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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

chapter 5

meri suffocation badh gayi.. badhti ja rahi hai.
Aditya is not just there ...he is cruel too 😲 and Sumo maan rahi hai sab kuch?


Itni kis baat se darr rahi hai? Its Shravan afterall !!

Oww m gonna be sad now aage ka exam ke baad kya??

mummmy 😭

Thank you so much for commenting
I feel like updating one tonight itself #TooTired to Study!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 6

"Sir, Ms Tiwari wants to talk to you."
"Why, Mrs Kumar wasn't I clear enough? I said I didn't want to be disturbed", he said still engrossed in his work, irritated with his receptionist assigned to his new office in Shimla, when a word caught his attention before keeping the phone down, "who did you say it is?"
"Ms Suman Tiwari, she's the would-be wife of Mr Ahuja. She says it's urgent. Sir, Mr Ahuja is a prominent personality of our town, we can't displease them."
"Is she here?"
"No Sir but on phone."
He breathed a sigh of relief, "connect her call after five minutes."
He had left her behind, nothing about her bothered him anymore and if it was related to business then he had no reason to avoid her. If he had denied to take her call indirectly he would have fed her ego making her feel that she still mattered to him. It would have hampered him both personally and professionally. He thanked the fact that he was in his office chair that he could make a correct decision in time with minimal involvement of his emotions. But he wondered what did that deceiving woman have to tell after six days of his stay here now when she hadn't uttered a word then on the stage that night and also in the lift, their second encounter yesterday she hadn't spoken more than a few words.
The telephone rang. He literally jumped to pick her call.
He waited for her to speak.

"Aise kya dekh rhe ho? Shravan maine pehle bhi kaha hain ki mujhe sote wakhat mat dekha karo. I want to sleep, chalo look to that side."
"Arre main dekh kaha rha hu, main toh tumhe sunn rha hu."
"Par maine toh kuch kaha bhi nhi", she snuggled closer into his neck.
"Tumhari sanse. It's the most soothing music in the world. Isske bina mujhe neendh nhi aati."
"Shravan kisi ki itni bhi aadat achhi nhi phir shayad woh main hin kyun na hu."
"Tum kaha jaa rhi ho. Tum yahi ho. Mere pass, hamesha?"
"Meri aakhri saans tak."

"Ms Tiwari I assume you haven't called to breathe in my ears?" to which she breathed more heavily.
"Shravan, main... Actually main.. woh.. Can we meet up?"
"If you wanted an appointment you could have talked to my PA about it. Anyway now that you've called I am sorry to inform you that I'll be busy for the next two days after which I have to head back to Delhi."
"Shravan it isn't business related. I want to.. I actually.. "
A thin line formed on his face, "4 in the evening at my office today," he spoke with finality and put the phone down.

On the other side of the phone she sighed. "Thank God he's agreed to meet me today itself. He won't be back before tomorrow. I'll have to be very careful, he doesn't have to know of this, otherwise God knows what consequences it'll bring."

***

"I won't wait for a single second after this. Suman Tiwari I'm bored of your stupid old antics," and he got up to leave his cabin. It was ten past four by his watch and those ten minutes were too much for him to spare on her. He'd expected her to be present waiting for him to finish his work but seemed in all these years she still hadn't learnt any manners. "Some things don't change! But waiting suffocates me now. You'll die to meet me now."

He sat in his bed trying to focus on his work but in vain. He wanted to know exactly for how long had she planned to make him wait for her. He could definitely ring his receptionist to know assuming no one in the small town knew about their past relationship.
"Mrs Kumar?"
"Yes Sir."
"Did Ms Tiwari come to the office?"
"No Sir."
"Okay if she calls tell her I won't have time to give her after this."

So she hadn't come. Great! As if he cared!
It was forecasted that snow was to cover north in two days after today. He had to leave before season changed its color. He couldn't afford to get stuck in this place longer than that. He turned on the television to check the latest weather forecasting.

"What!" shock left his mouth to what he saw next.
"Aditya Ahuja, a rising politician of Shimla district found dead at his house. The body had cut marks on its neck and a knife pierced into the stomach. Postmortem reports say he must have been murdered in between 8 and 9 yesterday. It is to be noted that Ahuja had been a very remote person, he never met anyone except for some formal meetings and also, he used live in an apartment whose entrances were secured with codes. A few people are assumed to be behind this cold blooded murder which includes Ahuja's fiance. Suman Tiwari owns a reputed restaurant in the town. Her engagement with Ahuja was announced by the later himself just five days before today. Most of the proofs of this case point against her. Ahuja's fiance and alleged murderer is taken into police custody. Moreover, owing to the vast popularity of the late politician no lawyer has yet agreed to support her. That's all for now. Stay tuned for further updates."

