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Swarnima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Such a lovely piece...I truly and utterly adored it

I can totally imagine the scared and Over-protective husband Shravan turned into post her announcement.

Beautifully penned.
Wish to read more from you soon.

Thank you for commenting dear.

Will surely write try to write more.

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Swarnima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: deltadawn
Happy New Year!!
Wonderfully sweet. Waise I feel so connected to these two imaginary beings that now I have nervous butterflies. After your cute littke story ki hey ram sab thik ho!! 😆

Nicely penned dear.

Thank you dear

If you go by me then you have nothing to worry about coz I, a hopeless sucker of happy endings, would say that in the end the couple was blessed with a baby daughter

Don't daughters suit handsome papas!

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Swarnima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv
Firstly wishing you a very Happy Newyear.
Coming to the update, it's soo nice. Even imagining over- protective Shravan is soo cute. Do write more
Love
Madhu

Thank you dear

Glad you found them relatable

Shall definitely try to write more

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Swarnima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Namiksfan
Hey swarnima...first of all a very happy new year and this was an brilliant os. ..loved it completely ...a different but lovely concept ...write more of them please..😊
Love,
Dolly

Thank you Dolly dear

Glad you liked it

Surely try writing more

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Swarnima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Hi Swarnima... Happy New Year to u ...

It was really amazing piece...

Shravan is overprotective when it comes about Sumo... But Sumo is positive that nothing goes wrong till she has Shravan by her side... Pushkar always Laxman to his Bhaiyya & Babhi...

Thank You...

Vinu

Thank you for commenting Vinu

Glad that you noticed the part that Sumo was willing to the risk only because she had him as an assurance that nothing could go wrong.

What a lovely way to describe Pushkar's relation with them!

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

wow

that was amazing

absolutely loved it

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Nik03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Hey dear...
That was wonderful...really loved it!!

Sumo went London with Shravan to support him ...
Exactly what we wanted to see in the show...

Protective n scared Shravan for his Sumo.. 😳
"We are complete"...It was just ❤️

Loved n enjoyed reading it dear...!!
Love
Nik

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Lubna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hi Swarnima,

Loved it. Very well written. Wow, you clearly expressed Sumo's desire and longing for the baby and Shravan's resistance because of his love for Sumo. I loved it when she said "we are pregnant". That was the best part for me. 👏

Lubna.