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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Wow Sanjh...!!!

this was hilarious...!!!! 🤣

I loved it yaar...

Beti and Maa having Poty Problems 😆 😆 😆

Amazing Yar

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Are you real !! this OS is sooo beautiful !! yes, its another admirable story on shraman, but the way you wrote it is mindblowing. Most of them would have mentioned earlier, but that transformation from past to present is so "----" Now words to express yaar. No flashback tag, No present tag, u just took it so smooth. same sumo, same shravan, that we didn't realize what just happened. only after re-reading for few times, after reading about their daughter, words like Biwi I confirmed that we changed periods..😃😃 u r awesome ... how did you manage to put that transformation at that point, I mean, when sumo is about to slip, shravan is expected to be beside her and then she was in dream and same shravan is waking her up...the situation is ...superb...Keep writing more like this...am now a fan. 👏

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Naamika

@Naamika

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

This this damn cute saanjh. Sumo and her loo 😆. Shravan malhotra is so so handsome yaar . God knows how sumo used to manage at the time of exam.❤️

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pisces17

@pisces17

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Hi Sanjh,

Who would have thought that Nature's call would become the basis of such a sweet, cute and lovely OS...😃

it was beautiful...

awaiting to read more...

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Arey kya story hai yaar!!!

Excellent writing!!!!

Bhan gaya aaj mera dhin...

Expecting more such stories from you!!!

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

It's hilarious.. Very well written..

Wondering what could have happened after Sumo tripped.

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Its beautiful baby sooo cute... Well aisi b kuch bimari hoti hai...

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AnOptimist

@AnOptimist

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Why do u think this one is crap, Sanjh???

It was wonderful !!! 😆

I'm feeling so good after reading this...all sunday's boriyat is gone. Credit goes to u 😃

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Hey buddy...
Lovely writeup dear... 😊
Unique thought n amazing writing style... 👏
ShraMan met in an awesome way... 😆
And what a twist in the end...!!
So their daughter is also like Sumo... 😆
Wonderful os buddy...
Enjoyed it immensely...!!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: pritiyerne
OMG this so hilarious🤣...all the time i was laughing like idiot "potty problem"🤪
and that was a dream, and morning convo so cute yaar❤️...amazing

Thank you so much...

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