Arranged Marriage - OS - Page 5

Hey Sanjh,
So sorry to be the last one to comment till now, but was very busy for the whole last week. Was organizing a very important family event. Since you posted this OS, I tried a lot to read it but could only read couple of lines and then got busy again. Finally I completed reading it today and I loved it. From the train ride till the end it was so simple that everyone could relate to it. The way you described the parents talk was amazing, again very relatable. But the end was the master stroke. Out of the park. Completely unexpecting from how your OS was going. Totally loved it. I feel it's not easy to write an OS, I started one "Qubool Hai" but it's getting lengthy, I'll still try to make it an OS not TS, as I want to write one. But you are very good at this type of writing too. Kudos to you my friend. 👏

Lubna.

Its so cute.. Wonderful concept sanjh Mja AA gyi...

Awww. .that was so lovely.

Nice one...!!!

Haha, this was amazing!

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Haha...this is samajhdari waala plan...literally 😆

Bin kuch kahe bin kuch suney. !! Smartness! !

Sumo already on top berth n Shravan entered...yet he gets a perfect view...height benefits!!Embarrassed

I very different Os! Really liked it!

Originally posted by: srividyasubbu1

Hi Sanj,

It was a cute little story. Loved it. Especially priyas character.

- Sri

Originally posted by: Safire

Yeah,i was not expecting it! But hats off to your imagination!!!!

I loved it

Thank you for the PM!!!!

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Juju... 🤗This was totally unexpected yaar... 👏

When she said ke he was staring at me I was like kuch Toh gadbad hai... 😲But then it vanished away from mah mind as it progressed...

And at last when nimmo said we want u both to get married I was like is she gone mad..?? 😕😆

Abhi Toh thik se baat bhi nahi ke and she wants to get them married??

But last SHOCK..!!! Bone crushing hug!! OMG😊

I just shouted and mah daddy gave me such a bad stare...

Loved it totally yaar... Bechara Shravu... Control kiya itna... 😆

Do keep giving such fluffs dea...

Love,

Zehrili Chidiya 😳😉

P. S_ thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Wow it's a surprise.

When I read the title i imagined something else. And as I was reading and they didn't even talk to each other i was like maybe it's a TS , chemistry develop hone me waqt lagega. But when nirmala said that they want shraman married , i was shocked. And Shravan's heart piercing stares and that bone-crushing hug are just

Please keep writing more fluff stuffs like this and thanks for the pm.

Love

Madhu