Shravan couldn't believe what it said. Wait. Between 8 and 9 yesterday night. "How can that be possible when at time she was.. "
Shravan tried to remember what time was it when he'd seen her yesterday. Certainly not later than 9 and earlier than 8!
Yesterday evening he was returning to his stay from a business meeting when she'd shared the building's lift with him.
She had held him by hand, when electricity in the lift had gone out suddenly, in same manner as she used to in past.
He had tried and succeeded in appearing unemotional about her touch, "ab mujhe andheron se darr nhi lagta."
She had removed her hand mumbling, "it's a custom for light to go out after 8 in this building. The generator will soon be turned on."

She most definitely wasn't at fault and he couldn't see any innocent getting punished even if it was a criminal to his own emotions. He grabbed his phone and left to see her.
***

Dear readers,
First of all I'm really sorry because every time I say I won't be able to update, I update on the very next day.
God knows I have to stop. But this was the last. Pukka😳
This part was dedicated to Deepti.
I couldn't contain the story so had to write it down.
Please tell me how was chapter 6. Also please check chapter 5 if you haven't.
Thank you for reading.
Love,
Swarnima.
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Unress

Though I said, that I would not be logging in, but couldn't as soon as I saw the notification.

Swarnima, what have you done? In my wildest of dreams, i couldn't think like that.

So Aditya is dead good thing indeed.

Suman is in police custody, bad thing.

Shravan remembered about lift and ran to her, a very good thing.


When are you going to update? I don't know whether I would be able to log in or not! Ufff! Now this anxiety, is going to kill me.

PS: why are you awake it's already 4.15 am.
Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Res

****
Unress

Though I said, that I would not be logging in, but couldn't as soon as I saw the notification.

Swarnima, what have you done? In my wildest of dreams, i couldn't think like that.

So Aditya is dead good thing indeed.

Suman is in police custody, bad thing.

Shravan remembered about lift and ran to her, a very good thing.


When are you going to update? I don't know whether I would be able to log in or not! Ufff! Now this anxiety, is going to kill me.

PS: why are you awake it's already 4.15 am.

Glad that you liked it. So happy that you logged in.
Next update may be after May
Actually I slept in the afternoon and was supposed to be organic chemistry till 4 but since 1 I have been suppressing my urge to write down so finally gave in😃.
Me is an accomplished nocturnal! 😳
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am in love with breaking resolutions here 😆
Thank you for the dedication 🤗

Charged up update there. Murder? Waise bohot achcha hua ke marr gaya!!😆

And Shravan knows she is innocent. Interesting matlab edge of the seat thriller interesting hai ye.

Will wait for whenever you find time time to write again dear bcoz again asking for an update (which I will itch for) seems selfish. You girls really need to get to studies.

Thanks for some relief that this winter Shravan will be staying in Simla 😉
Edited by deltadawn - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you!!
Atlast Aditya got his deserving end in your story!!
And Shravan's lawyer degree will be useful in saving Sumo..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow!!
Super excited for some court room drama! !
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Posted: 8 years ago
I never ever felt happy abt people dying...but today I'm happy that adithya is no more...s now Shravan will fight for sumo and he'll prove that she's innocent...superb update dr.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 5
Is Aditya black mailing her to stay with him forcefully that too for 8yrs😲how come Sumo lived with him for that long. Why is she doing all these I think for Shravan''s safety.😒

Chapter 6

She wanted to meet him, he waited for her suddenly news came she has been arrested kya ho raha hai bhai

Shravan the savior bagha apni Sumo ko bachane
Hope Sumo soon proved innocent & our Shraman together again.

Thanks for PM Swarnima
Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Getting interesting 😛😛 not complaining abt you not sticking to update later 😉
Swarnima this story setting in Shimla / the title as I mentioned earlier has given a lot of feelings :)
Finally sumone killed Aditya 😡troubling Suman for eight yrs 😡 good riddance 😡

Now Superman oops sorry SuperShravan mode on 😳 of course he's gonna save her 😳
Loved ur narrative of Shravan's anxiety and inner turmoil .. when he comes to know she wants to meet him .. the okknoooyess 'I dnt care ' aittidue and dilemma .. 😛


What cld be the reason Suman enduring this torture 😲 need to know sooonnniisshh

Thanks for the PM
Love Mayuri

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