Nature's Call - os - Page 4

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

After all the love and appreciation you get here sweetheart. .how can you even doubt we will not be liking your writing 😛

We love your writing...so keep giving us such lovely one shots!!

I am curious what would have happened after she tripped. ..did the seniors make Shravan propose her?..what would he have said. .😉

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Tu bhi na Sanj kya kya ideas ate hein tuje... Such me I was laughing like a crazy while reading this... Poty ki kahaani ka kya kehna... Sumo ki beti ditto like Sumo... Vaise tune uska naam nehin bataya ... Kya Sumo ko romance karte waqt bhi loo jana hai than how was wedding night... Shravan ko toh bagwan hi bachaye... 🤣

Thanx for PM

Vinu

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Sanjh,

Wow you have an amazing imagination yaar. What no one could think you wrote about it. Nature's Call OS on ShraMan I never imagined before. But you are one amazing writer. Really Loved it. Your OS's are so cute and so relatable. Whatever comes to your mind just write it down, I'm sure it will be awesome.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: Sunain

JUJU...!!!!

U cracked me into fits🤣

potty...like srsly🤣

Ohh tht was hell hillarious and a fantabulous piece i must say!😆😉

Their encounter was amazing...donay kay donay hi hiding aur Shravan ki bully kamal ki thi😳😆

N their moment......as always loved it!❤️

Sumo ki beti Sumo par gae😆...cutoo😳

Mjhy tittle say hi lag raha tha kuch garbar hai par ya tu maha garbar nikli...Sumo k leay😆

I enjoyed reading it...hell fun👍🏼

Love

Lalchi😳

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

So sweet OS

Never thing anyone write on this topic 'poty Problem'

U make my day dear

Literally laughing

Thanks for lovely OS

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

🤣 awesome story nature's call😆😆😆

Originally posted by: evaviego

Wow Sanjh...!!!

this was hilarious...!!!! 🤣

I loved it yaar...

Beti and Maa having Poty Problems 😆 😆 😆

Amazing Yar

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Are you real !! this OS is sooo beautiful !! yes, its another admirable story on shraman, but the way you wrote it is mindblowing. Most of them would have mentioned earlier, but that transformation from past to present is so "----" Now words to express yaar. No flashback tag, No present tag, u just took it so smooth. same sumo, same shravan, that we didn't realize what just happened. only after re-reading for few times, after reading about their daughter, words like Biwi I confirmed that we changed periods..😃😃 u r awesome ... how did you manage to put that transformation at that point, I mean, when sumo is about to slip, shravan is expected to be beside her and then she was in dream and same shravan is waking her up...the situation is ...superb...Keep writing more like this...am now a fan. 👏

Originally posted by: Naamika

This this damn cute saanjh. Sumo and her loo 😆. Shravan malhotra is so so handsome yaar . God knows how sumo used to manage at the time of exam.❤️