had literally tore off a half of it to him and was leaving with a severely injured one. She didn't look back.


Aasoo Hai Ki Hai Angarai
Aag Hai Ab Aankhon Se Behna
Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna
Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna...


The door closed once more, with a click, leaving a broken, damaged man alone in darkness. This had killed the loving man once again, but permanently this time.

The snow began to fall again, drifting against the windows, politely begging entrance and then falling with disappointment to the ground.
~Jamie McGuire
Index
Prologue :pg1
Chapter 1:pg4
Chapter 2:pg8
Chapter 3:pg9
Chapter 4:pg13
Chapter 5:pg13
Chapter 6:pg16
Chapter 7:pg21
Chapter 8:pg 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello lovely people,
I'm here to bore you with another story this time, but worry not the next update to this is going to be real late. I'll be going on hibernation mode now.
Hope you found the prologue interesting enough.This was one of the ideas a had of season 2 of our beloved show, let me know if you would want to hear more as it might be a bit sad in its early chapters.
Now I say good bye to you. Hope you'll not forget me by the time I return.
Loads of Love to you,
Swarnima
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Is this a sad FF? Pehle hi pucch loon...mujhse sadness and tragedy handle nahi hoti yaar! 😕

But aap likh rahe ho toh kuch achha hi hoga!

The prologue was really interesting man! But next update late kyun? 😲

I'm waiting to see what happens now...

Till next time
Cas 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Hello lovely people,

I'm here to bore you with another story this time, but worry not the next update to this is going to be real late. I'll be going on hibernation mode now.
Hope you found the prologue interesting enough.This was one of the ideas a had of season 2 of our beloved show, let me know if you would want to hear more as it might be a bit sad in it's early chapters.
Now I say good bye to you. Hope you'll not forget me by the time I return.
Loads of Love to you,
Swarnima


Hey dear,it was an interesting prologue!!!
I don't care if there is sadness in the initial chapters, but ending must be on a happy note!!!!

And thanks a lot for a rain of stories from your end!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sawru!!!🤗

WOAH...thts completly Mindblowing!👏
Sounds damn intuging!
Cant wait to knw wht made Suman to take such a devastating step...and courage to hurt his one and only love to whom hurting surely be the last thing in her mind!
Terrific Plot!⭐️
The song choice was indeed tht apt one😉

AND..about ur absence i wont mind a bit but wud miss u hell alot...u just focus on ur studies and exams...Best of Luck dear!👍🏼
Love you!


Take Care!
Suzie❤️
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The prologue is so interesting...it has stuck me up and i'll be sitting wating for next chapter right here...please try to update soon...please😊
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue is so much interesting
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sad story... always up for it!!
Prologue was so heartbreaking... aur upar se ye intezaar 😭

Please PM once you start making updates.. will wait eagerly.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue is damn interesting dear...!! 😊
Initial sadness is ok but give us a happy ending buddy...!!
Waiting for it eagerly... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue is interesting...

Why Sumo left Shravan only because he want to have child or any other hidden reason, or again her majboori... 😡... I just hate this word since I heard in the show many times...

Our Shravan again abandoned by his wife now... 😭. Kyoun hota hai humare Shravu ke aisa humesha... 😭... Starting bit sad part OK but till end no sad... We want see them happy plz gradually end with happy note...

Vinu

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